Rebirth: It’s Like Flowing Water
: no change
Written, but not well written.
So... leave it there for now, get up tomorrow and see if you can change it.
Recently, I have written a lot, breaking through the limit, and it is not far from Super Saiyan.
The writing is not good, but it's not that the state is gone. I think I can squeeze it a little more.
Mainly, for the handling of some details, I ignored it when I conceived the plot before, and I didn't think too well. After I wrote it, I found that it was a bit wrong.
The text is fine and interesting, but it doesn't help the staged plot. Then there's no need to post it.
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In addition, I would like to thank the leader of [Amaterasuyue Reading 2856] for their support.
The boss is very interesting!
Yes!
I originally planned to write more to express my gratitude.
It turned out to be pulled across... lol.
Add another day.
I would also like to thank [Anonymous Big Dog] for another reward!
The boss makes a fortune....
Yes!
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