Rebirth of Xiangjiang - 1978

In fact, the script they wrote looks quite satisfactory, and there is nothing too bad.

And according to the script they wrote, you can make more stars reveal your face.

But Lin Daoqiu's reaction at this time was in Wen Yan's view. He must be very dissatisfied with this script, so he would show this look.

After that for a long time, Wen Yan couldn't think of it. Where did there be Lin Daoqiu dissatisfied?

"Brother Qiu, in fact, I don’t know where it is not good, you spared me."

After thinking for a long time, Wen Yan still lowered his head silently.

Lin Daoqiu also knew that Wen Yan should not guess his thoughts, otherwise he would not be so embarrassed.

In fact, if you watch this way, this scene is pretty good, but there are many places that make Lin Daoqiu dissatisfied. The most prominent point is that Jackie Chan finally became the boss of the hall.

And there is no description of the police force, which is a bit uncomfortable. After all, the police team can also arrange a lot of stars.

In addition, somehow made Arols become the boss, and there was no arrangement of the plot, and it was hard. It seemed that everything was logical. This is also a place where Lin Daoqiu felt dissatisfied.

"Since you can't see it, let me talk about it. First, Alon has rejected them before they want to mix on the road, but in the end, they became the boss, and there was no arrangement in the middle process. Do you think it is appropriate?"

Lin Daoqiu went on to say: "Second, the setting of the police team should be added, so many stars can be arranged, and there is the most important point. Jackie Chan cannot be the boss.

Remove. "

At this time, Xiangjiang's film market became more and more popular. Like the last life, the people on the Tao have begun to reach out.

If this kind of thing is still preached in the movie, wouldn't it make the people watching the movie feel that the people on the Tao were the people on the Tao. This was definitely unwilling to see Lin Daoqiu.

After listening to Lin Daoqiu's three men, Huang Baiming nodded in again and again.

After all, the common problems of the screenwriter and director of Xiangjiang, how to get rid of it, do not consider the arrangement of the plot, and the logic is not particularly fancy. In the end, what is taken always makes people feel a little bit lacking.

This time dozens of screenwriters participate in the writing of this play, it will inevitably occur this situation. Lin Daoqiu understands this.

However, if such a script wants to pass its own review, it is absolutely impossible.

"Mr. Lin is assured that when we go back, we will revise the script according to what you just said."

Huang Baiming heard it clearly just now, and he also felt that there were indeed a lot of problems in this script.

"In addition, this play is not suitable for using the blueprint of" Seventy -two Tests "to play your imagination, don't need any restrictions."

At the beginning, the reason why the "Seventy -two Tests" was set up because the screenwriters were so noisy at the time, no one would accept anyone, and everyone's opinions were almost left.

Lin Daoqiu had to give them a topic and play according to this topic. In this case, everyone will not have so many differences.

If so, it seems that the effect is really good, but there are still some small problems, but this is not a big deal.

The most important thing is that after watching the script after watching the script, Lin Daoqiu felt that he continued to use "Seventy -two Tests" as a blueprint. It seemed a bit too limited to their imagination, so let them let go of it to write.

After all, how these screenwriters have cooperated for a while, as long as they are modified according to what they say, there should not be too much problems in the final script.

"Mr. Lin, please rest assured. I will meet immediately after I go back. Then your opinion tells everyone that I believe there should be no big problems this time."

For Huang Baiming, compared to him, he looked confident at this time.

In fact, it is not difficult to write this script, but in the process of writing, they ignored a lot of things. Fortunately, the person who reviewed the script was Lin Daoqiu, so he gave it out.

"In addition, the heroine of this drama, I recommend Mei Yanfang to perform. After all, at the nightclub, there must be no less song and dance. A MUI must have no problem. This is my recommendation. How can I decide in the end?"

When Lin Daoqiu was watching the script just now, this image of Alon knew that it was tailor -made for Jackie Chan. He didn't think there was anything wrong.

And the nightclub dance girl Afang, although I can't see too much, Lin Daoqiu always feels that these guys should be written according to Mei Yanfang. In this case, let Mei Yanfang perform well.

"Since it is Mr. Lin's opinion, I will consider it carefully."

Huang Baiming smiled. In fact, when writing the script, almost all the screenwriters of Afang had unanimously determined that they should let Mei Yanfang perform.

Fortunately, this time I went to the number with Lin Daoqiu, otherwise Huang Baiming may be in a dilemma.

"If I didn't guess it was wrong, you should find Jackie Chan to perform, right?"

Huang Baiming nodded. About the role of Arol, I knew who wrote it for.

But at this time, Lin Daoqiu's face suddenly showed a surprised expression.

"So, do you want to find Hong Jinbao to play, right?"

In this play, Ba Ye is a big villain, cruel and unbelievable, which is completely different from the characters played before Hong Jinbao.

Asked by Lin Daoqiu like this, Huang Baiming immediately showed an embarrassing expression.

In fact, Baoye's scene was not written by him, but Wen Yan and Zheng Danrui were responsible.

At that time, when writing the plot of the villain, Wen Yan and Zheng Danrui volunteered to stand up and said that they had to take this plot to write themselves.

Huang Baiming saw that they were so enthusiastic at first, and the two were the confidants in Lin Daoqiu's confidant, so they agreed without thinking about it.

Unexpectedly, the plot they wrote in the end is pretty good, but the problem lies in the name of this character, Baoye.

Huang Baiming knew at a glance that Wen Yan and Zheng Danrui must have grabbed the plot of the villain to write.

"Brother Qiu, I think Hong Jinbao is very suitable for this scene, and if so arranged in this way, he and Jackie Chan can have opponents. In addition, this play is a big villain, and there are many plays. I believe Brother Hong will not refuse."

Wen Yan and Zheng Danrui wrote like this, which intentionally made Hong Jinbao embarrassing. If he refused to perform, once it was spread out, then they could be optimistic about the show.

When Lin Daoqiu listened to Wen Yan, he immediately guessed that Bao's play must have something to do with Wen Yan, and it may even be written by him.

"This character Hong Jinbao is not suitable, change person to play."

Lin Daoqiu flew the Xiao Jiujiu in Wen Yan and Zheng Danrui's heart.