Rebirth, Starting from 2005

After Chen Li finished the first chapter, he started writing the second chapter.

What is the content of the second chapter? Yan Xin had already chatted with him. He was thinking about how to write it when he was at work during the day, and he already had the details in his mind.

At this moment, it is not difficult to express the things that have been brewing in words.

In the first chapter, he still hasn't changed his bad habit of writing novels, so there are many things that need to be revised.

When I was writing the second chapter, I didn't do those extravagant things, I just used the simplest words to express what I wanted to express, and the writing was very smooth.

The keyboard was clicked by him, and in less than an hour, the second chapter was coded out, with a total of more than 3,000 words.

Then ask Yan Xin to check if there is any problem.

At this time, there were not so many people in the Internet cafe, and many seats were vacant. Yan Xin sat next to him and slept on the table for more than half an hour.

Woke up by him, rubbed his face, and went to check the content again.

After reading it again, I praised it:

"Yes, this chapter is well written. It seems that what you lack is not writing skills, but a correct thinking about online writing."

In this chapter, Chen Li writes the protagonist's emotions quite well, with the confusion of traveling to this different world, the depression after being ridiculed, and the young blood who refuses to admit defeat, the person who gave Yan Xin to him The design is portrayed, and the sense of substitution is full.

The setting of Dou Qi Continent is not procrastinated, allowing readers to understand the world view of this novel without feeling long and boring.

The last broken chapter is also explained by him on purpose, and the broken chapter where the ring appears again can arouse the readers' sense of expectation.

Of course, for an author of web articles, it’s good to do this once in a while, to stretch and follow up.

Always breaking chapters like this is still very degrading, and it will make readers curse while reading.

After watching it once, watch it a second time.

I still found a few places that made him feel that he was using too much force, and asked Chen Li to modify it.

These were all small problems, and Chen Li solved them in a few minutes.

Seeing the efficiency of his revisions, Yan Xin also confirmed that this guy really has the ability to write, but he just went the wrong way.

This chapter was finalized, but Yan Xin didn't let Chen Li publish it immediately.

Now that the first chapter is under review, there is no point in posting the second chapter.

Moreover, the update volume of online articles is generally not large, especially in the new issue, and there is no problem updating a chapter.

The second chapter is there.

Seeing him yawning while talking, Chen Li said:

"You're sleepy, go back to sleep, I'll try to write two more chapters, and you'll come back to Zhangyan after get off work tomorrow."

"Two more chapters?" Yan Xin was taken aback. "It's already past three o'clock in the morning, and you still have to code two more chapters. Are you going to die?"

Chen Li said with a smile: "Now I am very passionate about creation, and I am in a good state. I can't sleep even when I go back. Why don't I write two more chapters."

"Don't fight like this. Your brain can take it, but your liver may not. Let's not rush." ​​Yan Xin advised.

In her previous life, Yan Xin developed liver cancer because of delivering food to two or three o'clock in the morning every day.

He didn't want Chen Li to become like this.

Chen Li didn't take it seriously. He was only twenty years old now, and he was in good health. He didn't think that staying up all night would make him sick.

However, he also knew that Yan Xin had good intentions, so he said, "That's fine, I'll write another chapter and then go back to rest."

He also added an explanation: "The main reason is that after listening to your words, I feel suddenly enlightened and inspired. It's too uncomfortable not to write it out."

Yan Xin thought about it for a while. With his hand speed, one chapter took less than an hour. After finishing coding, it was over four o'clock, and he went to work at three o'clock in the afternoon. There was still enough rest time, so he didn't persuade him any more.

He couldn't hold it anymore, and didn't want to hold it any longer, so he chose to go back to the dormitory to sleep.

The next day, when he woke up, it was already past eleven o'clock in the morning, and he slept soundly this time.

When he got up, he saw that Chen Li was lying on the bed and fast asleep.

Seeing that it was time for dinner, he woke him up:

"Chen Li, it's time to get up and eat."

Chen Li woke up, looking very confused:

"What time will you call me?"

"At half past eleven, it's time for dinner. It's time to eat after washing up." Yan Xin said.

"Oh..." Chen Li responded.

He tried hard to open his eyes, but closed them again, and said:

"I'm a little sleepy. I don't want to eat now. Go to the canteen and make a meal for me. I'll eat later."

Yan Xin thought that this guy fell asleep much later than himself, and maybe he was really sleepy now, so he responded and went to wash his face and brush his teeth first.

When I came back, I saw Chen Li fell asleep again, snoring.

Shaking his head, he thought to himself: "This guy is too hardworking."

Feeling a little guilty.

I hope this book can become a hit, otherwise I am really sorry for this young man.

I went to the cafeteria to eat, and after the meal, I signed an autograph for Chen Li, packed a lunch box for him, and stated that I signed it on my behalf.

Carrying the lunch box back to the dormitory, it was past twelve o'clock, and Chen Li was still soundly asleep.

Wake him up and let him eat, Chen Li said "Just put it there, I will eat later", and then fell asleep again.

It seems that the baby is really tired.

Seeing Chen Lisun in such a state, Yan Xin felt embarrassed. He took out his notebook and thought hard about the classic web articles he had read in those years. received this book.

Not all cool bridges can be transferred, but it still needs to match the character design of this novel.

He has read online articles for several years, read them in the dark, read a lot, and remembered a lot of bridges.

Now it is there to filter the content that can be transplanted.

How to transplant it and at which node it needs to be carefully considered.

After one o'clock in the afternoon, Chen Li finally woke up. Seeing Yan Xin writing and drawing in a notebook, he asked:

"Brother, what are you writing?"

Yan Xin glanced at him: "I'm perfecting some details."

There is very little content on the notebook. For a big plot that can accommodate dozens of chapters, the keywords that fall on the paper are only a few dozen words.

Ordinary people can't understand it.

But Chen Li is the writer of this novel, and he also heard Yan Xin tell the overall structure of the story, so he can understand it a little bit.

Although I don't fully understand it, I feel very powerful.

There are other people in the dormitory, and it is not easy to discuss this matter, but I feel emotional:

"He already understands so much, and still works so hard. No wonder he has such a deep understanding of web literature! There are so many geniuses in web literature in this world, it's just that some people are working hard where you can't see it."

"I must write this novel well, otherwise how can I be worthy of the creativity he worked so hard for?"