Shao Song

　　 I apologize to everyone at the beginning.

There was an omission in the previous chapter, mainly for the purpose of making up the big and small defenses and getting confused...According to the resumes of the military commanders in these imperial camps, basically only Xin Xingzong is qualified to be a defensive agent, and everyone else, including Wang De. It's not enough... The main thing is that the work and rest are reversed these days. When I started writing, my mind was confused, and it actually made Yaojun and the military attache 53rd. In fact, there is a great correlation... I apologize to everyone. It has been revised.

　　 But this mistake is too ridiculous, it belongs to the hard-to-fail, so I apologize to everyone.

Speaking of, a famous author who was going to write about the Southern Song Dynasty asked me yesterday, besides the official dictionary of the Song Dynasty, what else can make people understand the official system of the Song Dynasty. His brain hurts when he looks at the dictionary... I said you found it, divide me After a wave, my brain hurts too.

Back to the topic.

In other words, since the epidemic, my parents have been trapped in the small one-bedroom apartment I rented in Beijing. They were planning to leave after the Chinese New Year and they still have no hope of leaving. The first few days were fine, but now both parties Both are a little irritable. Who sees who is not pleasing to the eye... In this case, the two sides have a great influence on each other, and I happened to upload a new book, and then I started to work remotely these days, so it is obviously a bit difficult, and the work and rest in recent days have been even more troublesome. Inverted, exhausted, and some obvious low-end errors and omissions appeared in the codewords.

　　 Putting aside this ill-fated injury, and looking back, I feel that my recent writing has lost its charm by the squeeze of life.

　　What is the charm of words... To be honest, it is different from many big guys who just talk about it with one mouth. I am a person who is not good at summarizing. Basically, I just open the document and just do it. Just write in jb.

　　 But this time, it may be because of another episode of "Bing Guo" in the middle of the night. It is rare for me to have a little extra insight. I will share it with you.

The charm of 　　 text certainly includes many things.

But for online essays, the first one is naturally an excellent plot and personality... A good story and brilliant characters are the foundation of a novel. The story is well written and the characters stand up, regardless of the subject matter and type. No matter what the chaotic golden chapters or obscure subjects, the novel will naturally stand out.

　　 A novel with a wonderful plot is wonderful, and the characters are pleasing to be pleasing. Add a piece, then it can be said that a well-written novel is a well-written one.

　　 This is the king's way, it is the thing that determines the basic height of a novel, so naturally it does not need to be said.

　　 And the plot and characters are very interesting, here regardless of the order, feel free to talk about... such as the theme.

Due to the need for a sense of substitution, the themes of web articles may mostly be the growth and strength of individuals, but it does not mean that you cannot put what an author wants to express into this seemingly scarce tone. This thing may even be unconscious. But because of the special relationship between the text and the author, it finally appeared in the whole work.

It’s like many people ridicule "Battle Break Sphere" and think how low-end it is, but in fact, in my opinion, when a potato uses millions of words, it will be "Thirty Years in the East and 30 Years in the Hexi, Do not deceive the young 'After this sentence that seems to be a bit vulgar now is put in place, this book has his ideological value...For junior high school students and high school students, this thing will never go out of style.

　　You are not a high school student anymore, you are mature, but there is no need to look down on the immature high school student now, because that is what you used to be.

　　 Therefore, the book Dou Po has its own brilliant thinking, and it is extremely kingly.

Then I will talk about my own copy of "Fuhan". To be honest, based on my previous experience and experience in Korean entertainment, I was shocked to have that result... the whole person is floating... and then I too I have thought about it, why is there a high evaluation that is beyond my expectation? Obviously there is so hypocritical behind, obviously the routine is sparse, and the plot is out of control several times in the middle.

　　 After thinking about it, what I am most satisfied with is that I have maintained respect for a considerable number of historical figures in "Fu Han".

　　 Speaking of this, someone must be upset, because the dung killed Lu Bu, it didn't respect him... But in fact, I always think that this is also a kind of respect, just like the death of Cao Cao, the death of Sun Jian, and the death of Liu Bei.

　　 First of all, we must make sure that death is also a kind of respect, and the author respects a character, which is not the same as respect for the character in the plot. The two have nothing to do.

The author respects a character, especially a character with historical archetypes. It is not for you to hold him and offer him a good ending, but to combine his actions in the novel with his historical image and give him a There should be results... So first of all, we must understand that Cao Cao, Sun Jian, Liu Bei, Lu Bu, and even Zhou Yu, these people who have ambitions and have **** reasons to die are a kind of respect for their lives. .

　　 There is no such complicated position as Zhang Fei. It is an insult to force certain characters to survive!

　　 Specifically, Cao Cao is the closest character to the protagonist on a political level. He has complete thoughts and clear ambitions. When he reaches the end of the road and recognizes the reality, he should stand straight and die!

　　Sun Jian was originally chaotic, but because the protagonist changed the thought form of the whole world and made him aware of the immorality and even inferiority of his actions, then he should struggle to die!

Liu Bei is the protagonist’s little brother, an ambitious man and Yanzhao ranger, and as a prince, what he did is worthy of the ups and downs he has led, so he should have no regrets, and then take A trace of rebellion and cooperation, just like a wanderer going to die when he meets his family!

　　 In the end, Liu Bei was in Han Dang's arms. Isn't it just the behavior of a rebellious child who went out to make trouble?

And Lu Bu, I admit that this method of dung killing is beyond the rational line of some readers, but let me write again, I will still let him die in the toilet, and then give him a jar of wine at most, and let him drown in the wine, the so-called Drunk lives and dreams of death, stink for thousands of years

　　 The hero of a man should die as a man. This has nothing to do with his interests and the protagonist. With his personality and historical image there, he does not deserve a higher-end method of death.

　　 It's a bit like justifying myself...

Turning back to thinking about things like this in "Fu Han", some people on Zhihu mentioned the "compassion" towards history. At the same time, some people said that I have a kind of "sorrowful" sense of humor about history. I think In fact, it's the same thing... It's all respect, compassion should be compassionate, and bitterness should be bitter. It's all respect for history. This is not a conflict.

　　 Trying to do the best possible (of course the ability is extremely limited, and it is easy to make mistakes), to respect history and historical figures, is probably a simple idea of ​​the historical novel "Fuhan".

　　 In addition to a little suspenseful thought, there are other things that are easier to understand... such as atmosphere.

The so-called atmosphere, everyone must understand that the end of the world has the cruelty of the end, the dystopian absurdity of cyberpunk, the heaviness of history, the sense of the times in the city, and the burst of imagination is what the continent needs. Xianxia has a sense of elegance, and there are displays of regional characteristics and so on... Here is especially a point of view. I always think that the mortal stream that occupies half of the country is not the so-called Xianxia, ​​it is a kind of dystopia. The Orientalization of Cyberpunk... Don't care about the family.

And since history is mentioned here, I especially want to praise and recommend the author of July, which is the new show of July. The advantage of being born in July is too great. His book has a unique sense of history. Isn’t it true? It needs to be shaped by some deliberate words.

In comparison, the craftsmanship in the text in my novels is too obvious... For example, in the last book, in order to highlight the sense of the late Han Dynasty, I kept using the people. Many people looked at it, but I couldn’t help it. Really limited hard skills, too little vocabulary, I don’t need this, I don’t know how to write it, this book is also official, Zeyi, but... But the big guys know that some of them may be changed. If you say it, I’ll just However, some are restricted by basic abilities, but they want to change but have no ability to change.

　　 I also want to raise my hand and write if there is a god, the monk knocks on the moon to come down, but I really don't have this ability.

Let me say another one, Ji Cha... The atmosphere is not classified as precisely based on the starting point. Some classifications do not dare to start from the starting point. Ji Cha’s female characters are a must-see... Looking at other novels, you will feel abrupt and absurd for meat dramas. , But here, Ji Cha, when you read it, you will think why it is so strict now that the author is not allowed to sublimate these two people in a fierce meat show?

　　 So what is there other than the characters, stories, thoughts, and atmosphere?

　　 There is also sensory stimulation... this need not be shy away, and there is no need to say too much. It is only natural that text can give sensory stimulation.

　　 After the sensory stimulation?

　　 What about all of these? Simple words are like a white cloth for painting... Can words only show a certain charm?

　　 I think it is also possible.

It's like the animation "Bing Guo", I highly respect it, but you want me to say that it is particularly brilliant, I can't tell, or I am too lazy to introduce those things...because I like "Bing Guo", I like it. It's just that this animation is as plain as water and white as clouds, it feels like flowing water.

　　Are you aware of it?

　　 Plain water~www.wuxiaspot.com~ The clear clouds, flowing like clouds and flowing water, will give people a sense of enjoyment.

　　 So how does the text flow?

　　 First of all, the structure is exquisite.

　　 In a well-structured text, the dialogues of the characters, the description of the environment, the popularization of science, and the comments, these things should be perfectly combined...

　　 Then there is a rich vocabulary.

　　 Finally, the sentence structure is well-proportioned, unbiased and undistorted, and the words are precise and without omission.

　　 In short, to achieve these three points will never make readers feel irritable and boring, and constructing plots, depicting characters, and mixing thoughts on this kind of text is an enjoyable process.

　　 And this kind of text can ensure that you ensure the lower limit of your text in the trance period and exhaustion period... In the daily update state, the quality of web text is inevitably uneven.

　　 And I continue to recommend two people here-Young Woman Bai and Haidilao, that is, sleeping white and seawalker. From my personal point of view, I feel that the writing of these two people is extremely brilliant.

　　Of course, the characterization of these two people, the plot pull, the era and the regional atmosphere, are also remarkable... But I praise them here, just because I feel the charm of their text foundation, so I recommend it here.

Finally, I was wondering why I would like "Bing Guo" so much, and then admire these authors... The reason is very simple, their things are what I want to have, precisely because I can't do this, and I am eager for these things. , So I really appreciate it.

　　 It's dawn, it's time to go to bed, good night everyone... Wish me enough sleep, and wish you all good spirits.

　　 I can’t sleep at night after coding, I watched a few episodes of anime essays late at night and wrote until dawn. You can just read it wherever you want, and don’t worry about it this time.