Spiritual Energy Restored: I Rely On Shopping To Ruin The City Of Ma Do

I was going to break it before.,This chapter was originally a notice of breaking.。

But as soon as the update was broken, there were many readers to encourage it, so after the update was resumed, the notice of this chapter was abolished.

I can't delete it, so I can only put it here for the author to gossip.

Tomato is a free platform, and newcomers like me can earn a cup of milk tea money, basically generating electricity for love.

So, the first time I wrote a book, I humbly accepted comments that made sincere suggestions. If it is controversial, I will also reply to the discussion with a good attitude.

As for the scolding ones, if the scolding is right, I will not reply by default, and please stop if you don't make your money.

It's not like that at all, I blame the author for not understanding Sha Bing, I'm not used to it, I should reply to it, and report it when I should report it. Not a penny was given, and there was no obligation to suffer from the gas of Smoothie.

Because I don't know how thick the sky is, so the book was originally planned to be written to a million words, and the plot in the early stage is slow, but now I don't plan to write it that long, I just want to finish it as soon as possible.

In addition, the audience positioning of this book is somewhat inaccurate, the author is inexperienced, and listens to everyone's words, which leads to a bit of confusion in the later plot focus.

Some people say that it's too bland, the collision is not enough, and the emotions of the characters are not prominent, so I will add a bloody plot, and some people think that there are too many supporting roles and the protagonist is not prominent, so I will add drama to the protagonist. Some people think that the protagonist is immoral, so I added too many psychological descriptions and detailed explanations.

In the end, it was found that the book was written and written, and it had long deviated from the original outline.

Originally, I wanted to write a group portrait plot, describing the rise of each supporting character after gaining extraordinary power, and each of them will become a pioneer of a certain system, setting off a whole wave of aura revival with points and faces (as you can see, some were written to death by me, and some were dismantled by me).

And the heroine is only laid out behind the scenes, with few subdivisions, and basically only plays the role of connecting the main line. But I have been scolded for having no sense of existence and being too ordinary, so I had to add drama to the heroine and brush up on her sense of existence. After adding the play, I was scolded by people who really like behind the scenes.,It's not good to do things behind the scenes.,What do you want the heroine to come out for?

The whole process is very much left and right and not human.,This is probably a lack of experience.,I want to satisfy everyone.,The result is written as four dislikes.。

In fact, it is enough to meet the target customers, but there are too few people who read my book, there are too few book reviews, and the sample size is small, so I really can't tell which ones are really in line with the positioning of readers' comments and which ones are noises.

When I was full of 200,000 words, I saw that there was a test to change the title of the book, and I felt that after changing the title of the book, the readers who attracted it were even more confused.

Now, I'm in a semi-abandoning state of this book, it's not really what I want to build, it's just for the sake of a beginning and an end, and the Buddha system is renewed.

The original plan was to fully revive the aura in more than a hundred chapters, and it was almost possible to start conquering the sea of stars, but now the main line is a bit biased, and if you want the story to turn around without being abrupt, you can only spend more chapters to go back.

I don't want to fill some of the pits that I buried before, as long as it doesn't affect the main line, I can cut it. The plot of the follow-up conquest on the other side of the starry sky will also be greatly reduced, because some plots are intended to be reserved for new books on other platforms, so they will not appear in this one.

There's no way to be top-heavy, anyway, this book has been going on for nearly half a month because of my own work, and basically no one is reading it anymore.

I'm sorry to show you the worst technique.,I'm sorry to show you the first practice of writing.,I'll probably continue to trial and error in Tomato in the future.,But I won't be stupid to write so much before I find a problem.。 If the data is not good, I will cut it as soon as possible and wait until it is qualified.