Start playing with the world from Suqing

Chapter 597

Those who can read this chapter are loyal readers.

Thank you for your love of this

book!(. People . )!!!

give you a knock on the readers!

Readers_(:彡"∠)_

You can follow my account and wait for the next book to be released.

I wanted to continue writing, but after all, it hasn't reached a million words.

It wasn't until I saw a reader's comment that I was deeply moved that I made up my mind to finish.

The comment goes something like this:

It's really... A crazy journey~

Looking at Aoki's story from the perspective of an observer...

Crazy!

Madness!

and... Joy?

haha~

It's not joy, it's just burning your passion for the world.

The above is the comment of the reader [Fan Mi Tongtian].

This comment is a summary of the journey of the protagonist [Aoki].

It's very apt, I can't even think of such a good summary

!Let's give [Fanmi Tongtian] a knock!

_|\○_ [Fanmi Tongtian

] [Gu Qingcheng] crossed for the first time, arrived at the Sea Tiger World, was polluted by the power of the magnetic field, and slowly activated the power of the magnetic field to rotate.

But because of the wonderful influence of the power of the magnetic field, the complete personality of [Gu Qingcheng] was split.

It is divided into three, the superego, the id, and the true self.

The one who controls the body is [Ego Aoki].

The story of the whole book is the story of Aoki, who slowly awakens to the magnetic field and turns, slowly goes crazy, and has obvious self-destructive tendencies in the back.

Finally, he touches the ultimate, completes his personality, and blasts out his fists that turn madness into a million horses.

At this time, Aoki was complete and normal.

Then, return to the world at the beginning of the story [Suqing], this world of sand sculpture joy.

It's actually good to end at this time.

It is possible to continue writing later, but here's the problem... It's not that [the protagonist Aoki]'s enthusiasm is exhausted.

The crux of the problem is that the enthusiasm of [Author: She Shanjiao] has been exhausted.

Also, Aoki, who has become normal, is no longer qualified as a magnetic field maniac.

He is goldfished

! The author is also goldfished! The

follow-up world copy must choose a world with a wide audience, but most of the copyrights with a wide audience are at a certain point.

Western movies and novel games can be chosen, such as Marvel, DC, Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter, etc.

Riman One Piece, Hokage, and Death, but I've only seen the Hokage.

Can you write

, but you can only write a little, and it's hard to write interestingly.

The force value has exploded to this stage, and there is no strong opponent behind him, what can he write

? Drive a big

car and shoot a big car? The current environment is not the time for the rise of online articles, and Uncle Xiao Huang is the target of a severe crackdown.

So you can only wipe the edges, and you can only wipe a little.

This copy of the Hokage has already been modified, so it's not appropriate to write it again.

The current protagonist is too powerful, too prescient.

There are no restrictions, there is no way to set up a dilemma and then live.

What do you think is

the best stage of a book? The early, middle, and late stages of the protagonist's fortune?

I have always thought that the early stage is the best.

When the protagonist is at the end of his life, he encounters all kinds of people and difficulties, and finds ways to solve them to gain strength, treasures, exercises, love, and friendship.

In the later stages, the protagonist plumps up, but it is difficult to write more interesting.

This book is the author's second book and the first to be recognized.

The previous book was a practice pen, dead on the street, something that I didn't see.

There are also quite a few shortcomings in this book, and I have summarized quite a few.

For example:

1. [Jojo Volume] In order to restore the classics, I forcibly wrote a plot without the participation of the protagonist.

The original intention was to let people who hadn't read the original book understand the background.

But I ignored one point, that is, the same humanities and all astronomy should take [the reader has read the original book] as a prerequisite.

Writing too much about the original plot is like doing it too much.

It is not that you can't introduce the background, but you need to introduce the background concisely and clearly.

I made a big mistake, I used 4,000 words to introduce it, and I feel stupid to think about it.

Readers who read the same people have generally read the original book.

The astronomy is more difficult.

Because there are so many worlds, many people don't necessarily see them.

The first world copy has been seen, and the second world copy may not have been seen.

Readers want to skip this copy of this world, and then affect the follow-up, the book's grades decline, and slowly only a part of the loyal readers remain.

2. There is also the question of whether it is faithful to the original work.

is too faithful to the original work, so why do you want the protagonist to cross.

Excessive magic changes and adding elements, some people can't accept it.

The control of the character's personality is also a technical job, and it is easy to have problems.

3. There is also the fusion of various worldviews and extraordinary powers, and if you don't have enough knowledge of these power systems, it is easy to make people laugh if you don't write them well.

Regarding the convergence of power systems, I think what I wrote is okay.

It mainly rotates the magnetic field and refines the qi, and melts other things into it.

It's just fun!

I'm a Western fantasy, fantasy, cultivating immortals, science fiction, special abilities, urban, and Uncle Xiaohuang all kinds of themes, and I don't taboo it at all.

Except for the terrifying spirit, that one is really unsightly.

I can't sleep at night after reading it, and I always feel like I have a bloody face facing you when I open my eyes.

There are things under the bed, on the ceiling, outside the window, next to the bed, sharing the same bed, walking at night.

4. The level of driving still needs to be improved.

How to put it....

You want to drive, but you can't explicitly drive, you have to do it another way.

The first time I wrote about driving, it was in the form of a fantasy bloody battle.

There are several ways to write in the back, what kind of car maintenance, old farmer farming.

5. There is actually a big problem with the JOJO volume, and that is the style.

I forcibly wrote it in JOJO's tough guy style, which was directly separated from the sand sculpture style in front of me.

As a result, there are many readers who abandon the book in this part, which directly makes my book not up.

So, a book should be kept in a good style and tone.

Sure enough, sand sculpture joy is the style that suits me.

The reality is so bitter, if the novel is still bitter, then the reader will not read the novel in vain.

Internet writers are not traditional writers, and Mr. Yu Hua can still keep happiness for himself and sadness for readers.

If an online writer writes like this, unless he is a great god, he will be a dead end.

OK, that's all the nonsense.

Thank you again for seeing the last readers!

(. People .)

apologize to show your breasts, thank you naturally also show your breasts.

I wish you all a better and better life in the future and find your own true happiness.

Finally, a preview of the next book.

[Preview 1]

A three-meter-tall metal coffin suddenly appeared in the room, and the surface of the iron coffin was carved with dragons and tigers.

It looks very nice and... High-tech....

Gu Changqing gasped and looked at the big iron coffin, only to feel that his fate was about to change.

As long as you get closer, a yellow light curtain will appear in front of the iron coffin, and there will be two sentences like this on the light curtain.

"Do you want to be strong?"

"Yes/係/YES/ja/oui/да/はい/..."

Grass!

Ma De, can I choose

"/"? Try!

Excitedly, with trembling hands, Gu Changqing pointed his finger at "/".

......

[Preview 2]

"Moxi Moxi!" "

Are you okay?" The

nice female voice woke Gu Changqing up, and he touched the back of his head in severe pain.

The way of crossing is still so unreliable!