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Chapter 75 Final Thoughts

Rather than listening to Ah Qiu, a desperate author, talk about it, my friends probably want me to read a few more chapters, but the first volume is over, so I feel like I should still say a few words.

Thank you to all the readers who can see this. Thank you for every speech, follow-up reading, vote, and reward.

Thank you for allowing me to get a second round of recommendations. (It would be great if I could get a third round of recommendations~)

Thank you very much.

Next, let’s talk about this book.

The plot of the first volume... actually doesn't have much to say.

To put it too bluntly, it loses its flavor.

Let’s mainly talk about the points that everyone is controversial about.

(1) Personal aspect.

Many readers think that Xu Qiansu and Ma Li are like Watanabe and Qingye in Love Game.

I'm actually secretly happy to be thought of like this, because I'm really trying to learn Lianyou's daily writing style.

It's better to be recognized than to write something that doesn't look like anything else.

Of course, Xu Qiansu is Xu Qiansu, Watanabe is Watanabe, Ma Li is Ma Li, and Qing Ye is Qing Ye. I wrote this just to add some attraction to the first volume.

This book won't go very far if it just uses characters in a vague way.

There will be plots to deepen the image of the male and female protagonists in the future. I hope everyone can say that Ma Li is Ma Li, not just like Qing Ye Shen.

In addition, there are some supporting characters, but everyone thinks they are too stereotyped, with the manager Cattleya killed as a typical example.

This is because my writing skills are weak and I deliberately create something refreshing but not flattering.

Let me study and improve my writing skills in the future.

(2) In terms of painting style.

Many friends think that I write about darkness, and that I am brainless, dark and crippled...

To be honest, after reading the first volume, no one will think so, right?

Neither knives nor darkness are what I want to write about.

What I want to write is a novel that combines Japanese light novels and the warmth of the Pokémon world with logical reality, with a bit of a Jianghu atmosphere and a pyrotechnic atmosphere.

It's just that some scenes may use too much force, and some friends can't accept it. They feel that this kind of thing should not appear when writing elf novels...

The ups and downs of the plot, upon closer inspection, do seem to lack some rationality, but Aqiu thinks that it makes sense after all. (The helplessness of my weak writing skills)

Now it seems that what Aqiu wrote is actually a reality full of romanticism.

Romanticism dominates!

There are so many famous scenes in the first volume, do you think it is romantic or not? (akimbo)

If you think it's pretentious and literary, let's say it differently. I agree, because Aqiu is really just a newcomer.

Not to mention elven literature, there are so many types of good books in Qidian alone. With my writing style and writing style, I think there shouldn’t be too many... right?

(3) Plot aspect.

Everyone should have discovered that this book...has no main plot!!!

Without a main line, there is a lack of expectations and motivation, and the results are bound to not be very good. I understand that.

Not only that, I also deliberately weakened the essential elements of web writing such as monster-killing upgrades and numerical strength.

Even for the final battle of the first volume, I didn’t write any battles or big scenes.

I also thought about introducing a villain who can survive three or four volumes as an enemy in the first volume, with revenge as the main thread in the early and mid-term, and learning about secrets.

I also thought about letting Sister Cang appear on the stage as the climax of the first volume.

But then think about it.

For a while, I already wrote Cuixue's plot that was not in line with the trend of online writing, so I just stopped working on it and didn't think about the results. I just wrote what I wanted to write in the first volume.

Secondly... I think that the core of Pokémon lies in the journey (not that poisonous animation), in meeting various unknown Pokémon, who you meet, and what happens with them, etc.

If you want to write about the taste of Pokémon, you should write a travelogue! (Definitely)

Of course, this is not how web articles should be written.

The facts were not contrary to my wishes. Due to the factors of seeking death, the results were ridiculously poor.

190,000 words, 7,000 collected, 480 follow-up reads...(Failed to read again)

well.

I won’t go into details about my achievements, lest my friends think I’m begging for food from you.

I wonder if everyone knows Ji Da (Ji Cha)?

The leader of the harem stream.

I have been reading online articles for many years, but I have not finished reading many books (because of the increasing homogeneity.).

Ji Da’s books are among the few that I have been able to finish. If you are interested, you can check them out.

He has a fairy tale called "Asking the Red World", which left a deep impression on me.

Because it is also the first volume that is not in line with the trend of online writing and is full of fairy tales and depth.

But in the end, even a master like him had to change his writing style to cater to the market after finishing the first volume because of the poor results of the first volume.

As an author who also needs to eat, I understand him.

But as a reader, I feel sorry for it.

After reading "Inquiry into the Red Dust", I no longer have the slightest interest in the fairy tale novels on the market.

Because most of them are just fighting and killing with new skins.

There is no fairy spirit.

This is also related to personal taste. Please don't scold me, thinking that I am ignorant and have no vision (thank you).

I just share good books with you as a reader.

That's too far.

In short, what I want to say is that as a new writer, I don’t have a lot of writing skills. In terms of quality, this book is not comparable to "Ask the Red Dust".

But I want to continue the writing method of the first volume of this book.

It’s just to give friends who are as aesthetically tired as me a different story to read in the increasingly homogeneous trend of routine writing and novice writing in today’s online writing market.

Although this is bound to be something that a small number of readers like to see.

Although my weak writing skills may not be as good as those novice and routine articles in terms of look and feel.

This book has 190,000 words. Although I haven’t received any news yet, it will definitely be on the shelves. I implore all readers to support it.

(In the end, I was still begging for food).

Thanks again.

Oh, one more thing.

Kirulian will definitely evolve into Gardevoir.

Some friends who cannot accept it can abandon the book.

I don't want to cheat you of your money either.

above.

Thanks again.

(End of chapter)