Starting from playing as a defensive midfielder for Real Madrid

Originally, I didn't want to take leave today, but since I planned to spend two hours at noon to sort out the plot rhythm from the beginning, I have been delaying it until now.

Forgive the foodie for being too horny today.

In the past, I may have been too stubborn because my foodie mentality was not smooth enough, but today it is really because the foodie wants to start over and sort out the plot rhythm of our book.

The foodie ignored a problem.

A big question.

A twist in the plot is necessary, but after moving from Real Madrid to Chelsea, I want to write more about the new teammates, just like I wrote about the Real Madrid teammates before.

But foodies have forgotten that compared to Real Madrid’s stars, are some of Chelsea’s stars really what most book lovers want to know about and are interested in?

I recently read a lot of comments and suggestions from book friends, so I honestly read this book from the beginning.

That's when I discovered this problem.

In the first six to seven hundred thousand words, I wanted to describe more about the team and the growth of the protagonist, and that was no problem.

Because the failure of Mourinho Real Madrid to climb the peak of honor in that era was originally a regret for countless fans.

Or, to take a step back, fans who don’t like that Real Madrid team are at least familiar with stars such as Mourinho, Cristiano Ronaldo, Ramos, and Casillas, and they are more interested in their stories. Be more interested.

At that time, I used the writing method that I was good at to develop the story. The development of the plot was no problem and everyone loved to watch it.

But now, after the little lion has transferred to Chelsea, if I still write like this, many book lovers will find it a bit hard to stand.

This is my problem. The foodie must admit that in the description of the book, when it should focus on the halo of the protagonist, it is wrong. The foodie must apologize to most of the book lovers.

So today, foodies must dig into this corner, not to find a dead end, but to seriously re-examine where the plot started to go wrong, and the writing method was not changed when it was time to change.

This is important to me.

Fortunately, I listened to the advice and read the first thirty chapters again, and then, all I can say is... oh my god! How could I write so well before!

Haha, just kidding, don’t scold me yet!

Comparison before and after, well... foodies also feel that it is a bit tragic, so if there are mistakes, we have to correct them. During this period of time, I myself have always felt that my writing is not very good, and my status is a big problem. To this day, I still have to correct myself. Thinking of a major surgery!

In the last two chapters, I don’t know if the bosses have noticed that the foodie has been slowly adjusting the writing method and the focus of description.

The details of the competition have to be written back first.

The protagonist is now the backbone of Chelsea, but I have to write down how this backbone functions, how to defend, how to seize the opportunity to switch offense and defense, how to shoulder the responsibility to drive the offense, how to appease teammates...

Foodies have actually ignored these things before, they really should be beaten! I would like to express my special thanks to the book lover who brought it up. Thank you very much!

There is also the plot design, which should not be too convoluted or too straightforward. What I write is a novel after all, and it doesn’t matter if the bosses are frustrated or bored by reading it.

So there has to be foreshadowing, there has to be a turning point, and more importantly, it has to be fun!

Although what we are pursuing in this book is not the ultimate coolness, a hat trick or something like that every other chapter, but there still has to be a reasonable level of coolness.

Foodies have been doing poorly in this regard recently. Fortunately, things can still be changed. There are still things that need to be changed. It is not too late to make amends.

Foodies read a lot of advice from big book friends on the way to Peep Screen. Don’t worry, bosses, foodies take note of it. Moreover, if you make a mistake, you will correct it. Our main thing is to listen to advice!

This update just dropped today, so I’d like to give it a thumbs up to all you foodies out there!

Bang bang bang!

I will continue to write detailed outlines and change the plot, and we will definitely update it tomorrow!

At this moment, inspiration is pouring out. Really, the foodie will not know for sure, so he will stay up all night coding again~

I am very grateful to all the big guys who support the foodie and patiently gave advice when the foodie obviously had a problem with his condition. Really, the foodie will keep it in mind!

Thanks again, foodies!