Shiyu Kasumigaoka breathed a sigh of relief, if the other party found out that “that friend” was her…

Although he will not die, he will definitely not want to see Kitami Zegawa in the future.

“My friend… She wrote a light novel…”

“For this light novel, she spent all her time eating, resting, and shopping.”

“Originally, she was confident in what she wrote, but…”

Shiwa Kasumigaoka begins to tell the story of her friends.

During the narration, her sweet and pleasant voice unconsciously lowered.

“But after the release, the Internet was full of bad reviews for this light novel, and the sales were very dismal…”

“The editor said that if it goes on like this, it will be cut off, but this friend of mine she doesn’t want to give up…”

Kitami Sawagawa asked, “So, this friend of yours wants to ask, how can you write a story that satisfies the reader?” ”

Kasumigaoka Shiyu nodded gently.

She is not a full-time writer and has no previous experience writing books.

If Kitami Sawagawa could give her some advice, it would be best.

Kitami Zekawa thought for a while, and took out the game script he had written last night from behind him.

“This is?” Shiwa Kasumigaoka looked at the notebook stretched out suspiciously.

“You look at this first.”

Senior sister took it and opened it curiously.

Then, she immersed herself in the story.

Kitami Zekawa poured a cup of tea from the thermos cup and drank it quietly.

He was also curious about how Shiyu Kasumigaoka would react after reading it.

There was not much content, and the girl watched it for half an hour.

Putting down her notebook, she let out a long breath.

“What do you think?” Kitamizawa put down his teacup and smiled.

“It’s very… Very powerful. Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s face was complicated: “Did you write it?” ”

Kitami Zegawa nodded.

Seeing the other party admit, Shiyu Kasumigaoka felt even stronger frustration in his heart.

Until this moment, she discovered that this junior turned out to be a hidden script master.

In contrast, there is no way to read what she wrote!

“Actually, what you wrote is not so bad…”

Kitami Zegawa has not forgotten his task of unraveling.

“Like I said yesterday, you have to be clear about what story you want to tell.”

“And the main problem is that you want to talk too much and too much, and if you cram it all into one volume, it’s easy to confuse the reader.”

“Yes, yes, yes…” Kasumigaoka Shiwa fiddled with her hair and responded weakly.

Beating herself up, she can’t see the future.

If nothing else, there will be no such person as Shiko Kasumi in the light novel industry in the future.

Seeing this, Kitami Zekawa continued:

“In fact, you just need to change this shortcoming, don’t be impatient, tell the story slowly, at this stage, you mainly want to write the heroine well, and the love metronome… This book is sure to do well. ”

Sick and dying, sit up in shock.

Shiwa Kasumigaoka stood up, her eyes wide, and asked in disbelief

“Wait, didn’t you say that book was useless yesterday?”

“Yesterday?” Kitamizawa waved his hand innocently, “Yesterday I didn’t finish my words, you left.” ”

So, the other party is not a black fan, but their own fans?

Senior Sister Heisi’s body trembled slightly.

Excitement springs up from the bottom of the heart, which is the satisfaction, the excitement that comes from someone identifying with themselves.

At this moment, her eyes were shining, and her red pupils were shining.

This made Kitami Zegawa think… Shining version of Kasumigaoka no Oka Shiba.

“Confirm again, didn’t what I just said comfort me?”

“Of course, I wouldn’t do something so boring.”

“Thank you.”

Shiwa Kasumigaoka sat back in her chair and hid her mood.

After calming down a little, she thought that she might not have to go to great lengths to get a virtual friend out.

I am a light novel writer, and I can tell this junior in front of me.

Junior brother is different, even if he knows his identity, he will not laugh at himself?

No, maybe he has already guessed that he is the identity of the writer!

“Has Senior Sister eaten?” Taking advantage of the gap, Kitagawa Zemi began to solve the lunch meal.

“Nope.” Shiha Kasumigaoka replied subconsciously.

“Give you a sandwich.”

“….. Thank you. ”

Tearing open the package, the soft cherry-colored lips gently bit on the bread, and the girl’s eating was very moving.

After solving lunch, she bent down solemnly to thank her.

“Kitami-kun, thank you.”

With her movements, the plump figure is at a glance.

Kitami Sawagawa couldn’t help but glance at her long legs more.

Shiyu Kasumigaoka raised his head with an inexplicable smile on his face.

She seemed to know Kitami Sawagawa’s small movements, but she didn’t say anything.

“Junior, can you exchange contact information, I want to ask you if there is anything I don’t understand in the future…”

Shiyu Kasumigaoka suddenly took out her mobile phone.

“First of all, I don’t have that much time to help you all the time!” He was secretly wary.

“Really, do you know how many boys want my contact information?”

Kasumi Zhiqiu Shiyu gave him a blank look, and his face was full of resentment: “And isn’t the junior brother just peeking at my leg?” ”

Kitami Zekawa immediately stopped answering.

Peek…… What men instinct… Can that be called a peek?

Take out your phone and touch it slightly with the other person’s phone.

I saw Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s slender fingers like soft dough, tapping at a dizzying speed.

This finger… It’s a pity to knock on the keyboard….

And Kitami Zegawa’s side also received the other party’s mailbox.

“Then in the future, please give more advice, junior ~~”

The playful voice and cute movements of blinking eyes made Kitami Sawagawa stunned.

He still underestimated the power of the school’s top beautiful girls.

Coming back to his senses, the other party was gone.

“Kasumi Shiko-sensei, goodbye.”

Retracting his gaze, he whispered softly.

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