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1. (Pig's feet are naive, there is no logic in the first chapter, and the rest is bloody. After saving someone's family, he became a godfather! After seeing this, he decisively removed it! I'm very curious about the circumstances under which the first chapter was released.

Being robbed by those people, people will do extreme things in extreme circumstances. If they are so short of money and they rob you, I will definitely be very desperate! Don't tell me that you can't beat them when there are many people. No matter what time, people will

Afraid of daring to fight Saburo! If one of them is caught, he will beat him to death and bite his teeth! What are you afraid of!)————Eating books and speaking words

Answer: (Haha, the matter of praying for a godmother is a matter of benevolence and wisdom, so let’s not talk about it for now, but in the situation like the first chapter, what should he do if he is hungry for two days because of his mother’s illness?

Moreover, it’s not like he didn’t fight hard, and it’s not like he didn’t bite his teeth. Besides, this is a novel...

Well, it’s useless to say more. If extreme things can be done in this situation, in my opinion, the logic may be even worse. However, I still want to thank this friend for his comment!)

(The most important thing is a sense of substitution. Without this, who else would you expect to read your book?)————Seventy-two points

Answer: (Sense of immersion, I really can’t tell much about this when reading my own books, maybe there really isn’t much here. However, compared to myself, I still have this beginning, as I said before,

After all, this is based on my own personal experience in the past, and I have a lot of feelings...)

2. (If someone is so tired and can still indulge in obscenity, I really admire him. Can the author please not be so blunt when writing a book? The money he used to fulfill his mother's wish was just robbed. Sleep.

In the blink of an eye, he starts lusting after beautiful women. May I ask you, does he really worry about his mother’s wishes?)————Seventy-two points

Answer: (I think in the second chapter, the protagonist received the memory inheritance, already had hope, and was in such an excited and hesitant mood that it was not unreasonable to do what he did at that time.

Moreover, considering his mother’s condition, does he still care about what he has lost? Of course, thank you for the 72-point review!)

Okay, here's a summary. Although The Wizard will try its best to tell the story as "reasonable" as possible, there are still many shortcomings after all. I also hope that all book friends will comment and support.

Moreover, novels are just novels after all. To borrow other people’s words, most novels themselves are unreasonable. It’s okay to find fault with the book, and there’s no problem in telling it, but don’t get entangled. It’s best to have fun reading it, right?

If you feel it doesn’t look good, you can take it off the shelf or put it away for now. You can come back and watch it later. If you enjoy it, then the author is also happy!

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