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Chapter 14: Very good but!

It was already past ten o'clock at night, but the staff offices of Ares Co., Ltd. were brightly lit.

Yin Xiaorui pulled Bai Ruyu to show her her optimized plot, while Lin Sisi was busy painting original paintings and building models.

Bai Ruyu looked at the manuscript on the screen, extremely curious as to what plot her fiancé had written that could make this girl so excited.

With a hint of curiosity, Bai Ruyu opened the copy.

Chapter One, Liuli Island.

After receiving the mission order from Boss Gao, the killer Meng Xinghun from Happy Forest...

Chapter 2, Stalactite Cave.

...........

The plot levels given by Zhuang Li contain a lot of novel content, but these things cannot be experienced in the game.

This part of the content is given to allow Lin Sisi to better draw the original character painting, and to allow Yin Xiaorui to better understand the word martial arts.

After all, there is no Jin Yong, no Liang Yusheng, and no Gu Long in this world.

Bai Ruyu watched it with fascination, but she always felt that the plot gave the novel content intermittently.

"Wow, this ending is too cruel. Meng Xinghun gave the only antidote to Leng Yan, why did Leng Yan throw it away?"

When Bai Ruyu saw the ending, her eyes filled with tears. The ending was too cruel. How could you, Zhuang Li, do this?

"Ooooooo, I feel so distressed." Bai Ruyu wiped her tears. She now wished she could go to Zhuang Li and ask him to change the ending.

Yin Xiaorui on the side couldn't help but nodded, and then she secretly smiled: "Boss lady, you haven't read the plot I revised yet. Well, this is the plot I revised, and I also changed the ending."

Bai Ruyu quickly read Yin Xiaorui's revised ending and felt much better.

The ending modified by Yin Xiaorui is that Meng Xinghun and Leng Yan divide the antidote in half, and then they each use their skills to force out the poison, and then go away happily together.

This ending is much more perfect than Zhuang Li's. Seeing this ending, Bai Ruyu feels much better inside.

"Tomorrow I will go to the boss with you and ask him to revise it." Bai Ruyu clenched his fist fiercely. Yin Xiaorui immediately hugged Bai Ruyu and sighed: "Boss lady, you are so good. Otherwise, you are beautiful and have a poor heart."

beautiful."

"Don't worry, I support you on this."

...........

The next day, the sun was just right.

Zhuang Li had a very comfortable sleep. When he woke up, he found that he was sleeping on the sofa.

"It seems that Bai Ruyu got it for me."

After getting up and stretching, Zhuang Li moved his body and started to get busy again.

It wasn't until after eight o'clock that Zhuang Li's office was pushed open, and Bai Ruyu walked in pushing the dining cart.

"Eat some food. Not eating in the morning is not good for your health!"

Behind Bai Ruyu is Yin Xiaorui, who has long legs, a thin waist, and a heavy hood.

This Yin Xiaorui is really talented. Bai Ruyu's figure is hot enough, but compared with the scale of the two, Yin Xiaorui is more ferocious. With such a large scale, I'm afraid he has an E.

Aren't you tired of being so big and swaying when walking?

Zhuang Li muttered in his heart that Bai Ruyu and Yin Xiaorui didn't know what he was thinking. If they knew, they would probably use a combination of punches on Zhuang Li.

"The landlady is so virtuous. Boss, you must have saved the world in your previous life to have such a beautiful, virtuous, and gentle landlady." Yin Xiaorui looked at Zhuang Li and Bai Ruyu with envy. Zhuang Li rolled his eyes. I'm not the only one.

Save the world, I fucking saved the entire universe.

Breakfast consisted of steak, eggs and milk. The protein content was off the charts. Zhuang Li tasted it and found that the beef tasted very good. It should be Kobe beef flown in from Japan.

"Is this the steak you fried?" Zhuang Li took another look at Bai Ruyu. The soup Bai Ruyu made for himself last night was delicious, and today's steak was also particularly delicious.

"Well, do you like it?"

"It's great. I know Chinese and Western food. What else do you want?"

"I can basically cook all the cuisines I'm good at." When it comes to cooking, Bai Ruyu's face is full of confidence: "I can cook all the eight major cuisines, French cuisine, Japanese cuisine, etc."

"That's amazing, my little sister!" Zhuang Li was dumbfounded, this must be cheating.

After having a full breakfast and having more energy to work, Zhuang Li sat on a chair, looked at Yin Xiaorui behind Bai Ruyu, and tilted his head: "Xiaorui, have you finished writing all the copy?"

"Well, it's done. I've written it all. Boss, you can read it."

Zhuang Li took the copy handed over by Yin Xiaorui and read it slowly from the beginning.

Yin Xiaorui, who was standing aside, suddenly became nervous. Zhuang Li sometimes frowned and sometimes nodded. She couldn't tell from Zhuang Li's face whether this copywriter could pass the boss's speech.

Bai Ruyu on the side was also a little nervous. She wanted Zhuang Li to change the heartbreaking ending of Meteor Butterfly Sword.

For a long time, Zhuang Li looked away from the copywriting. He took a long breath, looked at Yin Xiaorui who looked nervous and uneasy, and said, "It's very good. It's well polished. Judging from the writing and details, you're even better."

Delicate and surprisingly good at depicting the scenery.

but!!!"

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