Super Military Scientist

Chapter VIII How to Write Essays

For Liu Feng, he really doesn't have much experience in writing essays. Now that he wants to write a paper on genetic modification, he really feels a little bit helpless.

After hearing Liu Feng’s words, Zhao Zhongyao looked at him and said: “Writing a paper is actually not a difficult task. Just make it clear what you want to say. Of course, you must pay attention to some words. Those who read your paper will understand what you want to express at a glance. Therefore, the writing style of this paper must be mastered. If you don’t even understand what you want to express, then you How can this paper be successful!"

After hearing what Zhao Zhongyao said, Liu Feng looked at him and said, "Director Zhao, can you help me think about how I should write this paper! Do you have experience in writing papers!"

After hearing Liu Feng’s words, Zhao Zhongyao looked at him again and said, “That’s right. I have written papers before, but I haven’t written papers for a while. However, I can check for you as long as I feel you If you can write it, you can almost publish it."

What Zhao Zhongyao said was humble. He was too experienced in writing papers. After all, he has written a lot of papers in his last life. From the time he went to college, he continued to conduct antimatter research. During this period, within a few decades, he had not written a thousand papers, and there were hundreds of them. He can be said to be very experienced in writing papers.

"Director Zhao, let's do it! I will write a paper by myself. After I finish it, I will take it over. You can help me see. If there is something that is not well written, you can correct it for me. You see How is it?" Liu Feng said, looking at Zhao Zhongyao again.

"Okay, don't worry! I will definitely help you modify it." Zhao Zhongyao also said.

"Okay, then I'll pass." Liu Feng was of course very happy after hearing what Zhao Zhongyao said.

After speaking, Liu Feng went back first.

After Liu Feng returned to his office, he began to conceive this paper. He first wrote a draft of it himself. After I wrote it, I read an article and started writing again.

It took him a week to finally write his own thesis.

After Liu Feng wrote the paper, he took the paper and went to Zhao Zhongyao's office.

"Director Zhao, I have already written this paper, you can show it to me!" Liu Feng put the paper he wrote in front of Zhao Zhongyao.

Zhao Zhongyao took the paper written by Liu Feng, and he glanced at the title of the paper first. The title of this paper by Liu Feng is "On Genetically Modified Technology".

After reading this topic, Zhao Zhongyao felt that the topic Liu Feng used was not very good and should be revised. Because of this topic, it is impossible for people to read this paper as soon as they read it.

This good paper is the same as a good article. If you want to publish an article in a newspaper or magazine, then you must let the editor look at the article you write, and it will feel bright. Only such an article may be read by the editor.

But how can we make editors shine! The first is the title of this article. This topic must be done so that the editor will want to continue reading as soon as he looks at it. If the editor has a look at it and feels that your topic is not attractive, then people may not read your article and put your article aside.

"Liu Feng, the topic of your essay is not very good. You should change it." Before reading what Liu Feng wrote, Zhao Zhongyao pointed out that the topic of this essay he wrote was not good.

Upon hearing what Zhao Zhongyao said, Liu Feng said in a puzzled manner: "Director Zhao, what topic do you want to use? I will explain this topic all at once. What is the main point I want to talk about! I don’t I just want to write about genetically modified technology. If this is the case, I have to mention it all at once in the topic!"

After Liu Feng heard what Zhao Zhongyao said, he was still a little puzzled. He felt that it was more appropriate for him to ask such a topic.

After hearing Liu Feng’s words, Zhao Zhongyao looked at him and said, “If you think this way, you’re wrong. It’s not that you just put the main things you want to write on the topic. An article is good. The paper does not mean that you can put what you want to write on the title. What is important is whether what you want to write can attract the attention of the editor."

After hearing what Zhao Zhongyao said, Liu Feng said: "Then Director Zhao, what kind of topic do you think I should use for this paper?"

"I don't think it's better to call'Genetically Modified Technology Make Human Life Better'." Zhao Zhongyao looked at Liu Feng again and said a topic he had just thought of.

Upon hearing this topic, Liu Feng also felt that this topic was a bit special, and felt much warmer than his own topic. The topic of my own is a bit cold, which makes people feel like I'm trying to make a mystery.

"Director Zhao, the topic you mentioned is really good. It is much warmer than my topic." When Liu Feng heard the topic mentioned by Zhao Zhongyao, he also had to say, The topic he was given to him was better than the one he wrote himself.

"Yes! When I modify this topic for you like this, it makes people feel that when I see such a topic, I want to keep reading. Because when people see such a topic, they will think, this What is the content of the question. What is genetically modified technology, and how can this technology make human life better?" Zhao Zhongyao looked at Liu Feng and said.

"Okay, just use this topic. It's better to use this topic from Director Zhao." Liu Feng listened to Zhao Zhongyao's explanation, and he agreed to use this topic.

"Okay, let me see what you wrote again."

After discussing the topic written by Liu Feng, Zhao Zhongyao began to read what he wrote again.

Zhao Zhongyao felt that there were some problems with the content of the paper Liu Feng wrote. He just wrote about what kind of technology is genetic modification. As for what kind of changes this technology will bring to people's economy and life, I did not say. It makes people feel that the technology he developed is just a high-tech technology, but he didn't say very clearly what it would be for human life.

"Liu Feng, this paper you wrote just explains the genetically modified technology you want to develop. But any technology should serve the production and life of human beings. If you don’t say your own kind of If technology is of any help to human production and life, how can your technology be recognized by everyone!" Zhao Zhongyao said again.

When Zhao Zhongyao said this, Liu Feng felt a sudden realization.

"Director Zhao, what you said is really good, you remind me like this, I feel that the paper I wrote is indeed a bit too boring. It is just a brief explanation about the technology of genetic modification. There is no Explain how this kind of technology will help our lives. I feel that the paper I wrote is too superficial." Liu Feng said again.

"Yes! The paper you wrote is just a noun explanation. It is just an explanation of the technology you have developed. Such a paper can be said to be a relatively general paper. When you look at a paper like yours, let People feel like a paper written by a college student.

A good essay, like a good essay, must be attractive. There must be bright spots. If there is no attractive place, there is no bright spot, then how can it attract others. "

Zhao Zhongyao looked at Liu Feng and told him something about how to write a good paper.

Liu Feng felt that he had benefited a lot after hearing what Zhao Zhongyao said. He looked at Zhao Zhongyao again and said: "Okay, I know how to write, I will write another paper for you to see."

"Okay, that's it, you should treat this one as a draft. Write another one for me to see. If I think you have written almost the same, then you can submit it." Zhao Zhongyao knew. I am very experienced in writing papers. As long as he feels that the paper is well written, as long as he submits it, the publication may still be very large.

In this way, Liu Feng took his own paper and returned to his office, and he began to write this paper again.

This time, he followed the train of thought Zhao Zhongyao said. Wrote a paper again. The title of this paper, which Zhao Zhongyao told him, is "Genetically Modified Technology Makes Human Life Better".

After he finished writing, he read it first and felt that what he wrote this time was still very good. This time, he simply explained what genetically modified technology is. Then I gave some examples to prove that this kind of genetically modified technology is very helpful to human life.

It took Liu Feng another three days to write this new paper. After he finished writing, he read it for himself. After that, he got it in front of Zhao Zhongyao.

"Director Zhao, take a look first, did I write well this time." Liu Feng said, and put the paper he wrote on the desk in front of Zhao Zhongyao.

Zhao Zhongyao glanced at the topic of Liu Feng's thesis this time, and felt that he had already used the topic he told him. He is also very happy. After all, people are willing to accept their own suggestions, which also shows that they are a modest and studious person.

"Okay, let me watch it again."

After Zhao Zhongyao finished speaking, he took Liu Feng's paper and read it again.

After he saw it this time, he felt that the paper Liu Feng wrote this time was very good. It is much better than what I wrote last time.

"Okay, you wrote very well this time. However, some of the wording still needs to be revised. You put it here first, and if I have time, I will help you revise it."

Zhao Zhongyao feels that Liu Feng is now writing this paper. Although it is very good. However, some wording still needs to be revised. After all, this good essay is a good essay, and it should be paid attention to in writing.

"Okay, then thank you Director Zhao, you can help me make a good revision." Liu Feng said again.

At this time, Zhao Zhongyao seemed to have thought of something again. He looked at this paper by Liu Feng and said: "Liu Feng, where do you plan to publish this paper."

Liu Feng thought for a moment, and said in a timid voice: "Director Zhao, I want to submit this paper to the journal World Nature. What do you think?"

The "World Nature" magazine that Liu Feng said is the most famous scientific magazine in the world. The people who can publish articles in this magazine are the world's top scientists. Liu Feng had the courage to submit this paper of his own to such a world-class academic journal. Of course it was a very bold idea.

However, this is actually nothing. After all, "World Nature" is just a magazine. Anyone who is interested in academic achievements can submit their papers to the editorial office of this world-renowned academic journal.

It's just that ordinary people, afraid they dare not think so, feel that their level is not qualified to contribute to this world-renowned academic journal.

When Zhao Zhongyao heard Liu Feng say this, he was stunned for a while, and then said with a smile: "Haha, well, we young people must have such courage. No matter what kind of magazine he is, we only have Courage, can you just submit your paper!"

Liu Feng heard what Zhao Zhongyao said, and felt that he was laughing at himself! So he said with some embarrassment: "Director Zhao, you are not laughing at me! If that's the case, I think it's fine, I'd better choose a domestic academic journal for submission!"

After hearing Liu Feng’s words, Zhao Zhongyao smiled again and said: "Look where you want to go, how could I laugh at you! I have never published a paper in this "World Nature" magazine myself! Qualified to laugh at you."

When Zhao Zhongyao said so, Liu Feng felt that he was thinking too much. Director Zhao is not the kind of person who likes to laugh at others.

"Director Zhao, do you think this paper of mine can be published in "World Nature" magazine! I don't have any confidence myself."

After all, Liu Feng is a young man who has just graduated from university for a short time, and now he has made some achievements in genetic modification technology. Just want to publish a paper in the "World Nature" magazine, which is indeed a bit of a goofy way.

"Liu Feng, don't think about it like this. There is a saying that is good, but is it man-made? As long as your paper is liked by the editors of "World Nature", how could it not be published! They don't know you? It is a young man, a researcher who has just graduated from university. As long as your paper is well written, it will be published in the journal World Nature."