Superpower War: My Seven Billion Eyes Monitor The World
Chapter 130 Writer’S Volume Finished Chat
I guess everyone is a little confused about the ending, it's very fragmented and messy.
In fact, Ban was quite dissatisfied with the ending.
In the original ending, not so many characters appeared, and the scenes were not so chaotic, but more sensational.
The last scene was supposed to end with the contents of the diary.
The writer's paper should end with what the writer wrote!
but.
If I write like this, there will definitely be some KY party members who will say that I am an imitation dragon, Mu Yingtong is Eli Yi, etc.
There must be such idiotic remarks.
What bothers me the most is hearing people say that my characters look like so and so.
My children can only be like me!
(Roar loudly!)
So the final ending was changed to a group portrait style where all the unexplained characters showed their faces. The camera switched back and forth several times in one chapter, which made me feel dizzy.
This ending actually explains one thing.
[Wedge] has three states: dormant, active (hungry), and intensified.
Yingtong's wedge will accompany Luo Yan all the way to the SSS level, basically spanning the entire book. It is a very important thing, so it is not an exaggeration to spend a chapter to start it.
There is nothing to say about the dormant state, it is just a bud.
You need to eat when you are active. As for what the food is, the clown volume will explain it.
The fun part is the aggravation state.
Women's clothing! Women's clothing! What’s more, it’s women’s clothing!
As for the consciousness of the person in the female form, this of course cannot be spoiled.
Anything related to the identity of [actor] cannot be spoiled. This is the only hidden character in the book.
It can only be said that [Actor] has three abilities. Currently, only half of the description of [Enter the Act] has been released. There is still a lot of information and settings that have not been released. It is impossible to guess who it is. I guess it is just pure ignorance. .
After all, this is the [Writer] volume, and the focus must still be on [Writer].
If we really want to talk about the suspects, [the actor] is among the five of them: Luo Yan, Ning Ling, Bai Zhi, the woman in white uniform, and Yimi.
Don’t think that because Yimi has an “adult” superior, she can’t be an [actor].
You don't allow me to be in a good mood today because I just want to act like a subordinate!
Don't say that when you see the lipstick and think you are an [actor], you can't just put on makeup.
(Vehicle PTSD)
(Everyone should be more open-minded about [actors]. For example, there is something called [stuntman])
To use a game to describe the Seven Centers, it goes like this:
[Writer] is a tactical assistant, responsible for providing resistance, shields, etc.
[Joker] is a functional unit with hundreds or thousands of abilities. It can also silence others. It is almost like a jungler.
[Doctor] is the main C, the main output unit, with extremely strong second-hand ability, the image of a god of war, and a father-like figure.
[Doctor] is the deputy C, long-range, focusing on controlling team damage.
[Audience] is a strategic auxiliary, exposing the enemy's position, limiting the enemy's field of vision, and hiding one's own position.
[Actor] is a broken center, unable to determine the relationship between friend and foe, just like the player or actor on the field who is struggling with whether to fake the match.
【director】?
[Director] is such a [hang].
(outside the rules)
In this game, as long as you use [Director], you will win, unless you don't want to win.
Finally, let’s talk about the core of the [Writer] volume, Mu Yingtong.
(Child bathing under the cherry blossoms)
I guess what everyone is most concerned about is whether Yingtong will have a role in the future and will he be resurrected?
It can be said clearly.
There are scenes, but they are not the kind of scenes that everyone wants to see. It may even be a bit toxic to some people.
As for resurrection...
Have you ever thought about why Yingtong wanted to die?
The operation of resurrecting is not difficult. There are ready-made methods in the world view. I don’t need to make them up. Among the three taboo experiments in Xizhou, two of them can be used to resurrect Yingtong.
It's not difficult to do this.
It just destroys the book and the character, hahaha...
The core problem of resurrection is not on Luo Yan's side, but on Yingtong's side. Everyone usually takes Luo Yan's perspective, so they never think about Yingtong's problems.
After being resurrected, she had to face again the problem that made her want to die in pain - the life and death conflict between her family members and the observer.
This conflict between race and self is not the conflict between Luo Yan's country and his small family.
Luo Yan actually doesn't have much sense of belonging to human beings. If it weren't for the twelve-year-old girl in white, that extremely kind girl... Based on his childhood experience, it would be enough to not be against humanity.
If he knew that Yingtong was the center early on, he would not hesitate to join the Sali leaf insect family. (The premise is that we don’t know that the mastermind issued the killing order)
But Yingtong is different. Yingtong's sense of belonging to the Zerg is extremely deep, and her relationship with the clown, the doctor, the audience, and the doctor can no longer be described in good words.
There are only four or five compatriots in such a big blue star with a population of seven billion.
A relationship of more than sixty years.
What more could I ask for?
And her feelings for Luo Yan are not just a simple love between a man and a woman, but also a [disease] caused by [setting] self-respect.
If Yingtong is resurrected.
Is she going to marry the man who killed her family?
It is estimated that no one has thought about this problem for her. This is really too painful for her.
There is also a second issue, the issue of emotional lines.
That’s all I’m talking about today.
The King of Heaven is here, Ning Ling must be the heroine of this book!
The heroine Ning Ling's position is not allowed to be released. I know that everyone doesn't like her now. She doesn't have many roles. She is not as cute as Yingtong, she is violent, and she is a bit arrogant...
(Ban, who knows the emotional plot behind it, really likes Ning Ling anyway)
For the entire book, she has too many roles. Ning Ling has her own complete plot line and growth arc, and a lone wolf takes on the mission of the second path to salvation.
(Of course it gets tangled up with Luo Yan’s thread from time to time)
Later on, you might even have to kill a pivot alone.
She is so important, a female character that runs through one to two million words in the whole novel, and she and Luo Yan are a pair in terms of abilities. How dare I let these two not be together?
Readers can bear it, but I can’t bear it myself!
If Yingtong is resurrected, he will have to face the Shura field.
Think about this scene, is it possible that Mu Yingtong and Ning Ling serve the same husband? !
Is it possible for these two people to give in?
Is this possible?
impossible.
One is so possessive that he becomes ill, and the other is so proud that he keeps to himself.
We really can't get it together...
(The emotional line is not a big problem, it can be forced together. Readers won’t think about it so much anyway. The main reason is that the first racial issue is difficult to deal with. There are too many worries when writing the plot)
In conclusion.
Yingtong will have a role in the follow-up (non-resurrection), and there is only a theoretical possibility of resurrection. If the plot is advanced normally, it will be too difficult. If it is forced, the whole book will collapse.
This book was quite depressing until the finale.
However, Ban can responsibly say that if the book can be successfully completed, it will definitely be HE.
Luo Yan will go through thousands of hardships to wash away the dirt, get rid of the dirt in his mind, and clear away the cluttered consciousness. His [eyes] will spread all over the world, including the world and the earth, including the past and the future, and he will become a true observer.
Reach the state of omniscience and tranquility.
At that time, someone will accompany him to watch the dusk.
This road is very long for both Luo Yan and Ban.
But if you succeed, you will be very happy, not just ordinary happy, but a huge * civilized term * happy.
(One chapter a day, one volume may take three months, and there are still six volumes...)
(This is the first time I have read such a long article. It is really difficult. Ban used to write short stories, romance and science fiction. He participated in the romance essay competition and won an award. He is relatively good at it. Unfortunately, there were no emotional scenes until the audience took the test. )
(I thought at first that people liked to watch the kind of killing and killing, defeating monsters and leveling up, and showing off and slapping people in the face. After reading the backend comments urging updates, I found out that what everyone likes to watch is giving out sweets, even though I do too. I often After reading the previous chapters, the ones I read the most were Chu Ye and Pure Sugar, and then I suddenly felt that pushing the main story was so boring...)
Again.
(Take a day off tomorrow to read book reviews and sort out the Joker volume)
(Ban has probably never asked for anything from you, nor has he actively asked for a reward. I hope you can write a book review, good or bad, just as you have witnessed Mu Yingtong’s short, bright, and hot feelings.)
(Come on, it’s really cool to control the weather station to stop the heavy rain and stop your boyfriend!)
(I hope the book reviewers won’t criticize the characters. If they want to criticize, just criticize the author as a fool. The author has no heart. He resigned as a bank employee. If he doesn’t get criticized for a day, he will feel uncomfortable)
The ceremony is over.
pay tribute!
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