The author of the depressing anime series makes the heroine cry

[That autumn when I was eleven, I could no longer play the piano】

【Two years later, in April, a girl named Kaoru Miyazono appeared in my world.】

【My name is Kousei Arima, and I am composing music in the piano classroom.】

【Everything started from a baseball hitting me. Maybe it was the beginning of my good luck.

The beginning is very attractive, the writing is concise and concise, without the problems of newcomers who talk a lot of settings and unclear developments, and the plot is simple and straightforward.

This plot and setting should be similar to her"Love Metronome", both of which are love healing and sweet.

Starting from the male protagonist being unable to play the piano due to some problems, the female protagonist is inserted as the person who saves the male protagonist.

However, the more Kasumigaoka Shiyu reads, the more frightened she feels. Is this level really something that a person who has just written a novel can have? Could it be that some big guy is reincarnated from the impure world?

After a long time, Kasumigaoka Shiyu finally finished reading this novel.

She gently closed the book, looking into the distance with a confused look in her eyes, as if she was still immersed in the plot of the story.

There was silence around her, only the sound of the breeze beside her and the sound of Bai Ye chewing the bread brought by Kasumigaoka Shiyu.

The silence lasted for a long time, as if time had frozen.

Kasumigaoka Utaha's thoughts gradually withdrew from the world of the book, but her heart was still deeply touched.

She sat there quietly, motionless, as if she had become a sculpture, thinking about the various plots in the book.

From the reader's perspective, she really wanted to read on! Why did it stop at this point!!!

But from the author's perspective, it's very strong! The novel written by this junior is really strong. As long as you submit it, it will definitely pass, and even have excellent sales.

There is an unwritten rule in the light novel industry. If the warm and daily type can be popular, then the author's level must not be low.

This type of novel is too test of basic skills. Unlike the orthodox style and the different world style, they have rich settings and plot support, and the warm and daily type is too dependent on writing and character settings.

In short, this is no longer a masterpiece that Kasumigaoka Utaha can comment on.

Rubbing her temples, Kasumigaoka Utaha felt that she had been too much in front of others. She had planned to teach this junior as a senior.

But in the end, she swelled her face and pretended to be fat.

"Junior, is this really a light novel you wrote?"

"What? Senior sister thinks it doesn't look good?"

…………

Kasumigaoka Utaha was silent. No! Rather, it was because it was so beautiful that she didn't know what to say for a moment.

"You really haven't submitted an article?"

It's hard to believe.

"No, this is my first time writing a light novel, but I have submitted it to Dengeki Bunko, and it seems to have been nominated for the Grand Prize."

Nominated for the Grand Prize!!!

This means that there is a high probability that this novel will be selected for the Grand Prize, as long as there is no dark horse, but dark horses are not so easy to appear.

Kasumigaoka Utaha herself only won the Rookie Award, and that was from a medium-sized publishing house like Fuzugawa. How can it be compared with large publishing houses like Dengeki Bunko?

For a moment, there was an inexplicable sense of frustration. She was not as young as others, and her talent was not as high as others.

Suddenly, the little self-esteem in Kasumigaoka Utaha's heart, which thought she was superior to her peers, disappeared.

After all, Kasumigaoka Utaha's high school life started from They are taller than the average students, the light novels they write can be published, their grades are among the best in the school, their family is harmonious, and they look good.

For the first time, Kasumigaoka Utaha felt defeated by her peers.

It's fun, it's refreshing!

How about it! Do you feel the power of your buddy?

Xia Qiu secretly became arrogant in his heart. It is necessary to be humble. Of course, as a young man, it is acceptable to be a little youthful. Just grasp the right degree.

Although the work is from the previous life, I can copy it out and repeat it completely. Isn't it my ability?

Again, if you can't even copy it, I suggest you go to Shen Tokyo Bay.

"Judging from the plot alone, I am indeed not as good as my junior."

Or rather, I am far behind. Although the first light novel of Kasumigaoka Utaha was a small hit, the second volume fell into an extremely boring writer's block, which made Kasumigaoka Utaha very anxious.

Seeing that the submission date was approaching, the second volume had not been written yet, which really made Kasumigaoka Utaha a little overwhelmed.

"No, no, I should call you senior.

Xia Qiu said in a friendly manner and took her phone.

"Oh, don't call me senior. I've been having a hard time writing lately, and I can't even continue with my original idea."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu laughed at herself, forget about calling me senior in front of Xia Qiu, it's good enough for her to maintain her level.

"Senior sister, are you stuck? Do you need me to help you with some advice?"

Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu nodded and played the second volume on her phone for Xia Qiu to see.

It is indeed feasible to have someone to help with reference and comments, which is better than working behind closed doors.

"It turns out that"Love Metronome" was written by my senior!"

"you saw it!!"

"No."

Kasumigaoka Utaha was speechless. Then why are you so excited?!

Kasumigaoka Utaha's writing style is very engaging, but the plot is a little disappointing. It's not good, nor bad, just barely acceptable. As for the second volume... although there are only tens of thousands of words, it can be seen that Kasumigaoka Utaha is having a writer's block. These tens of thousands of words are like constipation, and even if they are pulled out, they are just a lump. No wonder this guy has such an embarrassed expression.

He read it almost very quickly, not as carefully as Kasumigaoka Utaha reads her own novels. There is no need and no meaning. You can get a general idea from these tens of thousands of words.

Xia Qiu rubbed his temples with a headache.

"How is it?"

Kasumigaoka Utaha asked impatiently

"Although I don't want to say it clearly, what my senior wrote is really a bunch of……"

Xia Qiu did not say the following words because they were extremely insulting.

"I haven't read the first volume of Senior Sister, but I can roughly guess the plot of the first volume based on the second volume. First of all, the plot of the first volume should be very good, but the progress of the male and female protagonists is too fast, and one obvious thing is that the progress is too fast, resulting in the second volume of Senior Sister having no side and main lines that can promote the plot."

"Simply put, the plot is too bland. If the first volume is a sweet treat, then the second volume is just bland water, which makes people lose the desire to read."

And as expected, the second volume of Kasumigaoka Utaha was almost cancelled due to poor sales.

"I see. I also know that the first volume of the hero and heroine progressed too fast, but I don’t have a better solution.

Many novelists will find some unreasonable contradictions and bugs when they re-read their works after they are published, but they can’t change them even if they want to.

"There is a solution, I wonder if you know it or not… Bah, bah, bah, you know it’s a waste of time."