The author of the depressing comic book series makes the heroine cry

[That autumn when I was eleven, I… could no longer play the piano. ]

[Two years later, in April, a girl named Miyazono Kaori appeared in my world. ]

[My name is Arima Kousei, and I am composing music in the piano classroom. ]

[Everything started from a baseball hitting me, and perhaps it was the beginning of my good luck. ]

The beginning is very attractive, the writing is concise and concise, without the problems of newcomers who are long-winded with a lot of settings and unclear developments, and the plot is unfolded concisely and straightforwardly.

This plot and setting should be similar to her "Love Metronome" novel, both of which are love healing and candy.

It starts from the male protagonist being unable to play the piano due to some problems, and the female protagonist is inserted as the person who saves the male protagonist.

However, the more Kasumigaoka Shiyu reads, the more frightened she feels. Is this level really something that a new novelist can have? Could it be that some big guy is reincarnated from the dead world?

After a long time, Kasumigaoka Shiyu finally finished reading this novel. She gently raised her head, looking into the distance with a confused look in her eyes, as if she was still immersed in the plot of the story. There was silence around her, only the sound of the breeze coming from beside her and the sound of Bai Ye chewing the bread brought by Kasumigaoka Utaha.

The silence lasted for a long time, as if time had frozen. Kasumigaoka Utaha's thoughts gradually withdrew from the world of the book, but her heart was still deeply touched. She sat there quietly, motionless, as if she had become a sculpture, thinking about the various plots in the book.

From the reader's perspective, she really wanted to read on! Why did it stop at this point!!!

But from the author's perspective, it's very strong! The novels written by this person are really strong. As long as you submit them, they will definitely pass, and even have excellent sales.

There is an unwritten rule in the light novel industry. If warm and daily types can be popular, then the author's level must be not low.

This type of novel is too demanding on basic skills. Unlike the mainstream and otherworldly novels, which have rich settings and plot support, the warm and daily novels are too dependent on writing style and character setting.

In short, this is no longer a masterpiece that Kasumigaoka Shiyu can comment on.

Rubbing her temples, Kasumigaoka Shiyu felt that she had been too much in front of others. She had planned to teach this junior well as a senior.

But she ended up swelled up her face and pretended to be fat.

"Is this really a light novel you wrote?"

"Why? Do you think it's not good?"

…………

Kasumigaoka Shiyu was silent. No! On the contrary, it was because it was too good that she didn't know what to say for a while.

"You really haven't submitted a manuscript?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu couldn't believe it.

"No, this is my first time writing a light novel, but I have submitted it to Dengeki Bunko, and it seems to have been nominated for the Grand Prize."

Grand Prize nomination!!!

This has almost proved that this novel will be selected for the Grand Prize, as long as there is no dark horse, but dark horses are not so easy to appear.

Kasumigaoka Utaha herself has only won the Rookie Award, and it is in a medium-sized publishing house like Fuzugawa. How can it be compared with large publishing houses like Dengeki Bunko?

For a moment, there was an inexplicable sense of frustration. I am not as young as others, and my talent is not as high as others.

Suddenly, Kasumigaoka Utaha's little self-esteem that she thinks she is superior to her peers disappeared.

After all, Kasumigaoka Utaha's starting point in life is higher than that of ordinary people. The light novels she wrote can be published, her grades are among the best, her family is harmonious, and her appearance is even more beautiful.

This is the first time that Kasumigaoka Utaha feels frustrated by her peers.

Happy, cool!

How about it! Do you feel the power of your buddy?

Xia Qiu secretly became arrogant in his heart. It is necessary to be modest. Of course, as a young person, it is acceptable to be a little youthful.

Just grasp the right degree.

Although the work is from the previous life, I can copy it and repeat it completely. Isn't it also my ability?

Again, if you can't even copy it, I suggest you go to Shen Tokyo Bay.

"Just looking at this plot alone, I am indeed not as good as it."

Or it should be far, far worse. Although Kasumigaoka Shiyu's first light novel was a little popular, the second volume fell into an extremely boring writer's block stage, which made Kasumigaoka Shiyu fall into a very anxious state.

Seeing that the submission date is approaching, the second volume has not been written yet, which really makes Kasumigaoka Shiyu a little overwhelmed.

"No, no, it stands to reason that I should call you senior."

Xia Qiu said very friendly and took his mobile phone.

"Hey, don't say senior. I've been stuck in writer's block recently.I feel so uncomfortable that I can't even continue writing my original ideas. "

Kasumigaoka Shiyu laughed at herself and forgot to call her senior in front of Xia Qiu. It was good enough for her to maintain her level.

"Are you stuck? Do you need me to help you with some advice?"

Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu nodded and played the second volume on her phone for Xia Qiu to see.

It is indeed feasible to have someone to help with reference and comments, which is better than working behind closed doors.

"So you wrote "Love Metronome"!"

"Have you read it! !"

"No. "

Kasumigaoka Utaha was speechless. Why are you so excited?!!!

Kasumigaoka Utaha's writing style is very engaging, but the plot is a little disappointing. It's not good, nor bad, just barely acceptable.

As for the second volume... although there are only tens of thousands of words, it can be seen that Kasumigaoka Utaha is stuck in writing. These tens of thousands of words are like constipation, and even if they are pulled out, they are just a lump.

No wonder this guy has such an embarrassed expression.

It's almost read very quickly. It's not as detailed as Kasumigaoka Utaha reads her own novels. There is no need and no meaning. You can get a general idea from these tens of thousands of words.

Xia Qiu rubbed his temples with a headache.

"How is it? ”

Kasumigaoka Utaha asked impatiently.

“Although I don’t want to say it, what the senior wrote is really a bunch of…”

Xia Qiu didn’t say the next words because they were extremely insulting.

“I haven’t read the first volume of the senior, but based on the second volume, I can roughly guess the plot of the first volume. First of all, the plot of the first volume should be very good, but the progress of the male and female protagonists is too fast, and one thing is obvious that the progress is too fast, resulting in the lack of any branch and main lines that can promote the plot in the second volume of the senior.”

“In short, the plot is too bland. If the first volume is a candy that can be eaten, then the second volume is just bland water, which makes people have no desire to read.”

And as expected, the second volume of Kasumigaoka Utaha was almost cut off due to poor sales.

“I see, I also know that the male and female protagonists progressed too fast in the first volume, but I don’t have a better solution. ”

Many novel writers will find some unreasonable contradictions and bugs in their works after rereading them after they are published, but they have already been published and cannot change them.

“There is a solution. I wonder if you know it… Bah, bah, bah, do you know that it is a waste of time to learn it?”