end cap summary

The second volume ends here.

There are more than 200,000 words in total, which is not much, but I am very happy to think about the plot and foreshadowing every day, but it is a little bit of a brain, and I even spend a lot less time playing games, and even less time reading novels.

Let's make a summary first.

Actually, I wasn't very satisfied with the second volume. The front was fine, but when the back was pushed to the end of the volume, I didn't handle it well.

Of course, it was also because I was busy fiddling with the birthday wine at home in those few days, and I couldn't concentrate. I also had to see if I could go to Sanjiang during the period, which also distracted a lot of attention, resulting in a bad rhythm in the middle and late stages. felt it.

Fortunately, it came back before it was put on the shelves, and the volume tail roughly made a small series of the foreshadowing buried in the second volume and the things left in the first volume. As for some deeper pits, they will be left to fill later. .

But after thinking about it, I can actually do better. If I didn't pay so much attention to the amount of renewal when making wine, maybe the senses would be better. This will be a lesson from Absorb in the future.

Also, a lot of people think that the part where Xia Yan, Steven and Cynthia met when the style of writing was shifted.

Although I gave what I think is a very reasonable way of meeting, there are still many people who think that Xia Yan should not have any intersection with them, and then I asked the friends in the group for their opinions.

In the end, I found that most of the people who felt a little uncomfortable thought that they should not have an intersection, not because the plot was unreasonable, but purely because the two future champions and Xia Yan met, a bit of a price drop, a bit of a letdown Xia Yan is in a weak position

Well, in fact, I just want to say that the champions are them in the future. In fact, their status is not so exaggerated now, and their strength is not much stronger than Xia Yan, and maybe not even as high as Azir.

In Xia Yan's relationship with them, I also try to ensure an "equal" position. Whatever I give, I will get something correspondingly. I give the concept of a shield of retaliation, Abra gains Shadow Ball, and Eevee's theory is given. Xia Yan gains money and two The improvement and attention of people's senses lays the groundwork for some future things, and at the same time catches the line of Professional Rowan.

As for why I wrote them, as well as Agatha and Pryce, it is actually to highlight the main body of this volume that I wrote at the beginning, that is, what Mr. Feng Jicai said, this is a cognitive change from paper to butterfly , and they were the catalysts that brought this cognitive change to Xia Yan.

And then mention something that you may not have noticed (I dug so hard, I gotta let you guys know!)

In the first chapter of the second volume, Xia Yan returned to see the shadows flashing through the sewers, Ruby who was watched by the bartender, Duskull of "The Breeder Division", Petaya Berry was bought out, the riot process of wild Pokémon, and even the first volume An explanation of the source of the "worm-bearing fruit" eaten by Weedle, as well as the role of various factors interspersed with the little monk Anci, etc.

Of course, there are also some pits that were not explained in the second volume, such as the water pool where Kabuto was seen, the identity of Old Bill, another person in Tom Ritchie's impression who could not see through, and Master Suzuki who appeared many times in the first two volumes. , the purpose of the "Breeder Division," the Rockets' experiments, and more.

There are some more details not mentioned (to avoid spoilers).

In short, one sentence.

I had fun digging. (dog head saves life)

In the process of the second volume, I also tried the storyboard, and the overall writing feels good to me, and I may try a little more in the future.

Then I have also mentioned the content of the third volume several times. It is "travel", and of course a Pokémon will be involved.

However, this volume mainly focuses on showing the world of Pokémon, there should be a lot less foreshadowing, try to show the different senses of each region, and draw the world of Pokémon in my heart.

Finally, make a summary for yesterday's launch.

It's okay, it has met my expectations, and then I will talk about the additions that everyone cares about.

I figured it out. There should be 24 more updates for the reward. If the monthly pass is full of 900 updates, there will be another update after that, that is, 2 monthly updates. There are also 19 updates for the first and average subscriptions.

Then you owe it all.

45 more.

Not much to say, I will organize the third volume. Today's update will be a little later, although it is late, let me take a look, this will add more.

(End of this chapter)

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