In Qian Sheng’s hand was the original manuscript of Mumuza Yihui, which was accidentally torn in half by him.

Although the reason is more on this manuscript, it is a bit impolite to tear in half what people have worked so hard to write.

“That’s right, I did it on purpose.”

So, Qian Shengyi said.

Kasumi Hills cast an appreciative gaze, yes, this kind of spiritual pollution should be torn off!

Yoshiki’s eyes gradually lost their highlights.

The things that were painstakingly written were treated like this, which gave this fat mansion’s heart a hard look.

“Why am I so disappointed, in fact, I was doing magic just now.” Qian Shengyi said.

He put the torn manuscript in half together and folded it in half several more times, as if it were really magic.

“Boom!”

He unfolded the manuscript paper, and an intact original appeared in front of him.

“Wow, it’s really my original manuscript, even the handwriting is exactly the same!” Mumuza Yihui held the original manuscript and looked left and right, and shouted in surprise.

“It’s amazing, how did Xiao Qian do it?!”

Don’t make a fuss about this young lady Danzi!

Qian Shengyi smiled, he couldn’t say that ‘the four eggs are afraid of me’!

“It’s just a simple trick, even the dango can learn to waste.”

Yubihama couldn’t understand the homophonic terrier, and his eyes flashed with longing.

“Can I too?”

Yubihama’s eyes sparkled.

“It can… Right? ”

There is indeed a magic trick of shredded paper restoration in magic, but Kenseiichi cannot guarantee that Yuhihama will learn it.

Therefore, in order not to discourage the enthusiasm of the danzi, he changed the topic.

“Sorry, I don’t usually read novels much, so I can’t give a correct evaluation.” Qian Sheng said to the wooden seat.

This is a lie!

The person who knows best that this is a lie is Kasumigaokaoka.

Don’t read much fiction?

Who to fool!

You don’t read much novels, she Kasumi no Oka and read these original manuscripts on the spot!

“Isn’t it good to be honest at this time. Will also take into account the feelings of others, are you the male protagonist of Asasi in the harem light novel? ”

Kasumi no Oka came to Qian Shengichi’s side and whispered.

“Asassi?” Qian Sheng was slightly stunned, and said with a smile: “Sister can also think too highly of me, I am not gentle at all.” ”

Kasumi shook his head and said, “Rou is not the Virgin, you understand what I mean. ”

“Sorry, I don’t understand at all.” Qian Sheng pretended to be stupid.

On the other side, Yui Hihama looked at Kiza’s original manuscript and said with a big grin that he couldn’t understand it.

Including the setting, the lines, and the characters.

Yoshiki Kiza, thinking that he had written too profoundly, took Yuhihama’s words as valuable experience.

In fact, even if it is an ordinary light novel for Yubihama to see, this will be the result.

“That Yukinoshita classmate seems to be taking it quite seriously.” Kasumigaoka said playfully.

“I bet her trigeminal nerve must be hurting right now.” Qian Sheng shrugged.

There is no need to doubt the power of the Mumuza’s novel, Qian Shengyi can’t stand it just by reading the first line.

Punctuation and typos are also counted, why is there still romance?

This thing is like the pinyin of Huaxia in the island country.

Yukinoshita Yukino looked at it for about ten minutes, and she looked away from the original manuscript, pinched her eyebrows, and looked very tired.

“Honestly, this is the first time I think reading a book is such a bad thing.”

Yukinoshita Yukina is a literary girl who usually likes to read books and prefer foreign works.

Of course, these novels can also be read, and I think I can give a good evaluation.

However, Yoshiki Kiki’s novel greatly exceeded her expectations.

“Hmm!” Muki-za Yoshiki covered his mouth, and thanks to the evaluation of Qian Shengichi and Kasumigaokaoka, he now had the ability to resist.

In ten minutes, Yukino only read five pages.

With a girl’s reading speed, it certainly wouldn’t be so slow under normal circumstances.

However, there are too many problems in Kikiza’s novel, and Yukino Yukinoshita is notoriously serious, writing five pages of manuscript paper full of comments and revisions.

Probably like a teacher correcting an essay for an elementary school student.

“For reference, can you tell me what’s bad…”

Yukinoshita was the only one who read his novel carefully, and Kigizo Yoshiki hoped to get valuable advice from her.

“First of all, the grammar is a mess. Why do you always use inverted sentences? Do you know how prepositions are used? Didn’t you go to elementary school? ”

Yukinoshita’s tone was flat, not sarcastic, just stating the facts.

But this is even more embarrassing.

“That’s using plain language to make the reader feel familiar…”

Difficult explanation of the wooden seat.

“Isn’t that something that you explore after mastering the most basic Japanese?” Yukinoshita said.

What she meant was that Koki-za was inferior to even elementary school students.

“Also, too many phonetic sounds are used incorrectly, there are many typos, and they suddenly break off in some places…”

Under the snow there was a large list of them, and Yoshiki could not listen to them.

“Ahhh, sorry, please be when I haven’t been here!”

Unable to endure the torment under the snow, Kikiza, Yoshiki snatched the door away.

“I’m not done yet…” Yukishita opened his mouth, seemingly without any need to continue.

Qian Shengyi said coolly, “It’s really terrible.” ”

“Yukishita-san’s poisonous tongue has always been okay.” Kasumigaoka smiled.

“This senior sister is the same.” Qian Shengyi complained.

“Discuss in front of the parties, didn’t the kindergarten teacher teach you basic manners?” Under the snow said coldly.

Qian Shengyi shrugged his shoulders and said, “Don’t point the finger at us.” ”

“Two against one, you don’t think you have a chance of winning, do you?” Kasumigaoka refers to ‘the way the Zuan people greet each other’.

She has also learned Qian Shengyi’s poisonous tongue, and he will not lose to her at all, and he will not show mercy because the opponent is a girl!

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PS: Chapter 3 (20/20)

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