The daily life of the substitute messenger

In his hand was the original manuscript of Yoshiki Kiza, which was accidentally torn in half by him.

Although it is more due to the original manuscript, it is a bit rude to tear something that someone has worked so hard to write in half.

"That's right, I did it on purpose."

So, Qianshengyi said.

Kasumigaoka cast an approving gaze, that's right, this kind of spiritual pollution should be torn off!

Yoshiki Kiza's eyes gradually lost their highlights.

The things that I worked so hard to write were treated like this, and it gave the heart of this fat house a hard blow.

"Why are you so lost, in fact, I was doing magic just now." Qianshengyi said.

He put the torn manuscript in half together and folded it in half several times, as if by magic.

"Wow!"

He unfolded the manuscript paper, revealing an intact manuscript in front of him.

"Wow, it's really my original, even the handwriting is exactly the same!" Yoshiki took the original manuscript and looked left and right, shouting in surprise.

"It's amazing, how did Xiao Qian do it?!"

Don't make a fuss about this Miss Tuanzi!

Qiansheng smiled, it can't be said that 'the four eggs are afraid of me'!

"It's just a simple trick, and even the dumplings can be learned."

Yubihama couldn't understand the homophonic stalk, and his eyes flashed with longing.

"Can I do it too?"

Yuhihama's eyes sparkled.

"Yes... Right? "

There is indeed a magic trick of shredding paper in magic, but Kanshoichi can't guarantee that Yubihama will be able to learn it.

So, in order not to discourage the enthusiasm of the dango, he changed the topic.

"I'm sorry, but I don't usually read novels, so I can't give a correct evaluation." Qiansheng said to the timber seat.

This is a lie!

The person who knows best that this is a lie is Kasumigaoka.

Don't read novels much?

Fool whom!

You don't read novels much, she's Kasumigaoka, and she reads these original manuscripts on the spot!

"Wouldn't it be nice to be honest at this time? will also take into account the feelings of others, are you the Yasassi male protagonist in the harem light novel? "

Kasumigaoka leaned over to Qianshengichi and whispered.

"Asassie?" Qiansheng was slightly stunned, and said with a smile: Sister also thinks too highly of me, I'm not gentle at all. "

Kasumigaoka shook his head and said, "Rou is not the Holy Mother, you know what I mean." "

"Sorry, I don't understand at all." Qiansheng pretended to be stupid.

On the other side, Yui Yui Hihama looked at Yoshiki Kiza's original manuscript and said with a big grin that he couldn't read it.

Including the setting, lines, and characters or something.

Yoshiki Kizuza thought that he had written too profoundly, and wrote down what Yui Yui Yuhihama said as a valuable experience.

In fact, even if it's an ordinary light novel, Yubihama will read it like this.

"That classmate under the snow seems to be looking at it quite seriously." Kasumigaoka said playfully.

"I bet her trigeminal nerve must be sore right now." Qiansheng shrugged.

There is no need to doubt the power of the timber block novel, Qiansheng can't stand it just by reading the first line.

Punctuation and typos are all about it, so why is there still Roman script?

This thing is like the pinyin of Huaxia in the island country.

Yukino looked at it for about ten minutes under the snow, and she looked away from the manuscript and pinched her eyebrows, looking very tired.

"Honestly, it's the first time I've felt like reading is such a bad thing."

Xue Xue is a literary girl.,Usually likes to read books and prefers foreign works.。

Of course, I can read these novels, and I think I can give a good review.

However, Yoshiki Kizuza's novel greatly exceeds her expectations.

"Hmm!" Kikiza Yoshiki covered his Hun mouth, thanks to the evaluation of Kanshoichi and Kasumigaoka, so that he now has the ability to resist.

In ten minutes, Xue Nai only read five pages of content.

With a girl's reading speed, of course, it would not be so slow under normal circumstances.

However, there are too many problems in Kigiza's novels, and Yukino is notoriously serious, with five pages of manuscript paper full of annotations and revisions.

It's probably like a teacher revising an elementary school student's essay.

"For reference, can you tell me what's wrong..."

Yukishita is the only one who has read his novels seriously, and Yoshiki Kizuza hopes to get valuable advice from her.

"First of all, the grammar is a mess. Why do you always use inverted sentences? Do you know how prepositions are used? Didn't go to elementary school? "

Under the snow, the tone was flat, there was no sarcasm, just a statement of facts.

But it's even more embarrassing.

"It's in plain language to make the reader feel familiar..."

Timber seat difficult explanation.

"Isn't that something that you explore after mastering the basics of Japanese?" Said under the snow.

What she meant was that the timber seat was not even as good as an elementary school student.

"Also, there are too many phonetic mistakes, and there are many typos, and they suddenly break in some places..."

There are a lot of lists under the snow, and Kikiza Yoshiki can't listen to it.

"Ahh

Unable to endure the torture under the snow, Kikiza Yoshiki took the door away.

"I'm not done yet—" Xue Xia opened her mouth, as if there was no need to continue.

Qianshengyi said coldly, "It's really terrifying." "

"It's always okay for classmates to have a poisonous tongue under the snow." Kasumigaoka smiled.

"You should do the same, senior sister." Qiansheng complained.

"Discuss in front of the person concerned, didn't the kindergarten teacher teach you basic manners?" Said coldly under the snow.

Qiansheng shrugged his shoulders and said, "Don't point the finger at us." "

"Two-on-one, you don't think you have a chance of winning, do you?" Kasumigaoka refers to 'the way the Zuan people greet each other'.

She has also learned Qianshengyi's poisonous tongue, and he will not lose to her at all, and he will not show mercy because his opponent is a girl!

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PS: Chapter 3 (20/20)

Finally finished writing the said good plus more~ The monthly pass plus more activity has started again, starting from 15, every 10 monthly passes plus one change, asking for support~_

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