The fairy father
Preview of new chapters in this article
Finally, the main plot of the father and son in this book has been landed.
I must say: double penetration is too difficult to write, and it is thankless. The subscription market feedback is mediocre. The only advantage is that there is relatively large room for adaptation. It is not recommended to try it easily.
Fortunately, it was completed smoothly.
In fact, the third stage has only been written halfway, and it is mainly based on the Conferred God.
But how to say it, the Conferred God is misaligned with the theme of the story. The conflict between the new Conferred God and the father-son story structure is getting bigger and bigger, so I can only make a choice.
Give priority to ensuring the integrity of the whole story.
The original route of the new Conferred God has too low military power. It is suitable as the beginning of a book, not as the main line of the third stage of the book.
When I was working on this structure before, I actually completed the conception of 616 and the subsequent chapters first, and made a detailed arrangement around this part, so I ignored the incompatibility of the new Conferred God with this system.
But fortunately, apart from this part of the new Conferred God, the story of the father and son was successfully completed.
I found a fatal problem while writing.
I am writing a historical drama in the world of high martial arts.
The sense of tearing is too serious.
So I made up for it, introduced the role of Donghuang Taiyi, let Donghuang Taiyi become Emperor Xin, gave Li Pingan a guide, and let the main story go beyond the content I conceived.
It was like building a bridge.
Regarding the Conferred Gods and King Wu's attack on King Zhou, I have many views to express. This is also what I have been studying since my senior brother was writing, looking up various materials.
I want to write a new Conferred Gods, write about the brutal rule of the Shang Dynasty, the rise of the Zhou Dynasty, the internal response beside Emperor Xin when King Wu attacked King Zhou, write about various sorcerers, and write about the birth of Zhou Li... But later I found that these things are incompatible with the Gaowu mythological story, and we have built a story of Li Pingan in the previous 2.6 million words, and the main body of the Immortal Father is already a power class that exceeds the level of saints.
What to do?
Continue to promote Li Pingan's story, or let Li Pingan, a heavenly emperor, participate in the secular court struggle. This has become a question I have been thinking about for the past two months, and I have been sleepless for a long time.
Reason tells me that even the author himself should not wantonly destroy the integrity of the story. The story of the Immortal Father has developed to this point.
This is a fairy tale story, the foundation is that the 'protagonist' creates the myth. The protagonist we describe is the 'son' Li Ping'an, and the actual protagonist of the plot is the 'father' Li Dazhi·Wangri.
It is too far-fetched to change the perspective of the father and son of the Ji family in the new Fengshen.
So I chose to push the main body of the story first and complete the main story smoothly, so that the emotions of the readers are coherent, and the main story of the fairy father can also be smoothly landed.
Then;
This part of the idea that was not written in the new Fengshen is placed in the extra chapter and becomes a separate article.
This not only ensures the integrity of the story, but also avoids forcing the reading feeling torn.
It's okay for everyone to read the sequel or not.
My last chapter was created according to the standard of the grand finale. If the story of the fairy father ends with a fight, it is contrary to this worldview. This peaceful treatment is also the first attempt, but I always feel that it lacks a bit of 'grand scene'. Whether I write the new Fengshen or not, this is the ending of this story.
The extra chapter "Chaoge Fengyun" will be updated synchronously starting today.
The subsequent protagonists are of course Li Pingan and Li Dazhi, and the roles of Li Dazhi and other characters will be increased, but this has no impact on the main storyline.
In addition: Because it is not the main story, but an additional part, this extra is free.
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