Regarding several descriptions that seem abrupt and inexplicable.

There is also the issue of the character of the widowed sister.

In fact, the several appearances of the Ancient One, the Time Stone, Mephisto, and the Widow Sister are actually about one thing. It is a foreshadowing that runs throughout the entire text.

But it seems that my goal was not achieved.

If your writing skills are not good enough and you still want to do sex work, this is what you will end up with! (t^t)

I want to express [the widowed sister has an obvious and inexplicable difference between Lyon and other people] [the widowed sister seems to be very familiar with Leon, who should not be familiar with her]. Then, through these two points, I will prove another thing, that is

That foreshadowing.

A complete mess. A complete failure. A complete failure.

Looking back now, I think the former should do more horizontal comparisons of the same period. I'm afraid you think I'm too incompetent and haven't written enough. So some book friends think there is a problem with the character of the widowed sister. This is my problem.

My writing is not good, I'm working on it.

The latter seems to need more paving the way, even if it looks more watery. I must be a little anxious. That's why it's so abrupt.

I will revise the details today.

I will try to reduce this kind of extravagance as much as possible in the future...

Try to understand what you can write clearly before studying other things (t^t)

Today, try to ensure that 8,000 words.

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