The low-level trainer of the elf world

The second volume ends here.

There are a total of more than 200,000 words, not many, but I am very happy to think about the foreshadowing of the plot every day, but it is a bit of a brain drain, and I even spend a lot less time playing games and even less time reading novels.

Let's make a summary first.

In fact, I was not very satisfied with the second volume. The front was fine, but when it was pushed to the end of the volume, I didn't handle it well.

Of course, it was also because I was busy making birthday drinks at home in those few days, and I couldn’t concentrate. I also had a period of time to see if I could go to Sanjiang, which also distracted a lot of attention, resulting in a bad rhythm in the middle and late stages. felt it.

But fortunately, I came back before it was put on the shelves. The end of the volume roughly made a small connection between the foreshadowing buried in the second volume and the things left in the first volume. As for some deeper pits, I will stay to fill them in later. .

But I thought about it, and it can actually be done better. If the wine is not so focused on the amount of renewal, the senses may be better, and I will learn from this in the future.

Let me also say that many people feel that the writing style has shifted when Xia Yan meets Dawu and Sirona.

Although I gave what I think is a reasonable way to meet, there are still many people who think that Xia Yan should not interact with them, so I went to ask the opinions of the friends in the next group.

In the end, I found that most people who felt a little uncomfortable thought that they shouldn't have an intersection, not because the plot was unreasonable, but purely because they thought that the two future champions and Xia Yan met, a bit of a drop in price, a bit disappointing Xia Yan is in a weak position

Well, in fact, I just want to say that the champions are them in the future. In fact, their current status is not that exaggerated, and their strength is not much stronger than Xia Yan, and they may not even be as high as Azir.

In the relationship between Xia Yan and them, I also try my best to ensure an "equal" position. What I give, I get what I get accordingly. I gave the concept of the counter-attack shield, Casey harvested the shadow ball, gave Ibrahimovic's theory, and Xia Yan harvested money. The improvement and emphasis on the senses of the two of them paved the way for some things in the future, and at the same time took the line of Dr. Yamanashi.

As for why I wrote them, as well as Juzi and Liu Bo, it was actually to highlight the main body of this volume that I wrote at the beginning, which is what Mr. Feng Jicai said. This is from paper to butterfly, a cognitive Changes, and they are the catalysts that bring this cognitive change to Xia Yan.

Then mention something that you may not have noticed (I dug hard, I had to let you guys know!)

In the first chapter of the second volume, Xia Yan returned to see the black shadow flashing in the sewer, the ruby ​​that the bartender was watching, the night watchman of the "cultivator", the dragon fire fruit being bought wantonly, the riot process of wild elves, and even The first volume explains the source of the "Fu Chongguo" that the unicorn worms eat, and intersperses the role of various factors in the connection of the young monk Anci, etc.

Of course, there are some pitfalls that are not explained in the second volume, such as the pool where the fossilized helmet was seen, the identity of Old Bill, another person who can't see through Tom's impression, Suzuki who appeared many times in the first and second volumes The Master, the purpose of the "Cultivator", Team Rocket's experiment, etc.

I won't mention some more details (to avoid spoilers).

In short, it is just one sentence.

I had a great time digging. (dog head for life)

In the process of the second volume, I also tried the storyboard, and the overall writing feeling for me is not bad, and I may try a little more in the future.

Then I have mentioned the content of the third volume several times, it is "travel", and of course it will also involve an elf.

However, this volume mainly focuses on showing the world of elves, so there should be a lot less foreshadowing. Try to present the different senses of each region, and paint the world of elves in my heart.

Finally, make a summary of yesterday's shelves.

It's okay, it met my expectations, and then I will talk about the additions that everyone cares about.

I figured it out, there should be 24 updates for tipping, one update with a monthly pass of 900, and then there will be another update after that, that is, 2 updates for the monthly ticket, and there are 19 updates for the first-order and regular-order add-ons.

Then it's all owed.

45 more.

Not much to say, I will sort out the third volume. Today’s update will be a little later. Although it is late, let me take a look. This will add more.