First of all, here is a bow to everyone.

Thank you for your subscription support, and thank you for your valuable comments and suggestions.

Maybe I didn't feel much when I wrote it myself, but when the friends in the group talked with the book review section, I also found something.

The plot arrangement is a bit too deliberate.

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I summarized everyone's suggestions and then summed it up.

The first one, each of these supporting actors wants to be the protagonist so much.

Well, I think this is affected by my Pokémon complex. I think trainers who truly recognize each other are fighting with all their strength.

The second one is that the protagonist always divides things, and he can't get any benefits.

Well, this is actually mutual benefit, but some benefits are not so easy to reflect, such as the support of the Du family, the support of Dawu German Company, and so on.

Of course, the reason is that there are too few descriptions of the supporting characters, and what adventures they have experienced have not been written.

The third one, which is also the one that everyone talks about the most, is that the plot is deliberate.

Well, this is my fault.

It was me who took it for granted, substituting the plot of the special chapter too deeply.

After all, in the special chapter, the gods and beasts are flying all over the sky, and everyone has gods and beasts.

Then I thought, as Du, Dawu, and Sirona, it's normal to get one.

Of course, I also gave a reasonable explanation and reason as much as possible.

But it just happens too often, causing some seemingly deliberate problems.

After all, it is because there are too few portrayals of supporting roles and too little experience.

The fourth article is the description of my arrangement.

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Interested friends may have already discovered that big things are about to happen, so they are pulled to support the scene.

Too much follow-up, I won't say more.

at last.

To take everyone's time to explain.

Thank you for your comments and suggestions, and I will try my best to avoid this situation in the future.

I will look at your suggestions.

If you can't see it in the book, you can join the group chat. There are still many friends talking about the plot, and I often copy their ideas.

It's easy to let your ideas fly when you are new to writing a book, and you really need some suggestions.

20,000 pigeons, thank you~~

Oh, in the end, the protagonist has already had something good, emmmm, do you still remember Little Nebula?

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