The Most Beautiful Boy In Tokyo
Say something
I just woke up after a long night yesterday.
It's three o'clock in the afternoon and I haven't eaten yet.
I discussed it with a few friends for about five hours, mainly about this plot.
I read the comments, and they are quite controversial, half good and half bad.
The outline is fine.
There is something wrong with the plot.
There are currently two versions of this plot.
One is the version where Kame makes a gorgeous rescue (the kind that Yukiko saved before), and the other is the current version where the two of them set up a situation.
Wrong choice.
In fact, this plot is quite important.
The juvenile chapter mentions the setting of chess pieces once, which introduces the concept of the monastery, and then refuses to join, after all, I don’t want to get involved.
Then, the junior high school chapter was brought up again.
Then through a point push, the high school kingship chapter officially connects with this long-term plot, and then enters the climax of the battle for chess pieces.
There's something wrong with my writing skills. Sorry, I'm too tired.
During the exam days, I took a mock test at 9 a.m. and rested at 12 noon. At 1 p.m., while others were sleeping on the table, I was typing on my phone with my phone. Then I took professional classes at 2 p.m., and ended at 6 p.m. in the evening. There is another class from 7 to 9 o'clock. It's already 10 o'clock when I get home. It's 12 o'clock after I take a shower and have a meal. Then I write until 2 o'clock in the morning and my cigarette case is empty.
It's torture, but there's nothing we can do about it.
Let’s just watch and play this version.
In the next few days, I will replace the first version, which is the version where Shen Hui saves the day. The number of words is only a lot more. The plot should be liked by more people. It will not affect the plot of the second public performance. The new version can be Keep looking back.
I will remind you when the new version is ready.
Then.
I will also give you a free extra episode as compensation. Whose episode do you want to watch? Leave a message and tell me.
No one is immune to mistakes.
Especially if you're really tired.
But it doesn't matter. You will make progress only if you make mistakes. Just change your mistakes if you know they are not enough.
I was wrong, I apologized, I stood at attention and was beaten.
Nothing to be ashamed of.
Not giving in, that’s all.
If you can do better, do better.
I went to eat first. I didn't go to the mock test in the morning. I went to get the test papers in the afternoon and then went to class.
Let’s grow together and make progress together in the future.
I also ask for your patience.
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