The Richest Man Starts From Falling In Love
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Clap clap!
Not applause.
It was a slap in the face.
I slapped myself. For the specific picture, see the scene where Lao Luo was at Starbucks. If you still don’t believe me, I will broadcast a live broadcast to slap myself.
This book……
The journey of the richest man has come to an end, and it is over.
In fact, there are still some stories that I want to write. In the estimated outline, there are two parts in the back, one is about business warfare, and the other is about entertainment circle.
But after I thought about it, the tonality was already inconsistent, and I forced it to be written down, which was nothing more than a dog's tail.
And the relationship line is completely broken.
It's not interesting to cheat money by the number of water words.
Take a look back at the creative process...
The book was published on February 2 this year. At the time of the epidemic, there was a shortage of books, and there were no books to read. After thinking about it, I wrote a book myself.
The entire thinking process before opening the book is as follows:
Urban culture is nothing more than money and women.
In the setting of Goldfinger, if money and women can be combined, it will be the skeleton that can run through the main line of the whole text.
So there is a "love rebate system".
In the new book issue, the base is full, the editor is strong, there are many updates, and the big bosses support it, coupled with the enthusiasm for the bread (bless the bread to recover and return soon), the results will naturally rise.
I forgot the first order, it seems to be more than 3,000.
This is a huge incentive.
So I worked harder and wrote like walking on eggshells.
Where is the turning point?
In the first "system upgrade" there.
If you choose to marry Gao Jing at that time, the system disappears,
Finishing the book, in terms of story, is the most satisfactory ending.
But at that time, there were only more than 500,000 words, and long online articles, or ultra-long articles, could not be written in this way, and were not allowed to be written in this way.
In fact, this is almost the inherent disadvantage of most urban literature.
The most interesting plot of urban literature is the stage when the protagonist starts to "have money" and "has a woman".
Almost half a million words in length.
Once this goal is achieved, follow-up, either open a new map, or pull hatred, or repeat the previous routine.
In terms of creative theory, the so-called "sense of anticipation" has disappeared.
Gao Jing is the best heroine I created in the early stage, amazing in every way, and also the perfect girlfriend in my fantasy.
However, when the sense of anticipation disappears, the relationship line, inevitably, becomes chaotic.
So the "strong stimulation" mode was turned on.
All the way.
The protagonist transforms into a humanoid self-propelled gun.
There are more and more female characters, and they gradually fall into clichés, and subscriptions naturally collapse all the way.
I thought of many ways, consulted many books, and made many attempts, but there was still nothing I could do.
Can't pull it back at all.
Even stretching the hips more and more.
In the later period, it was rewritten that the protagonist "returned to be still a teenager", and there was a recovery, but the general situation was gone and there was no way to recover.
This was the first and most valuable lesson I learned.
- Keep it fresh.
You can only be yourself and write your own story. You can learn from the mainstream, but don't fall into the cliché.
When there is something new, there is a sense of expectation.
Of course, new ideas need to be accumulated.
I'm not enough.
This is a subjective reason.
The objective reason is that...
Every time I get Calvin, I read various books and finally discover a depressing truth.
It is an inevitable result that the urban text will lose its novelty when it is written to a certain level without adding special abilities or other elements.
There are exceptions, except for the extremely amazing story skills, character settings, and life accumulation, such as the scumbag Chen Hansheng, there are only two types that can continue to maintain novelty, one is puzzle-solving elements, detective texts, and cracking texts; One is the entertainment that constantly releases new works.
In fact, these are also the two urban types that are easier to achieve results.
Unfortunately, this book is not in these two categories, nor can it be turned towards these categories.
Novelty! Novelty! Novelty!
Novelty is life and death!
I will definitely hold on to the next book!
...
The second lesson I learned was the lack of routines.
Routine is criticized.
But it is essential.
Most of the time when I was writing this book, I didn't know how to write routines, but just relied on a little bit of instinct to design the plot and think about the characters.
So the later it got, the more tired I felt.
Routine is not just a simple pretense and slap in the face, it is a story, or a plot, a general paradigm of succession and transformation.
I read a lot of creative theories, the thinking and experience of the predecessors, a complete routine, nine nodes.
1. Set up suspense.
2. Start the layout, the description of the first part of the story.
3. At the first plot point, the story begins to change.
4. The hero reacts, the plot develops, and the second part of the story is explained.
5. The middle point.
6. The third part, turning points, changes, solving small goals, and description of the next small goal.
7. The protagonist grows up greatly.
8. Encountered the biggest crisis.
9. At the end, the problem is solved.
This is a complete routine.
The foreshadowing is proper, the details are decent, the turning point is clear, the hatred is full, and the emotion is full.
That's it, it's a wonderful storyline.
The routine of urban essays may be the simplest, without complicated settings, but it is also the most difficult to write well.
without it.
Emotions aren't strong enough.
The most intense emotions are fear, the threat of death, a strong motivation to achieve something, and the pain of not getting what you want.
The natural limiting factors of urban themes and the balance in the middle are really difficult to grasp.
Passed, distorted.
Not enough, the effect is not good.
And add some "404" factors.
Dance in shackles with shackles.
Those who can break through the shackles are all courageous. There are also successful examples here, but I can't.
...
The third lesson is renewal.
Perhaps this is the most important point.
I have fallen from the "five Geng Party" to the "Second Geng Beast".
In fact, this one, and the above two, are in the same strain.
Lack of new ideas, so more time is needed to think about new ideas.
Lack of routines, so I lost confidence in the control of the plot and became more frightened.
Insufficient control, naturally not dare to show the plot.
Renewal, there is also inevitable decline.
...
These are bloody lessons.
The above three points are the ills that made me think for a long time and tortured me for a long time.
Of course, this book also has bright spots.
I won't summarize it myself.
Completed word count: 1.43 million.
High order: 18714.
Average order: 5527.
My evaluation of it is: half a good book.
...
Creation is a process of constantly recognizing oneself.
At the end of June, I suffered from insomnia for a long time in Shenzhen, and felt that I was about to die, so I returned to my hometown, abandoned most of my social life, made subtractions from my life, lived in seclusion, seemed to be isolated from society, and retreated for "practice".
The book, in the end, was not rescued.
But I have made some progress and accumulated incomparably valuable experience in mastering long novels.
As far as the online literature industry is concerned, it can be regarded as "getting started".
If the master of achievement also has a cultivation level, then I have already taken the first step.
Creation is also a process of "practice makes perfect".
I am confident that the next book will definitely be better written.
This is the second step, "foundation building".
In my next book, on the premise of maintaining the advantages, I will seriously summarize the three lessons summarized above, and write a "foundation-building work" with the heart of being diligent and aggressive, doing things like walking on eggshells.
The genre of this book is Xianxia.
The positioning is, [Blood Combat Article], [Sweet Dog Food Article].
The semi-original world view, combined with the history of Xianxia, began to recover from the Great Tang Dynasty. As a result, the social structure, world form, and human stories have undergone some corresponding changes.
Of course, the most important thing is the story and the characters.
I made a detailed and innovative world view and power system setting, and I also have a batch of characters with distinctive personalities.
The main line of the plot, this time I must firmly control it, and it will be better than the previous book.
Book title:
"My wife is number one in the world".
The beginning has been posted, you can directly search for the title of the book, or click on my author's homepage to view it.
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In addition, by the way, in order to hone my ability to write daily and adjust my thinking when I am in a text, I also wrote a thorough urban essay in a trumpet.
"The No. 1 Scholar in Ancient and Modern Times".
Relaxed orientation, daily orientation, driving a car, currently has 200,000 words, and the grades are not bad, friends who are good at this, you can go and have a look.
Many people in the group said that it was better written than the richest man.
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above.
Lao Wang thanks all the parents for food and clothing.
I wish Shi Sui all the best.
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