The road to immortality started from a blind man in a pharmacy

Some book friends say it’s a bad ending, but Taohuasu doesn’t think so, because both the worldview and the plot are complete.

But whether Taohuasu himself is satisfied with this work, the answer is definitely not satisfied.

This book was written in a rather irritable way, so it was also written with an irritable mood at the beginning, so that the foundation was unstable.

In this way, once the speed increases, it is difficult to slow down.

If you slow it down, it will become watery and procrastinating. After one chapter, it will give people the feeling that "nothing is written that I want to read."

Therefore, after Peach Blossom Cake realized this, it was not slow, watery, or poorly presented. Instead, it promoted the plot chapter by chapter, opened up the world view, and at the same time ensured the enjoyment.

At least, although the story is fast, every step is very rhythmic. It can be said that "there is no story that does not advance the plot."

At least, haven’t you seen the protagonist’s personality change drastically?

At least, even in the end, the protagonist is still cautious and patient, but he will kill him with one blow at the critical moment, right?

Whether he is dealing with Ji Lei Mountain, Xuan Qing Temple, or Changsheng Villa, even though the plot speed is fast, the protagonist remains the same, right?

Some book friends feel that the reading there has suddenly sped up, while others feel that the quality there has suddenly improved.

As for the facial makeup of people.

There are six women in total as protagonists.

Girl, remember?

Anchenyu, is it recognizable?

Su Ningyu, the little fox pretending to be mature.

Su Mengzhen, no need to say anything, right?

Lian Chanxi has few descriptions and low recognition.

Concubine Jingshi doesn’t seem to be inconsistent with the personality of the deputy palace master of Xuanqing Palace, right?

As for Ling'er and Ying'er, they are also recognizable, and Long Miaoyin is the one who finally makes up the numbers. At this time, it is no longer about accepting a woman, but about completing the world.

Not perfunctory, right?

As for the settings.

Looking back and forth, all the pitfalls have been filled. Whether it is "Eternal Hell", "Secret Tower", or the "Nine Yin and Nine Yang" that are only rarely mentioned, it should not make you feel that it is "Deus ex machina, made up randomly", right?

The logical advancement of Tiandi Xuanhuang's power system is also reasonable, right?

This book, Peach Blossom Cake, really put a lot of thought into it.

But when she realized that the foundation was unstable and difficult to maintain, Taohuasu still tried her best and continued to weave the story seriously.

This is a tall building whose foundation is already unstable, but we still try our best to build something wonderful within our capabilities.

Maybe you agree, maybe you deny it.

But this book is indeed complete, and has some small interactions with the book "Immortality Begins with Orion" to a certain extent, such as "The Sea of ​​Abnormality" and "Ating". These are all compatible. .

To the disappointed book friends, Taohuasu sincerely says "I'm sorry" to you.

But, I really tried my best.

Very hard work.

In short, Taohuasu has learned from this painful experience. I am not in a hurry to start another book this time. I will spend some time to use my own understanding to build the story, blend the world, power, characters, and interesting points into a good combination, and then find an interesting one. Get to the point and write a story that satisfies you.

Telling stories and writing novels are what Taohuasu really likes to do.

It is also destined to be a lifelong hobby.

Finally, thank you for watching, thank you! Thanks! !