The Sage of Confucianism and Taoism

Chapter 1431 Meeting of Pavilion Elders

"Say it, let's listen." Zhang Zhixing put on a reluctant look.

Fang Yun sighed softly and spoke slowly. Everyone thought that he was going to criticize, and they all wanted to see how Yan Yukong would react.

"If I have to say there is any flaw in this poem, it is that this is a Spring Festival literary event, but his poem is like welcoming the spring. It is inappropriate and flawed!"

As soon as Fang Yun finished speaking, laughter erupted one after another, and Yan Yukong laughed the most happily.

Zhang Zhixing said angrily: "This is not a fault-finding, it is just perfunctory! The title of this poem is 'spring', not 'sending spring'. Sending spring is the title of a literary event, not a poem. You have to say this seriously The shortcomings of poetry, otherwise it is equivalent to contempt for this article! "

"Yes, you look down on us old students too much. No, you must criticize!"

"I must say it harshly. This so-called flaw is simply a scratch on the wall!"

Even some new students felt that Fang Yun was protecting Yan Yukong.

Fang Yun looked embarrassed and said, "Isn't this good? I have already picked out the flaws and I can't continue to pick them out. Zhang Zhixing, you are covering the sky at the literary conference. Be careful that I complain to the gentlemen of Chongwen Academy!"

"Complain? It's up to you, but before you complain, you must find out Yan Yukong's fault!" Zhang Zhixing said confidently.

Everyone found it more and more interesting that the old student had forced Xu Sheng to do this, which would never be seen in the future, so everyone started making noises, demanding that Fang Yun could not avoid the most important matters and must give an explanation to Wenhui.

Even some new students joined in the booing, and the atmosphere was extremely lively, which was more and more in line with the purpose of this cultural gathering. Everyone was here to have fun, and the dignified Xusheng did not put on airs, and he wanted to have fun.

Fang Yun shook his head helplessly and said: "There is no way, it's not my fault, I really said it!"

"Say it quickly!" Zhang Zhixing laughed.

The laughter gradually subsided and everyone looked at Fang Yun.

Fang Yun coughed slightly and said: "There is no flaw in this poem itself. The problem is that you are not afraid of not knowing the goods, but you are afraid of comparing goods. The first two sentences are 'spring water and spring ponds are full, spring grass grows in spring', spring grass grows in spring "Sheng" can definitely be considered a good sentence, simple and specific, and the imagery is real, but the previous sentence is a bit bad, Chun Shui is not bad, not even Chun Chi. Wrong, but when the two are combined together, they are a bit redundant. The key point is far different from the following sentence. If it is replaced with "spring comes, the spring pool is full", it not only echoes the following "spring time", but also serves as the beginning of the whole poem, "spring comes". It goes straight to the point and goes straight into the poem, which makes the words more sophisticated. Although the word "lai" is flat and flat, it can also be changed to "to" and "nuan".

Many students nodded slightly. Spring grass grows very naturally in spring, but spring water and spring ponds seem too deliberate, and the change of luck is obviously better.

Yan Yukong smiled and nodded, knowing that he had written in a hurry and without careful consideration, otherwise it would not have been like this. Fang Yun could only see the problem within a few breaths, and it was obvious that he had profound knowledge.

"One is not enough, add another!" someone shouted.

Fang Yun glanced at the man with a smile. The students of the Holy Academy were at least somewhat famous in various countries. He quickly recognized this man. His name was Ning Meng. He was from Qingguo. He was not close to his friends. He was a minister of Qingguo. His nephew, the Qingguo minister, often criticized him in the Qingguo court.

Fang Yun said with a smile: "I only see this one flaw. This brother must have seen that Yu Kong's new poem has many flaws. Come on, please stand up and criticize a few sentences so that I can learn from it."

Ning Meng was stunned for a moment, motionless.

Many people looked at Ning Meng with smiles. It was fine for his friend to mess with Fang Yun, but if he still wanted to force Fang Yun to make mistakes for his friend even though he was not familiar with Fang Yun, don't blame Fang Yun for fighting back. What's more, this cultural conference is just a joke, and Fang Yun's behavior is in line with the theme of this cultural conference.

Zhang Zhixing laughed and said: "If this literary friend feels that this poem is inappropriate, he can stand up and say it."

Ning Meng sat there stiffly, secretly thinking that this Fang Xusheng was very powerful, he smiled and said: "Don't you dare, just join in the fun. I can't compare to Fang Xusheng in terms of poetry and lyrics, so I don't mind saying anything."

As soon as Fang Yun saw that the man had given in, he stopped saying anything. If he continued to fight back, it would not matter if the other party feigned grievances and admitted his mistakes again in order to retreat instead of making progress. However, it would be too boring to let the atmosphere of the cultural gathering be completely dull. He had to master this balance.

Fang Yun smiled and took a sip of spring wine. Everyone understood that Fang Yun didn't want to cause a stalemate at the cultural meeting, so he stopped making noises. After all, Yan Yukong was a disciple of the Semi-Saint, and the banter could not turn into an attack. .

"After reading Yan Yukong's poem, let's look at the poems of the other nine people at his table." Zhang Zhixing said, taking out the poems of the other nine people and reading them one by one.

Soon, everyone realized that Fang Yun's previous words, "Don't be afraid of not knowing the goods, be afraid of comparisons" were also very appropriate here. It was also written in a hurry, and Yan Yukong's poem was obviously better than the others.

The literary meeting continued, and Zhang Zhixing and Sun Renbing successively caught people from five tables. Some of these people made one or two witty sentences, and some had a slightly strange format, but their skills were only acceptable. It was difficult to produce outstanding works. After all, they were Impromptu poetry.

After calling the names of the five tables, Zhang Zhixing said to take a rest and eat and drink to refresh himself. After eating and drinking, he would take away all the poems. Finally, he asked ten old students to quickly select the ten worst poems, and then select the ten best poems. , give rewards, and be able to enter tomorrow's Infinite Battle Palace as soon as possible like those famous bachelors or great scholars.

Fang Yun, like everyone else, was ready to eat.

Duan Qing, who has a cheerful personality, stood up and said with a smile: "We are all scholars, so we can't dirty the paper while eating. I will collect the paper first, and then I will distribute it to everyone after eating."

"Thank you, Brother Duan!" Everyone thought that this person was thoughtful, and they handed the four treasures of the study in front of them to Duan Qing one after another, asking Duan Qing to put them aside.

Duan Qing collected everyone's papers while looking at everyone's poems, and found that several people had not finished writing, and Fang Yun had only written ten words.

Some hot dishes were served one after another, and everyone chatted while eating and drinking. The adjacent tables would also toast, and the atmosphere of the literary gathering became more and more lively.

Fang Yun then understood why the order of everyone's seats was disrupted. After such a literary gathering, the people at the same table had become friends. If anyone wanted to continue to get to know each other, it would be a natural thing. If anyone wanted to find another person, they would have an excuse, which would strengthen the communication between students and would be of great benefit.

Just after a quarter of an hour, before the meal was finished, Fang Yun received a letter from the Holy Academy.

Fang Yun reached out and took out the official seal. It turned out that the War Hall was going to hold a meeting of the elders. There were two topics. One was how to make the army of Confucius Wenjie cooperate with the battle of Liangjie Mountain. The second was to discuss how to defend against the barbarian attack. The second topic mainly discussed the participation of the Four Seas Dragon Clan. The Four Seas Dragon Clan was obtained by Fang Yun in exchange for the True Dragon Order. Any plan and action needed to be informed of Fang Yun.

Fang Yun saw that it was such an important meeting and could not be delayed. He first said a few words to the people at the same table, then quickly walked to Zhang Zhixing, whispered the reason for leaving, and finally walked out of Changhongyuan.

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