The School Report Is Here, And I Drove A Limited-Edition Supercar!

Before Tang Feng came, he guessed that An Xiaonuan had written the manuscript.

He remembered that An Xiaonuan was the vice president of the Literary Club of Zhonghai University of Economics and Law, and had published things in some magazines and newspapers before.

At this moment, when he heard the system notification sound with a shock value of +99 in his mind, and An Xiaonuan's surprised voice, he didn't care at all, and sat directly opposite An Xiaonuan.

"How could it be you?" An Xiaonuan~ was obviously a little surprised.

Then he looked at the manuscript printed out in Tang Feng's hand, his face was slightly red again, "Also, why did this manuscript fall into your hands?"

Tang Feng also knew why she was blushing, but she didn't point it out, just smiled: I'm your signed editor now.

"Huh?" An Xiaonuan was stunned for a moment.

Tang Feng nodded at her, indicating that she heard correctly.

An Xiaonuan was obviously still taken aback. She drank a sip of tea cutely to suppress her shock, and then said, "Then... this manuscript was rejected by Zhonghai Publishing Group before?"

On the way Tang Feng came over, he had already exchanged the shock value for LV4 expert-level writing proficiency in advance.

Hearing her words at this moment, I immediately replied without thinking: "The manuscript was rejected earlier because the review editor had nothing new at the beginning of the story.

"However, I read it before, and your manuscript still has a lot of highlights."

"If you modify the opening article and some details, and then send it to the review editor, it should not be difficult to pass the contract review."

When An Xiaonuan heard this, she was in disbelief again: "You still know how to read?"

She originally thought that Tang Feng used his 'money ability' to sit here and discuss the manuscript with her.

But at this moment, Tang Feng's conversation seems to be an expert.

Tang Feng ignored her surprise, but quickly said: "Have you brought your computer?"

An Xiaonuan quickly took out the laptop from the schoolbag she was carrying.

After Tang Feng waited for her to turn on the computer, he didn't talk nonsense, and simply said: "I said, you should write it down, and revise it on the spot later, and then submit it to the review editor."

An Xiaonuan hurriedly opened the document, and looked at Tang Feng curiously and probingly.

Tang Feng also ignored her curiosity and exploration, and continued: "It's too slow to cut into the topic at the beginning.

"Delete your random thoughts and all kinds of messy, about 3,000-character descriptions.

"Introduce directly from contradictions and gimmicks, and grab the attention of readers and review editors at a glance."

An Xiaonuan quickly wrote it down.

Tang Feng waited for her to stop typing on the keyboard, and then continued: "Chapter five, before the end of the first short story, add some details appropriately to lay the groundwork for the next story.

"Then, in the two storylines of chapters 6-16, An Nuan's thoughts and psychological activities that have nothing to do with the advancement of the main plot. All of them are deleted.

"And from the second half of Chapter 17 to the middle half of Chapter 19, the small branch lines that have nothing to do with the whole story can be directly condensed into one or two sentences..."

An Xiaonuan kept memorizing silently, but her expression became more and more shocked.

When Tang Feng finished his comments, he couldn't help but look up at him with surprise:

"Amazing!"

"When I was writing a story before, I actually vaguely felt that some parts were not good enough, but when I read it repeatedly, I never saw the problem.

"But after hearing what you said just now, I suddenly felt a lot more transparent."

Tang Feng heard the system notification sound with a shock value of +99 coming out of his mind, and he was not surprised to hear the sound, he just smiled and said: "First, modify it as I said."

"We'll see how it works later."

An Xiaonuan nodded again and again, and quickly began to revise the manuscript according to Tang Feng's opinion.

……ask for flowers……

Tang Feng was not in a hurry, and played with his mobile phone on the sidelines.

Until An Xiaonuan on the opposite side exclaimed, "Sure enough, after changing what you said, the story looks more expectant and attractive.

"Moreover, the writing looks very compact, and there is no extra pen and ink."

Hearing this, Tang Feng just put away her phone, scanned her first five chapters, and then said, "Send it to the review editor."

"I'm going to give them a call and ask them to review it ten times now."

An Xiaonuan's face was full of surprises, and he quickly sent the revised manuscript to the submission mailbox of Zhonghai Publishing Group.

..........0

Tang Feng went out to make a phone call.

After finishing the phone call and returning to the reception room for a while, sure enough, the new audit results came out, reaching the signing level!

Moreover, it is a boutique contract level!

An Xiaonuan was obviously very excited. When she saw the draft email received in the background, and then looked at Tang Feng, her eyes sparkled.

"Are you happy?" Tang Feng asked with a smile, thinking of a scene in her novel.

An Xiaonuan nodded again and again, "Super invincible and happy."

"That doesn't mean it?" Tang Feng sat back a little.

An Xiaonuan probably hasn't reacted yet, and looks a little dazed.

Seeing this, Tang Feng didn't explain, just patted his thigh, "Sit down.

Now, An Xiaonuan came to his senses all of a sudden.

She had a sweet~yan~ part in the manuscript just now, it seems to be a similar scene!

Moreover, the heroes and heroines in it are exactly Tang Feng and herself that she imagined.

Seeing that Tang Feng was looking at her with a smile that was not a smile at this moment, exactly the same as the hero in that plot, her brain suddenly buzzed.

His face instantly became hot~hot~a piece.

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