The ultimate size wife system

Responsible for the book review.

In fact, this "Wife of the Best" has now said that many people have said that the reality volume is very bad.

Among them, there are many speech reviews. At that time, when I saw it, I was extremely angry, so I deleted it.

A few days back, many people in the book review area said that the reality is not good. Here I talk about my own thoughts.

"After seeing the second volume, I just wanted to say a word. The villain had to be mad, and the protagonist gave me the impression that it was very different. What is the difference between the second generation of the idiots who can't help.

Write less in the real world, and cynical is too much, and after watching it, I am unhappy. "

The above is a comment from the book friend 'Biyui'.

The following is my response.

‘Little man has to be ruthless.’

This sentence is very appropriate.

When I wrote, I thought about the development of normal plot.

Imagine that Li Fei's status at that time was just a ** silk.

A ** silk suddenly gained huge power and the wealth of the rich country. What kind of reaction would you say?

I think his behavior is completely normal, it is very likely, or the most likely.

The character of the protagonist must be transformed step by step, just like life, no one is done overnight.

Li Fei suddenly got power and wealth. In the past, the past world view would not be changed. The most likely performance was the state of the upstart household, otherwise there would be no outbreak households in reality.

Looking back, his personality will naturally change slowly.

I blame me as a novice. I do n’t know much about the acceptance of the ‘upstart’ personality of the protagonist ’s protagonist. Therefore, in order to see the truth, I wrote this upstart.

However, Li Fei's personality is slowly changed.

"The combat power setting in the tornado is absolutely defeated. Everyone almost enhances 10 times the combat power. It is not difficult to increase the experience of the protagonist.

The standard is completely disconnected.

There is also a mistake. Beiming Divine Gong can only use the thumb to suck the skills. It is so funny that it is still directly in the martial arts profile.

Duan Yu practiced the one more than one of the thirty -sixth, a little bit of Beiming Divine Gong, is it the real Beiming Divine Gong? This is not a good grade. "

This is another book review by book friends 'Biyui'.

The following is a response.

The average combat effectiveness of Tianlong World is indeed stronger than the world of carving, but it is also strong and limited. It is not exaggerated.

But Li Fei is already invincible in the world of god carving.

If it does not strengthen the combat effectiveness of the Dragon World, Li Fei is almost invincible as soon as he enters the World Dragon World.

The problem of Beiming Divine Gong is indeed a bug, which I admit.

Blame me, I don't know much about Beiming's magic.

But this kind of setting is slightly different from the original setting. It will not affect the plot of this book.

After all, this is a brand new book, some subtle settings, there is a little different problem with the original book.

"There is no main line in this book. Has the author made an outline?

When the protagonist's shooting carving, he cheated Xiaolong Nu and Li Mochou back. Why did you do this? To learn skills, finally running to the mountain gate. Killing Zhao Zhijing, Yin Zhiping. Where is the main line?

If you just learn to learn skills, why the goal is so unclear. There is no purpose. How do you write so many words?

Back to reality, the 2007 urban novel plot of all kinds of blind dogs. Various upstarts stepped on people, so what is your purpose? Do you write clearly in your article? Can't read it at all.

Later, I went to Tianlong, and I only saw here now. Those chapters in your real plot are turned over in three seconds. Save people. I don’t say that the protagonist is the Virgin, but the protagonist has no goal at all. What do you have to save people?

The purpose is, even if you click in the article, it is just to make Duan Yu to learn skills, but you do n’t have it. There is still no purpose.

Generally speaking, the protagonist is written as a arrogant outbreak household, the marginal person who does not distinguish between good and evil, and the wanderer without purpose.

After reading it, you can delete it, which may be biased, but it is really the feeling of seeing the present. I do n’t want the protagonist to kill my wife for the benefit, but at least people kill their wives to prove that the protagonist face everything.

Clear, there is no purpose, no plan.

Modify and modify. This beginning can not attract many people at all. "

The above is a book review of the book friend "Need for Subject".

To be honest, this book was also written very "poisonous tongue". After reading it, I felt a little depressed.

But I can write such a long book review, which shows that you really read the book. For this long review, I would like to thank you.

Say.

If you feel the official, the impression of the book is indeed very biased.

First, this book has the main line. I have done an outline, and I still do it very seriously and very carefully.

Secondly, the protagonist entered the world of God's carving, accepted the little dragon girl and Li Mochou, killed Zhao Zhijing, and lava Yin Zhiping. You said that there is no purpose.

I still say that, if you are the protagonist, you suddenly get the wife system, what will you do?

You should know that Li Fei was suddenly obtained. Before that, Li Fei was a complete ** silk.

Can you accept the dragon girl and Li Mochou at the same time, and the goddess such a goddess need a reason for a ** silk? Do you need the purpose?

Third, think about Li Fei's mentality at the time, Li Fei killed Zhao Zhijing, and he took over Yin Zhiping. For an ordinary person who suddenly got power, he had this ability and read and loved the book "The Condor Heroes".

Who is not very these two people, do you need a reason?

What's more, Zhao Zhijing had revenge with him before, and wanted to tie Li Fei, who had no power back to Quan Zhenjiao. If he hadn't escaped, he didn't know what would happen.

Then, then

Fourth, the reality volume of the second volume has been said above, so I wo n’t go into details. What's more, it may be exaggerated if you really do it, but if you really do it, you can see it again.

What is it?

Fifth, Li Fei saved Duan Yu, you said that there is no purpose. But you think about it, as a person who watched the "Tianlong Babu", he has a good opinion of Duan Yu, and he is dangerous to see Duan Yu.

Rescue, isn't it normal?

What's more, Duan Yu was the emperor of Dali in the future. The protagonist's enemy at that time was Daliao. Save the future emperor of Dali and worship as a brother.

Reasons? I have also made a clear explanation in the book, but did you not see it?

Sixth, you said that Li Fei was written by me as an arrogant upstart.

When you see this is just the beginning, when Li Fei gets a big and small wife system, his personality changes step by step. You may wish to see it later, maybe there will be different senses.

Seventh, in general, I still think that your book review is indeed a bit biased. It may not be the type you like.

In addition, after sitting for a day, I was really tired.

I just responded to some book reviews. I went to take a hot bath first, and then lay on the bed to watch a episode of walking around and rest.

If it has not been updated before eleven in the evening, it means that the state is not very good, and it will not be updated today.

I owe seven thousand words, and make up 15,000 words tomorrow.

ps:. (Undead to be continued ..)