Tokyo Gentleman Story

??? There are not many guests in the hotel. When eating, everyone came to the banquet hall and sat in a row. Then the waiter in traditional Japanese clothes would serve the tableware and dishes. The dishes here are just Locally sourced special dishes are exquisite and delicious, which is also a special feature. [ads: This site has a new URL, shorthand method:,]

　　 "Oh, we're seeing each other again, boy...Huh?" Just as Morinka and Yukino sat down, they found the uncle next to them.

Uncle 　　 saw Morinka appear, and immediately greeted him, but when he saw Yukino, he was taken aback.

　　 "Twins?" he exclaimed.

　　 Actually, it's not just him. After hearing the uncle's voice, several tourists next to him also turned their heads, all shocked by the appearance of the two.

　　 Twins are already rare things, let alone such a lovely pair of twins.

　　 The two people are almost exactly the same, which is indeed very conspicuous in this place.

　　 "Is there a problem?" Morinka asked.

　　 "That's... Brother Jun?" The uncle asked in doubt.

　　 "It's my sister!" Senxia rolled her eyes directly.

　　 "Sorry, sorry." The uncle smiled awkwardly.

　　 Seeing Yukino’s somewhat puzzled eyes, Morinka smiled and said, "This is the uncle I knew when I was in the hot spring."

Uncle 　　 put on a pair of glasses at this time, which made people feel very gentle, even a little serious, but when faced with Morinka, he seemed to have a feeling of weakness.

　　 There is no way, after acknowledging the wrong gender, he felt short of breath when facing Morinka.

　　 But Morinya didn't care about this uncle, he was more concerned about another thing at this time.

　　 He asked Yukino, "Xuno, you said you have been practicing writing novels all the time?"

　　 "Yes." Yukino nodded, her face was a little reddish for some reason, and she didn't know what she was thinking, "Brother, do you have anything else?"

　　 "Well, that's it. The theme of our club's winter is EVA. Do you think you can write a fan novel?"

　　 The uncle was already about to start eating breakfast, but after hearing Morinka's words, he stopped and quietly listened to their words.

　　 "EVA's novel?" Yukino thought for a while. "Well, what kind of content is it?"

　　 "In the recent theatrical version, humans and the earth have been completely wiped out. Our story begins here." Senxia said.

　　 "Humans and apostles are all annihilated, only Asuka and Shinji are left at this time. What story can I write at this time?" The uncle next to him couldn't help but ask.

"Tsk, I can write a lot." Morinka expressed disdain to the other party's opinion. "Although humanity is all annihilated, Shinji regrets his inaction, and then the protagonist of our story Shinji is because of Lilith's Power, take this memory back to the past..."

Huh? Seems interesting?

Uncle 　　 also crossed his head.

"Our story begins here. Shinji relied on his own prophetic foresight, and then began to take another path in the development of the story. However, things are different from what he imagined..." Morinka introduced the outline of the whole story Again.

　　 "Yuno, what do you think of this script?"

　　 "It's a very interesting story!" Yukino didn't speak yet. The uncle next to him broke in again.

"Well, the story is quite interesting, especially the ending of Shinji and Asuka with a daughter at the end. It's really interesting, maybe it's possible to write it out. But this story seems a bit cruel to Ayanami... "

　　 The story told by Morika is very fond of Asuka, but Ayanami's position in the story is very bad.

　　 "It's okay, didn't Ayanami put things down in the end? This is also a kind of salvation for Ayanami!" Anyway, after a story is written, no matter how others understand it, we are only responsible for writing the story, not for the explanation.

"Yeah. It's really interesting. This story, especially in the back, is that the 17th apostle is not Kaoru but Shinji himself. This is simply a story of a great reversal!" The uncle next to him was happier than Yukino, and he had discovered the new world. feel.

　　 Uncle. What the **** are you?

　　 "By the way, what are you going to call this story?" He asked again.

"Uncle, don't you want to plagiarize?" Senxia looked at him despisingly, "If you draw this kind of fan story, even if you draw it, it won't have any commercial value. If you want to make money, Just write the story honestly!"

　　 "No, no, I'm really only interested in this story!" He hurriedly denied, "EVA is my favorite work, it's just my interest."

It’s just that he thought for a while and then said, “It’s just that, from a certain perspective, this is no longer the story of EVA itself. Asuka’s character was originally dispensable. In this story, Asuka was elevated to such a high level. Compared with the original story, this kind of thing can only be regarded as an outer story or something."

　　 "Huh?" Although Morinatsu is not a fragrant party, he was surprised when he heard someone describe Asuka as "optional".

　　 Hmm...By the way, I always feel like I have heard this statement somewhere?

　　 "Uncle, you just said this, did you have the courage to yell when the EVA was shown in the cinema?"

　　 Hearing what Morinata said, the uncle was taken aback, then he wiped the sweat from his forehead: "Probably he will be killed?"

　　 "More than being killed, will you be frustrated?" Senxia looked at the uncle strangely, "And, this is a fan anyway, what do you care about doing so much?"

In fact, compared to the original author, Mori Xia is much more restrained. The original author simply likes Asuka too much, so there is some excursion in the whole story, and the character's personality is even more distorted. Mori Xia designed this The script is more reasonable.

　　 However, in the eyes of this uncle, Morinka's story is still very different from the original one.

　　 This person must be Li Dang.

　　 "As far as the story is concerned, it's enough to be interesting, right?" Yukino smiled, "I think it's funny, but now I have an impulse to move around."

"Hey, I actually think Kaoru is very interesting," the uncle next to him seemed to be very concerned about Kaoru, "Such a subtle character, there is no role in your story at all, and it was killed soon after it appeared. It doesn't feel good!"

　　 Why are you interested in this character?

　　 "This kind of role is absolutely not necessary, this is not about the feelings between males and males!" Senxia complained.

"That's not it, it's not BL!" The uncle was surprised and excited. "That's just a wonderful emotion produced at a delicate age! This is a kind of love, but it is definitely not ordinary love or friendship, but a An emotion that transcends everything!"

Uncle 　　's remarks reminded Morinatsu of Naruto and Sasuke. At the end of Naruto, many straight men and straight women with normal sexual orientation thought it was a shame that these two men did not come together.

"In fact, I think the story can be like this," the uncle unfolded his imagination. "At the beginning of the story, Shinji saw Nagisa Kaoru. Shinji thought that the other party was an apostle and wanted to kill him, but was stopped by someone. Later in the story, the two people gradually understood each other. Only then did Shinji realize that he was actually an apostle and Kaoru was just an ordinary person, so he wanted to leave him. However, Kaoru found an anomaly at this time..."

　　 "Stop! Why did the story turn into such a strange development!" This is entirely for the rotten girl! right!

　　 "It's the same person anyway, that's interesting." The uncle also said his thoughts.

　　 "I also think that if it is Shinji and Kaoru, there is no problem." Yukino is not a rotten girl, but at this time, she actually felt that the relationship between the two people was very strange.

　　 "Ah...why do you have to ask about this topic!" Senxia spit out, "We should actually be discussing the same talent, right? The same talent!"

　　 "This is a fan." The uncle teased.

　　 "Uh..." Hearing these words, Morinya felt bad at this time.

　　 "Forget it, Yukino, let's continue talking about this fan script." Morika continued, "Xuno, you should try to write this script first. Our novel must be disciplined."

　　 Actually, if possible, Morinka also wants to add the 18X script to it, but it is Yukino who wrote the article. Morinka does not want this pure child to experience the terrible world of adults.

　　 "I think this script is pretty good. If it's not writing EVA but original, it's okay to submit it, right?" The uncle did not continue to discuss the topic of basic sentiment.

"Because I'm a fan, it's good to practice pen writing." Mori Xia said, "Don't you think that if you use a fan as the subject matter, the story will be more attractive? It is very useful for shaping the confidence of the newcomer. "

　　 At the end of the sentence, Senxiat reduced his voice a little.

　　 "That's it." The uncle glanced at Yukino next to him, and then nodded.

　　 "If you say that, you would also write novels?" The uncle seems to have thought of something~www.wuxiaspot.com~ It's just a little bit, and there have been submissions recently. "

　　 Morinatsu is not proud of her identity, just a little confident.

　　 For Morinka, there are many things in his mind, but even if they are written as novels, it is impossible to write them all by themselves.

　　 Well, Yukino, the great task of EVA-RETAKE's novelization is entrusted to you. My brother will definitely train you to become a talent!

　　……

　　 I just bought the monitor for two days and there was a problem. It was all messy.

　　 Stop talking nonsense, continue the code word, ask for votes for support!

　　 Well, after the next update is written, we will start to update it at a fixed time tomorrow. It will be fixed at 12 noon and 7:30 pm, and the others will be updated with 2333. (To be continued.) xh118