Transmigrating to the Ming Dynasty’s Imperial Examination

Although Mr. Lu went to play in the same year during the Mid-Autumn Festival, he never forgot his responsibility as a teacher. He left homework for the students.

After the holiday, I obediently handed in a bunch of big characters and memorized a one-hundred-character essay with my brother. Although Cui Qi didn’t have to study, he had to memorize a few ancient essays to cultivate his Chinese spirit. Both of them go to school during the day, and Cui Qi will go to work in the afternoon. He and Ge can take a rest only after studying in Shenchu. After dinner, it was Cui Xie's turn to take homework and ask him to comment.

Although the title is the most common moon-appreciating poem, it has been written by everyone throughout the ages. It is not the moon, but the feelings when looking at the moon. Some people look at the moon and think about returning, some look at the moon to conceive others, and some are sentimental about current affairs. One can see the character of a person by reading poems.

Lu Juren took the paper, took out a small pen, and dipped cinnabar on the paper while watching.

Although Cui Xie's poem could not write any good lines worthy of drawing circles, it also had a simple meaning, clear text, and an introverted sentiment that fits the requirements of integrity in the Taige style. Although it is a vulgar technique to write parting when he sees Mingyue, his writing is not very sad, and he can see that his heart is broad, which deserves a little praise.

What he wrote was: "Unique is full of light, high winds show cicadas. From now on, the autumn is heavy, and the moon turns away from people. The same picture is the same now and the old, and the mountains and the mountains are beautiful. There is nothing to worship in the building, but the memory is fleeting."

Mr. Lu looked at it and shook his head and laughed: "I asked you to strictly observe the rules and practice first, but you can use the method of saving yourself. Why, is it really impossible to pick up the words?"

Cui Xie smiled and said, "I didn't write well. I wanted to write'Autumn is heavy tonight, and the moon is round to the distant person.' However, I felt that the word'Jin' is heavy with the back, so I switched to the flat voice of Jiangjin. The word has been changed to a flat tone, and the opposite sentence should be changed to a flat tone."

And this "liren" wrote about himself, not Cui Senyi and his youngest son. He is standing on the ground in Beijing now, only seven or eight kilometers away from the dormitory where he passed through. He is not a "distant person", but he has left the previous era and environment.

Staying in the same Beijing city, but more than five hundred years away, can be touched and out of reach. If you travel backwards, you can still see the relics of your own life. It can be worn to the Chenghua Dynasty more than 500 years ago, but except for a chemistry book, a few online novels, and a small movie full of hard drives, I have no thoughts...

Separating from the daily busy work, study, and the feelings that occupy almost all of his leisure mind, what can't circulate in the depths of his heart is actually the longing for the world before he travels.

Cui Xie sighed secretly, and Mr. Lu, who had judged the paper, also sighed long.

Lu Juren himself had left his hometown in his background and floated in Beijing for the imperial examination. He also has wives and children in his family. It is the Mid-Autumn Festival, and the feelings of parting are weighed down in his heart, so the most vulgar thoughts of detachment just evoke his own thoughts.

He finished reading the poem, drew a few points, and pointed to the text to explain where it was not neat, and where the meaning was not in line with Qiu Si's mood.

The sentence "Jin Gu" is a little reluctant to "Jiang Shan" in terms of words, "the same photo today and ancient times, each country and mountains" is not stable enough: in terms of rhythm, the same photo cannot match each other's beat. , Can be described as extremely untidy.

This sentence is also a neckband, and the other sentences between the poems can be wrong or unsteady, but this sentence must be neat and delicate. In addition, when pairing sentences, it is better to oppose, and right is to be bad. There must be a difference in meaning. If the words are opposite and the meaning is the same, it is also called "together with one palm", which is a joke.

Cui Xie nodded again and again, and explained, "I only think about the changes in the past and the present. It's not neat."

When he wrote this sentence, he thought that he was someone who had seen two moons around five hundred years ago. The moon is still the same moon that has remained unchanged for hundreds of millions of years. The lives of the two eras are completely different. Modified text.

Mr. Lu smiled and said: "Writing poems is not writing articles. To explain the meaning of sages and sages, it is enough to write about your own feelings. If you want to write about sorrow, start from a small place. The sound of autumn is shocked and farewell, and you can write about the changes of the past and the past without making any mistakes. You have never seen the ups and downs of a person's life at a young age..."

As he was talking, he suddenly remembered that although Cui Xie has never seen a great change in the world, he has really gone through the ups and downs of his life, and he has a richer experience than his unsuccessful Juren—at least he has never been in a palace in his life. wall.

He quietly swallowed the rest of the teaching, coughed lightly, and turned to the law of salvation: "Blindly pay attention to metrical rules, it is really easy to constrain your thinking. Now that you already know how to save difficult sentences, I will tell you seriously. Right."

You can't just talk about the flat metric when you talk about poems, otherwise you will be confused when you listen to it. Mr. Lu wanted to use the example he wrote, but felt that the poem should be changed according to the students' intentions. After the change, the ills would be eliminated and the style would have to be higher. If you change the poem just for the purpose of changing the metric, and teach it one by one, the poem will be broken and broken, and it will not be good for students to write.

He is a kind person. He simply took the Mid-Autumn Festival poem he wrote before as an example, and first wrote the sentence "The jade building is cold, the pearl and foil photos are still empty", and said to Cui Xie: "I have never taught these two sentences before. You, you will remember later, this kind of sentence is not a verbose sentence, and there is no need to save it."

What he taught before, let Cui Xie practice the basic format of "flat flat flat square flat, flat flat flat square flat". But let go of one step, if there is something like these two sentences, the first word should be flat and flat, or flat and flat, they are all normal sentences, and no remedy is needed.

Among the four sentence patterns of five-character poems, the first characters of three sentences are interchangeable and can be changed at will. Only the first character of the sentence "Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping" cannot be changed to a Zing sound at will. Because of this change, there is only one flat sound in the verse except for the rhyme. This situation is called guping, which can be regarded as a true obsessive sentence and must be remedied in the next sentence.

Lu Juren gave an example at will: "It is enough to change the third word of this sentence to a flat sound like this. There is no remedy in my own sentence in this poem... Li Bai's sentence,'I stay in Matsushita, I have nothing to do. Huan', the third word of the previous sentence should be flat and flat, but the flat change of the third word can be saved or not; the first word of the latter sentence should also be flat and flat, the sentence is almost flat, so the third word The word was changed to a flat tone of'nothing'."

In addition to saving in this sentence, you can also save in opposite sentences. If the sentence is guping and cannot save oneself in this sentence, change the third word of the sentence to Pingsheng to rescue. If not only the first sentence is flat, but the first word of the opposite sentence should be flat, and the third word can be saved by changing it to a flat sound.

Let's take his own poem as an example-"At this time, you are in the Mingguang Palace."

This sentence was originally in the format of "flat, flat, flat, flat". The "this" in the sentence should be used flatly, which is a common and unnecessary variant. But in this sentence, not only should it be used flat but flat, the third word "zhe" is also a word that enters the sound, the whole sentence becomes a solitary sentence, and the third word of the opposite sentence should be changed to the flat sound "ming" Come to the rescue.

While talking about the remedy, Lu Juren looked at the pencil in Cui Xie's hand that was not pleasing to his eyes: "Why do you use this pen to write again? Don't be used to this kind of gestures, because your writing technique is broken. In the future, the font on the face of the examination will be a little bit different, and the future will be different!"

Cui Xie quickly finished taking notes, and explained: "This is just for quickness, so as not to disturb your thoughts, I have to take the ink pen to copy it again. My husband doesn't know, this pen is actually very easy to use and cheap. Wrong words can be erased with steamed buns..."

When he talked about buns, Mr. Lu frowned: "Is this a waste of food?"

Cui Xie quickly explained: "This is also erasable but not erasable. If it is written on a light-colored board or wall, it can be washed off by washing with water, and it can be written over and over again. Our chefs now use this pen to write dishes. The housekeeper also uses it to write the family affairs arrangements. If there is a small matter that you forgot, you can remember it when you look at it or ask someone. You can wash it in the evening, and you can use it again the next day. It is convenient and also It costs no money."

After all, Lu Juren is a scholar who is worried and worried before the world, and happy and happy afterwards. Hearing this, he thought of those poor students who can't afford pen and ink, and said: "So, this pen is a good thing. Ruo. Is there a poor official who can't use paper and ink, can I remember things and copy articles with such a pen?"

Of course it can! Artifacts such as pencils can be used on spaceships, which are much more applicable than writing brushes.

He demonstrated the usage to Mr. Lu and said: "Students think so too. Think of those poor students who don't have the money to buy paper and ink, and some can only practice writing with sand and clear water. If they can't write a few words, they will erase them. This pen can be sharpened very sharply, write tiny characters with clear writing, save paper, and write much faster."

Mr. Lu took the written test by himself, but his writing was not very smooth, the writing was crooked, and the tip of the pen was a little slippery on the paper. He couldn't help putting his pen back and saying, "Is this really good?"

Cui Xie turned his notebook back and showed him his hard-stroke calligraphy: "This is better than a brush, and everyone in the family can use it. After a few days of practice, you will know how to use it. This kind of pen is not the original. In order to practice imitation books, scientific research, but for those Confucian scholars who miss books but can't afford good paper and pens or ordinary people to keep track of things."

Lu Juren took it over and tried again, making it more vigorous. He smashed the tip of the pen and made another cut. He simply withdrew the paper in anger, and slowly wrote a few words on the pad.

The words still don't look good. He didn't care, so he dipped his handkerchief in water and wiped it, and easily wiped a board clean. I wrote a few words harder, wiped it down, and looked at the wooden board. It was still flat and clean without leaving any ink marks.

He thoroughly understood the benefits of a pencil, and exclaimed: "If the gentlemen in the rural community school had such a pen and a board, wouldn't they be able to copy articles for Mengtong to read, and how much money would they save? How many poor villagers can learn to learn about etiquette?"

The broken wooden boards and slates in the country are not valuable, but the paper that can be used for writing is at least six cents of silver, and the worst brush also costs three cents—

He hurriedly asked, "How much is this penny?"

Cui Xie has the final say: "There is less burning now, and the cost of opening the kiln is very high. You have to go up the same amount to slowly reduce it. The refill must include the cost of thrush, clay, and the kiln. It costs three dollars. A catty of silver; the wood wrapped in lime has to be soaked in order to be soft, and it needs to be slotted, which is more expensive. If you don’t pay attention to writing comfortably or uncomfortably, you can buy a refill and wrap it in straw paper and wrap it with twine. Can write."

Lu Juren couldn't even count what he heard. The cheapest brush costs three cents of silver, and paper costs six cents of silver. This kind of lead core costs three cents per catty?

With such a long pen, it’s not too short when Cui Xie writes. Maybe it’s enough to copy a book?

Although people often use eyebrow pencils and charcoal to write, but such things cannot be used as a serious pen. They can only write large characters and are not easy to erase. This thin ink pen is different. This is really something that Mengtong and scholars can use!

He grabbed the pen and asked, "Have you ever thought of giving these pens to the poor?"

As soon as I said it, I thought that his family was not doing well, otherwise I wouldn't have to save money from using the pen, so I changed my words and said, "I don't need this year's bundle repair. How about changing to this pen with you? There are many poor people in my hometown and all parts of Beizhili who can't afford to go to social studies. I want to give this gift to the social studies in those poor villages. It is always the heart of our scholars."

Mr. Lu is really bookish, but this bookishness is also very cute. Isn't it the same for those kind people who donate to impoverished mountainous areas in modern times?

Cui Xie smiled: "This pen has just been tried out, and it has not been officially burned. It is for our own use for the time being, and it is still placed outside the bookstore of Brother Xiaoqi's home for poor students to copy books. It will be built in the future. The kiln can be burned into hundreds of kilograms by myself. Please send your husband to various social schools so that more children can study."

"Good! Good! Good!" Lu Juren seemed to see how many poor boys were writing on the table with pencils, and gradually began to read the book, and he was so excited that he didn't change his poem: Let it go, and when I look back, I will write another article about the five rules of the hard ink pen. It is not limited to rhyme, no formality, no stickiness-when it is done, I will start with this kind of temperament and teach you how to make it. Ancient poetry."

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"Mid-Autumn Moon Watching and Dong Xuan Jae Tai Shi"

Ming·U Daxiang

On the full moon layer of the city, in the autumnal garden. The Yulou is cold, and the bead and foil photos are still empty. Looking at the United States tonight, several places are the same with affection. At this time, you are in the Mingguang Palace.