Traveling at the same time, creating the door of truth

Well, it's over. The story ends here.

For the remaining content, there is nothing much to write about Bai Mo in different parallel time and space in the heavens and the worlds. Some half-written drafts are sent out and the ending is skipped after more than ten or twenty chapters.

The full text is close to 800,000 words. I think it is a perfect ending. The stories of dragon clan, mystery, heaven-shaking, and magic circle can all be concluded from beginning to end.

Ending remarks, thinking carefully, there are still too many flaws in this book. The thinness of the story and the communication and dialogue between the characters are written very superficially, just like paper, which will break with a poke.

——This is hard, there is no ripples, and there is no beginning, development, turning point, and ending.

Well, this is the author's own fault. He chose the theme of simultaneous travel in a rush, and then the golden finger is repeatedly thin.

After all, those of us who have received compulsory education are really crushed by those who write novels.

The idea of ​​farming engraved in the bones...

The people depend on food for their survival and the locust disasters and other man-made rebellion paths...

The consciousness that everyone is born equal and the manipulation of theocracy and kingship...

Basically, they can all shout out high walls, slowly claim the throne, and improve military strength through economic construction...

These things were dragon-slaying techniques in ancient times and could support the royal court.

With these accumulated experiences, the time travelers are all old monsters who have practiced peerless magic for five thousand years. Compared with those novel natives who are still in the agricultural era, the feudal monarchy era, and the slave system, they are at a crushing level.

In the world of cultivating immortals, who among the time travelers would think that the Tao is high and cannot be desecrated? Basically, everyone is a demon master who practices magic.

Compared with modern people who have been immersed in the Internet, the villain demon monks in those novels are really too pure, just like little white rabbits.

First-class brain holes, second-class settings, third-class writing, and fourth-class plots.

Always subconsciously consider if I were him, her, or it, then what would "I" do under the identity, settings, family and other factors.

Always consider how the family will develop and how the world's order will be.

But I think this is also a strength. At least it won't happen that the protagonist grows all the way, but the villain turns a blind eye and turns a deaf ear.

Everyone has had fantasies, fantasizing that they are immortals who slay demons and monsters, emperors who hold power with the law of heaven, saviors who push the world forward and save the world, and audiences who regard all living beings as a play...

And logic is the skeleton that supports the fantasy world.

One event after another, the interaction between characters, these are what the author lacks.

This is also what this book lacks. The setting of the story is imaginative enough, and the development under logical deduction is inevitable, but the plot and story have no fluctuations, just like compressed biscuits.

There are many things missing.

Realm improvement, plot story, background description, character setting, character image, outline and details, ups and downs.

These all need to be learned.

See you next time.