Under One Person: I am a lay Buddhist with a salary of 9 to 5

Chapter 55 Try it and you will die! (First update)

Facing the siege of three people, Zhuge Qing dodged all the attacks one by one as if his body skills were fully charged. In the end, he reversed the opponent's methods and allowed the opponent to be defeated by his own methods.

Zhang Chulan was stunned by this wave of operations.

"Bing Zhuque, Zhuge Qing wins!"

As the referee read out the result of the game, Xu Si clicked his tongue: "This Zhuge Qing is really not easy to deal with..."

As he spoke, he focused his gaze on Zhou Fengliu beside him: "Xiao Zhou, go up and kill this Zhuge Qing..."

"Ah?" Zhou Fengliu raised his eyebrows upon hearing this: "Me?"

...

After watching Zhuge Qing's performance, Zhou Fengliu, Zhang Chulan and others rushed to the next competition venue. When they were halfway there, they saw two people arguing about something not far away.

"Mo Dan, Linglong is gone, I don't have anyone to go to the stud!" Canglong was very depressed. He never expected that Lu Linglong would be eliminated so quickly.

"Damn fat man, if you don't have that little girl, you can join others, Zhang Lingyu, Zhuge Qing, and that Zhou Fengliu..." The person talking to him was a purple-haired girl named Bai Shixue.

"Don't mention Zhou Fengliu to me...I have nothing to do with him!"

Hearing someone mention Zhou Fengliu again, Zhang Chulan pricked up his ears and listened for a few words. When he heard the words "death and death", he turned to Zhou Fengliu and said:

"Brother Liu, listen..."

Hearing the noise, Canglong and Bai Shixue both looked over. When they saw Zhou Fengliu, Canglong's fat face fell into confusion.

"Damn fat man...you are in trouble." Bai Shixue looked like she wanted to see a good show.

"I..." Zanglong coughed lightly: "Why am I miserable? What I just said is that he is worthy of Zhou Fengliu. I want to watch him play every day!"

Hidden Dragon withdrew a line of dialogue and fired a rainbow fart backhand.

This is not cowardice.

This is from the heart.

"You changed your tune so quickly!" Bai Shixue greeted Zhang Chulan and the others: "Come on, is Zhang Chulan interested in making some money?"

"Money?" Hearing this word, Zhou Fengliu became interested. He vaguely remembered that there seemed to be a handicap in the plot of the original Luotian Dajiao where you could place bets.

"What?" Zhang Chulan asked.

"Hey." Bai Shixue shook the tablet in his hand, which contained information on the participants and odds of each competition venue.

"This is Fatty's website that specializes in collecting information about strangers. I made a handicap for this conference on it. You can suppress whoever you think will win. You can also suppress yourself."

After listening to Bai Shixue's introduction, Zhang Chulan took a look and found that his odds were frighteningly high, while Zhou Fengliu's odds were one to one.

"Holy crap, the odds between me and Brother Liu are so ridiculous?" Zhang Chulan said that the gap was a bit big.

"There's nothing you can do about it, your performance in the first game was too explosive." Zanglong interjected: "No one is optimistic about you now."

"What's the maximum profit you can make from this handicap?" Zhou Fengliu asked the question at this time.

"Well... the upper limit of a few million shouldn't be a problem. If it's more, it won't be a problem. After all, it's just a small fight between juniors..." Bai Shixue said that the game was too small to withstand the stud.

"That's right." Zhou Fengliu nodded and then looked at Zhang Chulan beside him.

Um.

I don’t know if this is considered income from work?

Zhou Fengliu wanted to give Zhang Chulan a try. After all, he knew the plot of the original work, so he was basically unbiased.

"Brother Liu, when you look at me like this... I have an ominous feeling." Zhang Chulan couldn't help but swallowed when he saw Zhou Fengliu staring at him.

"It's okay, it's okay." Zhou Feng showed a "nuclear" smile.

...

"All winning teams please assemble!"

"All winning teams please assemble!"

Not long after, everyone heard the announcement and gathered in the open space where the morning draw was held. After a round of eliminations, the originally many contestants were reduced to only thirty-two.

The setting sun was still shining, and I saw the old Heavenly Master standing on a high platform. There was a wooden table beside him, and the red box for drawing lots on it was particularly conspicuous. Just now, everyone took turns to come forward and draw the lots.

"Thank you for your hard work. So far, the first round of competition has been completed. There are thirty-two winners."

The old Heavenly Master stood with his hands behind his back and glanced at the people in the audience. When he saw that everyone had notes in their hands, he continued:

"The next competition will be conducted on a one-on-one basis. The name on the slip of paper you drew will be your next opponent."

Listening to Master Tian's introduction to the rules of the competition, Zhou Fengliu glanced at the note in his hand, and three large characters were vaguely visible on it.

Fengshayan.

What a coincidence.

Zhou Fengliu glanced at the crowd and spotted Feng Shayan's figure in the distance.

Swallow...Since we have met, it means that this is fate...

While he looked at Feng Shayan, Feng Shayan seemed to know her opponent in the next match and cast her gaze over.

The two looked at each other, and Feng Shayan looked a little bitter.

Damn it.

Her crow-mouthed brother really got it right!

...

"Brother Liu, who is your next opponent?"

At this moment, the crow-mouthed brother Feng Xingtong came to Zhou Fengling. He first glanced at the note in Zhou Fengling's hand. When he saw that it was his elder sister, he made a "puff" sound.

"Sorry... I really didn't mean it." Feng Xingtong saw his elder sister walking this way, and he tried hard to hold back his laughter.

but...

He had not received any professional training, nor was he one of those two policemen who loved to laugh. He really couldn't help it.

"I laughed so hard... It's really bad."

"What's wrong?" Zhang Chulan and Feng Baobao also came over. After seeing the note in Zhou Fengliu's hand, Zhang Chulan was silent for a second.

"Laughing, what's so funny." Feng Shayan came over and scolded Feng Xingtong.

"Sister... Do you remember what you said, what if you run into a big brother?" Feng Xingtong first asked the question, and then answered it herself:

"Then... This is good, it really ran into."

"If you run into it, you run into it." Zhou Fengliu shrugged: "Brother, can I still make things difficult for your sister?"

Zhou Fengliu said that he would definitely stop, after all, Feng Shayan in front of him was his "beloved relative", "good friend" and "good landlord" who he drank and talked with.

"Speaking of which... I don't think I have really experienced your methods." Feng Shayan thought about it and said so.

"Do you want to try?"

"I'll teach you a lesson." Feng Shayan felt that although the point of the draw was a bit unlucky, it should also be an opportunity to learn.

"No, no, it should be "Try and you will die." Feng Xingtong stood up to correct his sister's statement.

"Feng Xingtong, you are narrowing your path." Feng Shayan looked at her younger brother after hearing the voice: "You are laughing like this, aren't you afraid that you will meet him next time?"

Hearing this, the smile on Feng Xingtong's face froze instantly. He swallowed his saliva, then withdrew the topic and turned to look at Zhang Chulan beside him:

"Brother Chulan, who is your next opponent?"

...

Ps: To be honest, I read the comments on the previous chapter, and they are indeed very reasonable. Readers who are familiar with Lao Meng should also know that I am really bad at writing emotional scenes.

Whether it is a fan work or an original work, I always think that emotional scenes are something that authors find difficult to handle.

Emotional scenes seem simple, but in fact it is difficult to grasp the degree.

If the relationship is handled too quickly, the protagonist will look like a bulldozer. If the relationship is handled too slowly, it will feel like the reader is being kept hanging.

If it is written too much, it will make people feel disgusted and sick. If there are few details, the characters cannot be highlighted and there is no sense of immersion.

To put it bluntly, it is because the sense of proportion cannot be mastered, so many authors will choose the path of no female protagonist.

Lao Meng has written several books, big and small. Because the emotional scenes in the previous books were written very rubbish, he has always avoided the portrayal of emotional scenes. At the beginning of this book, he wanted to try to portray the emotional scenes.

At present, the effect seems to be very poor. Tonight, I have been thinking about what the core of the emotional scenes is. Later, I thought about the process of men and women falling in love, and it seems that I have some understanding.

The most intoxicating period of falling in love is the ambiguous period. Both parties are pulling, testing each other, and moving forward little by little. This period is the most interesting compared to the period after dating.

Same.

I now think that writing emotional scenes is the same. Whether it is the male protagonist, the female protagonist, or the female supporting role, launching a dog-licking attack at the beginning will greatly reduce the sense of immersion and cause everyone's disgust.

I think the reason why Xia He is not well written is that the setting is very ordinary, the emotional handling is also very rough, and because of the character setting of the protagonist, the interaction with Xia He is extremely weak...which has become a poison point.

I also realized this problem later. I couldn't pull it back, so I could only play to my strengths and avoid my weaknesses, play to the good writing, and reduce the portrayal of emotional drama.

As for the subsequent emotional drama of this book, I still want to try it tentatively. While playing to my strengths and avoiding my weaknesses to satisfy everyone's desire to see the "Fang Qian Jushi" type of protagonist, I try to make everyone feel comfortable, learn to improve my own emotional drama writing method, and practice for Lao Meng to write other books in the future. I also hope that everyone can understand the author's desire to improve and give some tolerance. (I want to improve too much, woo woo woo)

As for the core tone of this book, you can rest assured that it will not change. The character of the protagonist will be unified in both the front and the back, and there will be no sense of separation.

Having said so much, I am also very grateful for your support and encouragement.

To thank you all, I will update three times today (one in the morning, two after 6pm)

As I said, I beg for everything, a small gift, a new author begs for everything. (I beg you)

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