Variety: Biqigu's daily life will not encounter real things

Chapter 070

If you can.

Hiqigu really didn’t want to do such troublesome things.

But ah…

If it weren’t for herself, Machida Yuanko wouldn’t have ~ been busy leaving.

So much so that I didn’t even have time to help the girl read the manuscript.

Since it was because of her own sake that the girl ran for nothing.

If you do not take responsibility.

Wait until you think about it after the fact.

Hikiya also feels guilty.

Instead of feeling guilty afterwards, do something now to compensate.

“Although I am certainly not comparable to Miss Machida at my level, I should still be able to do it just to help see where there is a problem with the manuscript, right?”

“I just don’t know if this guy wants to.”

Think of it this way.

Bikiya looked at Wu Liuli, silently waiting for the girl’s reply.

“Huh!?”

Wugen Liuli was stunned for a moment, and then exclaimed: “Teacher Biqigu, what did you just say!?” ”

“I don’t seem to hear clearly.”

“Help me read the manuscript!!?”

Don’t want to?

So how to compensate!?

I already knew that I would not take out the latter part directly.

Hiqigu couldn’t help but sigh and replied, “That’s right. ”

“If you don’t want to, forget it.”

“May… Willing! ”

“Of course I do!!”

“I should say that I must trouble you to do this!!”

Because of being too excited.

Wugen Liuli’s face seemed to be dyed red with paint.

“Ju. I can actually ask “Mr. Dube” to help me read the manuscript or something… I’m not in a dream, am I!? ”

“This is also so happy!!”

Really…

It’s a shame to let non-professionals read the manuscript!

If I had, I would never have been able to do such a thing!

This guy is really desperate to write a novel.

Obviously so shy, but can still endure it.

Or maybe that’s enlightenment!

Bikiya looked at Wu Liuli, whose face was ruddy.

I can’t help but sigh in my heart.

“Since the other party has already come up with such an enlightenment.”

“I can’t just be perfunctory!”

With that in mind.

Hikiya results a manuscript from the girl’s hand.

I looked at it seriously.

Time passes.

Sitting opposite Kigu, Gogen Ruri.

The mood at this time is also from the excitement at the beginning, to the apprehension, and then to the current uneasiness.

“Does Mr. Dobian think I’m writing too badly?”

“Not true! Now my level is already very poor, after all, I have not even met the conditions for publication, do you think that I write poorly is not a matter of course? ”

“There’s no need to be sad about it!”

“You’ll probably say something very harsh later?”

“It’s okay! If not harsh. I also don’t realize the seriousness of the problem!! ”

“Besides, even Machida editors sometimes say something very heavy!”

“There’s no need to take it to heart!!”

“But…”

“What if the teacher is disappointed in me…”

Wugen Liuli squeezed her fingers tightly.

The various thoughts in my head are mixed together.

It made the girl more and more nervous and scared.

Especially when the expression on Hiqigu’s face changed every time.

The girl’s heart couldn’t help but be mentioned.

Until Hichigu’s expression stretched.

Only then did he let out a long sigh of relief.

Another half an hour passed.

It’s 11:45.

Biqigu finally turned to the last page.

Because it’s a manuscript.

So it’s a lot faster than formal reading.

Otherwise, with the hundreds of thousands of manuscripts of the girl, if you want to read them word by word, it is not something that can be done in a short time.

Read the last content.

Hikiya put the manuscript in his hand back on the table.

Close your eyes.

Organize in your mind the language you are going to use next.

Almost accompanied by Hikigu’s movements.

Wugen Liuli’s breathing couldn’t help but be beaten.

The heart is beating wildly!

Anticipation, fear of two emotions are constantly churning in the depths of the heart.

Hikigu, who opened his eyes, fell on the girl.

The word “nervous” written all over his face can be seen by a person.

“Don’t be so nervous.”

“I’m just a layman, and it doesn’t matter what I suggest.”

“Just listen to it.”

Biqigu appeased, but it didn’t seem to have such a good effect as expected.

The girl laughed dryly.

Layman?

Inconsequential?

Just listen to it?

If you really believe such words, you are really naïve!

At least five more liuli will not believe a word!

Not to mention that she knows the other party’s level as a creator.

Even if the other party is just an ordinary author with a publishing qualification, the girl will listen carefully to the other party’s suggestions.

After all, not everyone will be kind enough to help you find your shortcomings!

It’s just that…

Even fans of “Teacher Dube” can’t help but want to complain about this remark!

Can a layman get Fujimi Fantasial’s reward?

A big guy like you, who deliberately takes the time to read my manuscript, will say something that will be insignificant nonsense?

Even your teachings are just listened to… In your heart, where did I come from as a “great god”!?

But…

“To say such a thing, the teacher is completely modest… Wrong! It should be said that it is too approachable!! ”

Thank you.

Wugen Liuli’s mood was still slightly relaxed at the moment.

“Sense… What is the teacher’s impression!? ”

Gogen Liuli opened his eyes wide and looked at Hichigu.

“Feelings…”

Although I can feel the expectation under the girl’s eyes.

But lying about this kind of thing will not do the girl any good at all!

Based on such a judgment.

Hiqigu decided to tell the truth!

“The plot is too weak. No, it should be said that it is too old-fashioned? Or where is the stitching monster more suitable!? ”

Just this opening of the sentence caused a critical blow to Wugen Liuli!

However, for this kind of thing, Wugen Liuli actually has a premonition.

I couldn’t come up with a good idea, so I put together what I had seen.

It’s just that…

“This really won’t work!”

“A discerning person can see at a glance, at most to deceive those guys who have not seen many works, right?”

When Gogen Liuli thought about this kind of thing.

Biqigu did not stop either.

“It was obviously supposed to be the climax, but the incident was suddenly solved inexplicably…”

“A lot of things were laid out in the early stage, but in the end there was no explanation.”

“One thing hasn’t been solved yet, so let’s start the next thing…”

“There are also big problems in terms of personality!”

“I can vaguely see the shadow of other works. This is not a big problem.

After all, the industry has been developing for so many years now, and it is really normal for characters to bump into faces, but ah… If you want to imitate a character, then imitate it well!

If you want to be original, then integrate the emotions you want to express!

What is the situation with this kind of upward and downward movement? ”

Listen to the shortcomings that Hiqigu found one after another.

Wugen Liuli’s eyes gradually became dazed.

“So there are still so many problems…”

“Obviously I’ve asked Editor Machida to help me see it so many times and learned so many skills from her.”

“So I still can’t!”

“Sure enough” · Guys like me shouldn’t think about writing novels, right? ”

“Obviously, except for the speed of the hand, there is no talent at all in other aspects…”

“Or not… Just give up like that. ”

“Anyway, there are no achievements, and no one knows… So, in this way, study well from now on. ”

“Live an ordinary life.”

Wugen Liuli is not without a blow.

But that blow is different from the current situation!

It doesn’t matter what you look like in the eyes of outsiders.

But ah!

The person in front of her, who is constantly carrying out her precious opinions, is the person she respects the most!

Even if he said this, what reason can he not believe it!?

So.

Novels or something, there is no need to stick to it…

Wugen Liuli thought like this, confused and thought.

The outside world seemed to be isolated from her.

“I’m really sorry, Hikigu-sensei.”

“Obviously so seriously helping me find the problem, I didn’t listen to it well…”

The girl is sinking in a closed world of her own creation…

And the outside world, I don’t know how much time has passed.

Maybe a minute.

Or maybe a few hours.

A voice suddenly sounded in the girl’s ears.

A voice that is not large, but extremely clear.

“But.”

“These things are very ordinary things that can be slowly exercised by time and learning.”

“But there is one thing that not everyone can have.”

“The pen of God”! ”

“It may be difficult to see such a thing in light novels, but every literary work that has survived to this day has a unique “divine pen” that belongs to the author! ”

“And I see such a possibility in your words.”

“So…”

“Don’t be discouraged, just keep trying, and one day countless people will laugh and be sad because of your works.”

As the sound disappears.

The world regains color in the eyes of the maiden.

The girl’s eyes also reappeared in moving colors.

“Really… Are you sure? ”

The voice was slightly choked.

“Really.”

Biqigu did not hesitate to give the girl affirmation.

“Thank you… Thank you, teacher! ”

Although there are still tears in the corners of his eyes.