Warhammer: In the Name of Nirvana
Chapter 34 Some words at the end of the volume
Ha, this volume is successfully completed~
In fact, this book can be regarded as a passionate writing. I submitted the manuscript at that time and was rejected (the reason is that the beginning of the writing was too scattered and there were not many protagonists), so I thought about it and rushed to publish it on the first day of December. .
At present, although it is a bit disappointing, overall it is pretty good.
The plot of this book is roughly taken step by step. Maybe the author will come up with some fantastic ideas when writing the next chapter. The general outline of the plot currently only extends to the outbreak of the great rebellion, so you will find that I am I rarely write very clearly when I am writing in advance, just to prevent the book from being read later (fun).
The first volume can be considered a carefully selected one by me. The story of Dawn Star in the Warhammer universe is both strange (it's not a war but disaster relief) and very grimdark (it took a long time to try to no avail, but everyone died), but the actual writing There were still a lot of problems at the time, many places were not fully described, and many plots were promoted in a hurry (no choice, for the sake of daily updates). For example, I didn’t write much about Ahriman’s bad character and poor popularity. came out, and the plot of Perturabo dealing with the planet's instruments was not originally intended to end in one chapter, but when it was actually written... it had to be made do.
So if you readers have any questions, you can ask them. As long as they don’t conflict too much with the author’s basic ideas, I will try to change them.
By the way, let me explain the two primarchs here: Perturabo's attitude towards Morgan is one of appreciation for like-minded and capable people, but he is unwilling to show this appreciation too obviously. He thinks this is weak. .
This is also the reason why Perturabo suddenly got angry in Chapter 30: Magnus's healthy and playful attitude towards people with abilities made him dissatisfied, so the impulsive side came to the fore in a short time...
Going back to Magnus, the image of this primarch is actually quite negative in this volume, especially the scene where he accidentally crushed a Thousand Sons to death with his own hands (some readers said that this scene might be too... irritating) , not very suitable for the overall style of writing).
When I was shaping Magnus, I focused more on his weakness, compromise, escapism, and lack of responsibility as a scholar. This was mainly for the sake of the plot. Otherwise, based on the comparison of the combat capabilities of Morgan and Magnus, , there is no way to get Magnus’s soul fragment calmly...
I'm sorry, Pony, I confess to you.
And Morgan, I have a fork in the road when it comes to shaping Morgan. One is absolutely selfish and egoistic (such as plotting against Magnus), but with such a protagonist... I don’t know if you can accept it.
The other is to gradually have some emotions. The specific situation depends on the plot. Maybe one day, Morgan will have the belief to take the initiative to fight for others (a slight spoiler, this route points to our lovely archangel).
But it’s a bit early to say this now. What we need to worry about now is the second volume. Compared with the first volume, the plot of the second volume will be very large. The Randan War will affect at least nine legions and several original bodies. I also plan to have part of the Second Legion appear in this volume.
The number one character in the second volume must be Lion King Zhuang Sen. This person... is very difficult to get along with...
I don’t even ask for Lion King’s soul fragment. If Morgan can gain a little bit of Lion King’s trust here, even if it succeeds, I still have to think carefully about what kind of guy Lion King likes.
Secondly, I also plan to create an outstanding figure in the Second Legion, probably the second person of the Legion like Sevita, who is reliable and powerful.
In short, the above are the author's personal thoughts and feelings. You can raise any opinions in the comment area, and you can also join the group. The group account will be pinned to the top of the comment area.
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