Fan Ziruo's favorability score suddenly rose from 45 to 65 as her mood suddenly became excited, and then fell back to 52 as her mood calmed down.

"Mr. He, after reading it, do you have any suggestions for my novel?"

Fan Ziruo was still sitting and talking as before, but this time He Yunxiao could hear a hint of implicit expectation in her tone.

Any suggestions? I suggest you don't write a novel.

He Yunxiao repeatedly considered the words he used, thinking about how to point out the problems in Fan Ziruo's novel without hurting her enthusiasm for writing.

"I think the biggest problem with your novel...well...is that you...you actually..."

You don't actually know how to tell a story.

He Yunxiao wanted to say this, but looking at Fan Ziruo's crystal beautiful eyes, he really couldn't say such heartless words.

Forget it, they are all here to gain favor anyway, so I will help her in "writing novels".

He Yunxiao finally said: "The biggest problem with your novel is your lack of experience."

Fan Ziruo asked doubtfully: "Lack of experience?"

"Yeah." He Yunxiao talked about his professional field this time, "In martial arts novels, the protagonist often has to sleep in the wild. The girl has never caught a chicken or killed a rabbit. How can she depict the protagonist hunting for food? What about the scene?”

"Similarly. The girl doesn't know any martial arts. Although she can read martial arts charts and imagine fighting scenes, the things she writes often lack fatal details, making the whole scene seem unreal."

"Like here."

He Yunxiao spread out the manuscript and showed it to Fan Ziruo.

"Did you see anything wrong in this fight?"

Fan Ziruo re-read the plot he had originally written. After careful consideration, he really didn't find anything wrong.

"I don't see anything wrong."

He Yunxiao said softly: "Zi Ruo."

[Fan Ziwei’s favorability degree changed from 52 to 51]

Fan Ziruo didn't like being called so intimate by outsiders. She frowned slightly and shifted her gaze from the novel on the table to He Yunxiao.

However, what she saw was a roaring fist!

This fist is extremely fierce and fast!

Almost instantly, it went from a small ball to a huge thing that filled the entire field of vision.

Fan Ziruo was stunned, and the fist stopped an inch in front of her.

The wind generated by the whistling fist continued forward after the fist stopped, blowing on Fan Ziruo's face and gently blowing up the hair on her back.

"How's it going? Did you find anything wrong with what you wrote?"

He Yunxiao retracted his fist and asked with a smile.

Fan Ziruo was speechless for a moment, pondered thoughtfully for a while, and suddenly realized something.

"When masters compete, they don't care about flowers and plants!"

He Yunxiao pretended to be an old master with a long beard. While stroking his non-existent beard, he imitated the old man's voice and said: "Exactly, exactly."

[Fan Ziwei’s favorability degree changed from 51 to 55]

"Hmm."

Beauty Fan was amused by He Yunxiao's actions. She smiled so much that she bent over and lowered her head slightly. She had to put one hand on the table, her big eyes curved into crescents, and her other hand covered the raised corner of her mouth.

He Yunxiao saw that Fan Ziruo was happy, and he was also happy in his heart. Then he made a sudden realization and said, "I know why the girl doesn't like to laugh."

Fan Ziruo asked in confusion: "Why?"

"Because the girl is a good person."

"Why don't I smile often even though I'm a good person?"

"If a girl smiles often and is seen by others, letting them know that she is no match for the girl, it will only increase jealousy and resentment in the world."

[Fan Ziwei’s favorability degree changed from 55 to 56]

Damn it, it’s different when the favorability level is high. When I praised her before when the favorability level was low, it always lowered the favorability level. Now she’s finally on the right track and it’s starting to rise!

Fan Zi smiled weakly and didn't care too much about He Yunxiao's praise of her.

She doesn't value external things, on the contrary, she values ​​inner satisfaction more.

"Master He, please continue to teach me martial arts."

He Yunxiao was naturally happy, and he said with some emotion: "There are many reasons for a person to practice martial arts, such as strengthening the body, joining the army, and starting a sect. However, this is the first time I have heard of practicing martial arts for writing novels. "

Fan Ziruo said seriously: "Young master said it. 'Without investigation, there is no right to speak.'"

Although He Yunxiao said this himself, he was quite embarrassed at the moment, "You can't do everything yourself, right?"

Fan Ziruo stretched his hands behind his back to hold his shawl hair, preparing to learn martial arts.

"Why can't you do everything yourself?"

He Yunxiao didn't know how to explain to her.

Could it be that when you write that the heroine will get pregnant, do you also want to try giving birth yourself?

hiss……

It seems, isn’t it impossible?

Fan Ziruo quickly tied up his hair and let it stay on his head.

She stood in the middle of the study, taking the posture that He Yunxiao taught her yesterday.

He Yunxiao stood aside and said: "Practice what I taught you yesterday and try it first."

Fan Ziruo said "hmm", and then earnestly repeated the posture that He Yunxiao taught her yesterday.

Despite Fan Ziruo's delicate appearance, He Yunxiao was surprised to find that she actually restored the professor's posture well yesterday.

[Specialty: Learning]

She is indeed a girl who is good at learning!

No wonder you can become a "number one talented woman" by sleeping while reading a book.

He Yunxiao didn't teach much yesterday. Fan Ziruo repeated the postures one by one and finished them quickly.

"Master He, how are you doing?"

He Yunxiao knew that Fan Ziruo's personality tended to be serious and steady, and he didn't like people who were full of jokes.

He gave up the teasing words that had just come to his lips and said seriously: "Miss Zi Ruo did a good job. But there is something I must tell the girl clearly first."

"you say."

"In martial arts training, in addition to hard work, talent is also valued. If Zi Ruo girl wants to practice the wonderful fights in the novel, she may not be able to do it even after practicing for many years."

These words directly extinguished most of Fan Ziruo's interest in learning martial arts.

Should I concentrate on learning martial arts, achieve success in my studies, and then write novels?

When will this have to wait?

Seeing her worried look, He Yunxiao said with relief: "Actually, a girl doesn't have to be a real master, she just needs to be a fake master."

Fan Ziruo and Bingxue were smart and immediately understood what He Yunxiao meant.

"Master He is saying that it's enough for me to just learn the basics?"

He Yunxiao said: "When it comes to writing novels, only the superficial knowledge is enough."

He Yunxiao took out a copy of Enlightenment Palm Technique from home and handed it to Fan Ziruo.

"If you don't believe it, girl, let's do an experiment. You can see this palm technique once, then practice it again, and then we can try it against each other."

Fan Ziruo had never been familiar with martial arts, so when he saw what He Yunxiao said, he had no choice but to do what he said.

She is not Du Yinyun.

The Du family has a strong martial arts culture, and Du Lie often practices martial arts at home. Although Du Yinyun has not learned it, he has been familiar with it since he was a child, and many martial arts moves are familiar to him. The Fan family does not like martial arts, and even deliberately resists martial arts. This makes Fan Ziruo naturally know very little about martial arts.

Even in this situation, she watched He Yunxiao's Enlightenment Palm Technique, and when she tried to do it herself, she was able to restore it to a perfect level.

Seeing that she had almost learned it, He Yunxiao said, "Miss Zi Ruo, come and try fighting with me. Don't worry, just use what you just learned and hit me casually."

Fan Zi nodded weakly, then learned the moves in the book and waved his palm towards He Yunxiao.

In He Yunxiao's eyes, Fan Ziruo's moves were really light, soft, and slow.

But he also deliberately slowed down to experience martial arts with Fan Ziruo, so it seemed that the two were evenly matched.

Fan Ziruo waved his bare hand and slapped He Yunxiao with his palm. He Yunxiao didn't want to give in, so he used the same move and slapped Fan Ziruo.

Of course, it's with restraint.

Thus, a classic scene in martial arts novels, in which two top masters clashed, appeared in Fan's study room.

After aligning their palms for a while, Fan Ziruo suddenly realized something was wrong.

A man and a woman, palm to palm...

Are you "holding hands" with He Yunxiao?

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