He Yunxiao felt relieved after hiding the martial arts novels that Fan Ziruo couldn't read.

He Yunxiao knew about Fan Ziwei's observation skills.

I had brought so many books, but not giving her a few of them, which would easily arouse her suspicion. When there is suspicion, there is distrust, and when there is distrust, there is a loss of favorability.

Favorability is life!

It’s still two people’s lives.

Now, the books are hidden and my life is saved.

Comfortable.

The three martial arts novels that Fan Ziruo cannot read are quite promising in terms of action descriptions. They are very vivid and lively. It would be a shame to throw it away. He Yunxiao was going to finish studying at Fan Mansion at noon. When he went home to eat, he secretly walked under the fruit tree, dug out the novel and took it home.

In Qi State, books are still considered a luxury. Even if you don’t read them, it’s still very cost-effective to wipe your butt, but they can’t be wasted.

He Yunxiao came to Fan's study in a familiar way. As expected, Fan Ziruo was already sitting at the table waiting for him.

He Yunxiao knocked on the door politely and entered the house politely.

"Zi Rui, morning."

Fan Ziruo stood up from his chair, saluted He Yunxiao and said, "Good morning, Mr. He."

He Yunxiao sat at the desk and took out a book as before.

Fan Ziruo saw him busy and said casually: "Master, did you remember what you wanted to say to me when you left last night?"

He Yunxiao paused while holding the book and carefully recalled what he wanted to say at that time. I found that my head was empty and I couldn't think of anything.

He subconsciously wanted to make nonsense, but suddenly he thought about Nanzhu's wife.

Nanzhu's wife was killed by his nonsense.

He Yunxiao gave up the idea of ​​making nonsense and said with a sincere smile: "I'm sorry Zi Ruo, I still didn't think of it."

Although Fan Ziruo wanted to know what He Yunxiao wanted to say at that time, she was sensible and understood the general situation, so naturally she would not take these small things to heart.

He nodded, said "it's okay", and stopped worrying.

He Yunxiao piled the martial arts books and martial arts novels that he collected from the study room of He Mansion on the table, thinking about how to find a reason to send them to Fan Ziruo, but before he could think of a reason, Fan Ziruo gave them to him first. He Yunxiao became something worth seeing.

A stack of manuscript paper.

"Sir, Zi Ruo wrote it new last night."

Fan Ziruo handed the manuscript paper to He Yunxiao with both hands, his eyes a little evasive, his cheeks slightly red, a little shy.

Seeing her like this, He Yunxiao remembered that when they broke up yesterday, she did say that she would rewrite a new novel. Looking at the thick stack of manuscript paper again, He Yunxiao was secretly amazed.

This girl's mobility is really high. She writes as fast as she wants, and she writes so much.

He Yunxiao's character has always been that "a drop of kindness is repaid by a spring." Since Fan Ziruo handed the novel to him with both hands, there was no reason for him not to pick it up with both hands.

He Yunxiao specially took out a handkerchief to wipe his hands, and then respectfully took down Fan Ziruo's manuscript paper with both hands.

When others respect your hobbies, it is the best way to increase your favorability.

[Fan Ziruo’s favorability degree changed from 66 to 68]

"Zi Ruo asked the young master to take a look. The young master doesn't have to be like this."

Fan Ziruo felt happy when he saw He Yunxiao paying so much attention to him, but he still spoke out to persuade him.

He Yunxiao asked: "Did you just write it last night?"

"Um."

"So, I'm the first to see it?"

"Yes."

He Yunxiao had a strange feeling. He bullied Fan Ziruo for not knowing enough, so he asked tentatively: "Then I took Ziruo's first time?"

Of course Fan Ziruo thought that He Yunxiao was talking about a novel, so he nodded seriously and said: "Yes. Young master, take it."

Looking at Fan Ziruo's dignified and beautiful appearance, listening to her say such words.

He Yunxiao was a little excited. In every sense.

hiss……

It’s hard to bear...

How high is the favorability level... It's 68... It's fast, it's fast...

Nuclear powered farmland…

His thoughts almost went to the place where he could not pass the review, so He Yunxiao had to quickly recover his mind, holding the new novel Fan Ziruo gave him, and read it word by word.

I read the first two hundred words first. Well, it is a story about a female warrior who wants to kill a male warrior.

He Yunxiao held the manuscript and glanced at Fan Ziruo secretly.

Why does she always want to kill men?

You won't have that tendency, right?

It shouldn’t be. If there is, the system will write it in the character.

Fan Ziruo had been nervously waiting for He Yunxiao to read her review. After seeing He Yunxiao secretly looking at her instead of reading the novel, she felt a little bad.

"Young Master, you can tell me any questions you have."

When Fan Ziruo caught him peeking, He Yunxiao quickly looked away.

"Yeah. It's fine so far. I'll check again."

What a ghost!

What is this written about?

From the beginning, there was a fight between two people, and no time, background, motivation, or characters were explained!

I'll take a look at this, I'll take a look at it!

Perhaps because yesterday's martial arts training was effective, Fan Ziruo's description of fighting was indeed more detailed.

That's the only advantage.

He Yunxiao continued to read patiently. After all, it was a novel written by a friend, so he had to give an evaluation after reading it. If this was a web article, she would have been given a big exit button long ago. Not even a trace of viewing will be left.

He Yunxiao watched patiently, but the more he watched, the more impatient he became. All in all, the rest of the plot was still about the two people fighting.

Because there is no explanation of time, place, characters, or motivations, although the plot of the fight is well written and well described, there is no sense of immersion at all. The two characters in the novel have no emotional resonance with the readers, which can be said to be a failure.

Fortunately, Fan Ziruo's small regular script with hairpin flowers was very beautiful, and the words were just like the person he wrote, which somewhat wiped away the dissatisfaction in He Yunxiao's heart.

After reading one page, He Yunxiao opened the manuscript paper and looked at the next page, only to find that it was gone...

There is only one page. Why did you give me such a thick stack of manuscript paper...

He Yunxiao realized something serious.

"Zi Ruo, how long did it take you to write this page of the novel?"

"Two hours."

He Yunxiao:......

I wrote more than a thousand words in four hours, this...

He Yunxiao immediately stopped thinking about online writing. He secretly calculated that this speed was actually quite fast among authors who wrote physical books.

He Yunxiao has always known about Fan Ziruo's shortcomings.

To put it bluntly, she doesn't know how to tell stories.

It doesn’t give readers the information they need in the story, the plot has no ups and downs, and many other problems. To sum it up simply, it doesn’t tell a story.

But when I think of Fan Ziruo's hard-earned 68 favorability rating now, He Yunxiao's critical words cannot come out of his mouth.

He Yunxiao knew that she would not understand some words unless she said them out loud. However, the price of telling the truth is the 68 favorability points that you have worked so hard to get!

He Yunxiao hesitated.

He thought, just tell lies to coax her, and after coaxing her to 80 favorability points, he would tell her the truth...

But this idea was immediately rejected by He Yunxiao himself.

Damn it, why do I want to do this again? Think about how Nanzhu lost his wife!

"Young Master." Looking at He Yunxiao's hesitation, Fan Ziwei could guess a little bit.

"Master, Zi Ruo knows."

He Yunxiao said in surprise: "What do you know?"

"My novel is not well written."

He Yunxiao did not intend to follow the old path of deceiving little girls. With the education of Nanzhu's wife, he had completely realized his mistake.

Putting down the manuscript paper in his hand, He Yunxiao asked: "Do you know where the writing is not good?"

Fan Ziruo's hands were tangled with each other on the table, but he said with a smile on his face, "Looking at the young master, he hesitated to speak. If there were only a few shortcomings, the young master probably wouldn't be so hesitant. Therefore, my novel is very likely to It’s not good anywhere.”

He Yunxiao sighed in his heart.

I have to say that sister Zi Ruo is still too smart.

This was indeed He Yunxiao's idea, but he has changed his mind now.

He Yunxiao reached out and grabbed Fan Ziruo's tangled little hand on the table, looking directly into her eyes with a stern look.

"Zi Rui, I just want you to tell me one thing. Are you happy when you write a novel?"

Fan Ziruo was the one who knew best whether men and women should be intimate with each other. Of course she didn't want He Yunxiao to hold her hand, but now He Yunxiao's eyes on her were like the warm winter sun, warm and powerful, which made her forget her actions.

Faced with He Yunxiao's question, she subconsciously replied: "Well, I'm happy."

"Zi Rui, believe me. Don't care about other people's opinions. As long as you are happy, then your novel is the best!"

[Fan Ziruo’s favorability degree changed from 68 to 73]

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