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Chapter Twelve: An Unprecedented Training System! Internal Force System!

Chapter Twelve: An Unprecedented Training System! Internal force system!

Chen Ming's exclamation was not loud.

But it was still clearly transmitted to the ears of other teachers in the office.

And after everyone listened to what he said,

All nodding,

The middle-aged female teacher with the most seniority spoke first, her tone inexplicably excited: "The divine book! This "Shooting the Condors" is a well-deserved divine book!

"Not to mention anything else, this writing alone is enough to beat all the books on the serial subscription list!

"No……"

When she said this, she suddenly paused, and then immediately added,

"It's not the serial subscription list, but the overall list!

"Looking at the whole thing, there are countless novels, and the writing style can't be compared with it at all!"

"That's right!" Chen Ming continued, "It's not just writing!

"The first 300,000 words of plot, structure, and character creation... are all top-notch!

"I have been a mage creation master for ten years, and I have written many books,

"The books I have read are too numerous to count.

"But if you say there is any book that can compare with this book...I don't think...no!

"Not even one book!"

Among these teachers, Chen Ming's eyes are notoriously picky. No matter what works, he can always jump out some thorns for you.

Even the "Three Musketeers with Broken Arms", which currently ranks first in Yijue's subscription list, has been severely criticized by him.

But at this moment, he was able to give such a high evaluation to this "Shooting the Condors", which is really rare.

"In addition to the high quality of the book itself, there is another point that attracts me very much!" A male teacher with slightly bald hair said at this time:

"That's his cultivation system!

"This brings up a brand new concept - internal force!

"To be honest, there are tens of millions of novels in my sleep. These low-level martial arts books are all about how human beings strengthen their bodies and then fight.

"But no one has ever introduced this concept called 'internal force'! So that the cultivation system, whether it is in the novel or realized in reality, is not much beyond ordinary people.

"But you read this book, and after having this 'internal force', the whole novel has undergone great changes and improvements in terms of combat!

"Let the fight, which could only be done one move at a time, become extremely novel and interesting! Moreover, it is even more powerful!

"This is a brilliant idea!"

After he finished speaking, the rest of the teachers all agreed very much:

"That's right! This 'internal force' system is really an innovation!"

"Maybe, in the reality of Wuxiu Wuxiu, a huge storm can be set off!"

However, some people also put forward a different point of view: "You are right, but it also depends on whether the book can be written long, and whether it can maintain such a high quality in the future?"

This is true.

Many of the current books are of high quality with hundreds of thousands of words in the first place.

But in the future, it was pulling the hips.

As the author writes, the writing collapses, and then there are not too many eunuchs and unfinished books.

And in this way,

As a result, the "feedback ratio" of the cultivation system embodied in this book will be greatly reduced, and it will eventually become garbage and no one cares about it.

Don't say anything that caused a storm among the martial arts... It's not bad if you haven't been blocked by others collectively.

"Not only that." Another overweight female teacher added, "After the cultivation system in this book is realized in reality, the 'feedback ratio' is still unknown.

"He updates too fast, although the popularity is good, but there is still a distance from the fire, the 'feedback ratio' should not be too high.

"In addition, for the sake of stability, most of the current martial arts practitioners will choose the old books on the subscription version. It is really difficult for the new cultivation system to stand out.

"What happens next, we can only wait and see.

After listening to the comments of several teachers, Shu Wanqing followed closely and expressed her opinion:

"Teachers... I don't know if you have found a problem..."

"Oh? What's the problem?" Chen Ming and others asked curiously.

"It's just..." Shu Wanqing groaned, and continued, "Didn't we just say that this might be an old author's vest.

"But... Generally speaking, even if an old author puts on a vest, his writing style will not change significantly in a short period of time.

"That is to say, even if it is a vest, we can see the shadow of the author's past books through his writing habits.

"But this "Shooting the Condors", after I just read it through, I feel that its writing style is completely different from any previous Huoshu!"

"Then according to what you mean..." Chen Ming touched his chin and said in surprise, "This book...in fact, it is really possible that it is a new book for newcomers?!"

To be honest, the point that Shu Wanqing raised had popped into his head when he was reading "Shooting the Condors" before.

But after all, I still felt that it was too outrageous, so I didn't think about it any more.

But now, after hearing what Shu Wanqing said, Chen Ming felt that it made sense again, and couldn't help being very entangled.

"Teacher Shu's words are indeed correct. But I still think it is more likely that this is an old author using a vest to open a new book." The middle-aged female teacher gave her own judgment,

"Everyone has read the writing of this book, and the writing is extremely sophisticated.

"This is not only about writing skills, but also requires profound experience in life.

"Anyway, I don't believe that this will be written by a pure rookie.

"Although it sounds outrageous to forcibly change the style of writing, it is far more reliable than the fact that "Shooting the Condors" is a new book for newcomers."

The words of this middle-aged female teacher hit the nail on the head.

In the end, the "controversy between the old and the new" for the book "Shooting the Condors" has been settled, and no one has any objections.

"I just don't know which big boss wrote this... This person must have enlightened, otherwise, it would be impossible to directly write this kind of divine book."

Chen Ming sighed with emotion, his eyes were full of envy.

It's impossible to say he's not envious, because he's just a master of creating mages, and he's thrown N books.

If not, it would be impossible for him not to join the trade union and instead come here to be a high school teacher.

Then we discussed the plot and characters of "Shooting the Condors" for a while.

Several teachers also clicked on the comment section of this book by the way, wanting to see how the book friends on the website commented.

The result was as they expected, all of them were positive comments:

[14:01, 'Arctic Alarm Clock': Looks good! Too beautiful! The characters inside are so three-dimensional! There is no such facial makeup at all! Everyone impresses me! Just like you all said that Ke Zhen'e's martial arts are low and he likes to pretend. But I think that people can go to Mobei for so many years just for a promise! This is chivalry! I admire! 】

[14:01, 'Sky Squid': Guo Jing doesn't want Hua Zheng anymore, right? hiss! Confused! Huazheng's father feels like he's gaining momentum now! It's a pity that he doesn't eat soft rice and hug his thighs! When Guo Jing gets old, he will know how young he was then! 】

[14:01, 'one knife 999': Upstairs, I think what you said is wrong. I just want to be free in love! Besides, that's Huang Rong! I picked up this beautiful and smart girl by the side of the road, I love her so much! 】

[14:01, 'I am the great master': Speaking of which, the setting of this 'internal force' is too wonderful! I make it! When Qiu Chuji was drinking with the Seven Devils of the South of the Yangtze River, he was able to use his 'internal force' to force the wine out! Awesome! And that Mei Chaofeng's Nine Yin White Bone Claw is also really handsome! 】

...

[18:02, 'I'm really not a scumbag': Is Guo Jing stupid or not! I'm a little confused! The Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon sounded like a super skill, did Guo Jing learn the first fifteen moves in a month? What kind of genius is this? ! 】

[18:02, 'Sunset Notebook': Apart from the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, the other martial arts are also amazing! It looks much better than other martial arts novels! 】

[18:02, 'I am Nidie': So what happens next? author! You have not updated for a whole day! Code quickly! I can't wait for the next episode! 】

In the hut, Pei Liang watched the messages from book friends from different worlds through the panel, and the corners of his mouth turned up.

With so many "bombarded reviews", it's impossible to say you're not happy.

"Explosive update! It must be updated!"

If it doesn't explode, what kind of novelist is it? !

Pei Liang is very motivated now,

Plus tomorrow and the day after tomorrow are weekends,

He intends to finish writing the next 700,000 words in one go!

The liver is finished!

But just when Pei Liang was about to turn on the computer and prepare for codewords.

The phone rang suddenly.

I took it over and saw that it was a group message:

"@ Pei Liang, what are you doing? Have you finished your dinner tonight? Come out and get together with your brothers!"

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