Ya Nei of Rebirth

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Don't lift the colorful veil that living people call life

There are some unreal scenes painted on it

Just painted with careless colors

Simulate any scene we would like to believe to be true.

Shelley

Before reading this article in Yanei, I had read the official business, Rebirth of the Official Road and Business Road, Rebirth of the Official Road by Joining the Army, Fenghuo's Best Young Master, Official Immortal, and other novels about this type... I don't want to compare them. There are similarities, differences, or advantages and disadvantages between them, but what I want to say is that, purely personally, the one that I like the most and am most moved by is probably the set of "Rebirth in the Office".

The beginning of this article is undeniably ridiculous. The protagonist is reborn through time travel, and his father is just an electrician. The author, without any surprise, asks the protagonist to help his father step into politics step by step, and then smoothly allows the protagonist to follow this path. .

The protagonist Liu Jun has clear and firm value standards for life and society, and his love and hate are implicit but clear. He has a stubborn chivalry in his heart, and it can even be said that he is "not An idealist who carries the banner of ideals.

Being a chivalrous person in the officialdom is really a way to seek your own death. What matters is compromise and balance. Liu Jun's unobtrusive insistence on values ​​and ideals and his concern for social issues. I think this protagonist is loved by everyone. great reason.

What I want to say is that not everyone who understands the direction of history can kill everyone. Instead, they are more likely to become cannon fodder because of their arrogance. The author, Mr. Pie, can be said to be thoughtful in this set of articles. The reasoning is sufficient, and in him, one can see both the eclecticism of thought and the well-trained academic skills. He unified some contradictory and incompatible things in the text, making it pure and natural, without any trace of carving.

He uses his lens to focus on reality and turns life into images. While being realistic, he unexpectedly transcends the barriers of reality and shows the political landscape background that has been immersed in his bones for a long time. With the help of those things that suddenly appear in the fragments of the plot from time to time. The stagnant gaze kept casting affectionate and compassionate glances at this realistic landscape picture.

I think this poem by Xin Qiji can reflect Liu Jun's mood and ambition.

Articles that describe vulnerable groups in real life always make people feel resentful and powerless, especially this article. I really want to say that society has developed to this point, and it should be able to protect those weak and good people. When I say this, I The confidence is also insufficient.

We often turn our heads away from real problems and do not think about them, but we cannot ignore their existence. Even if we drive them out of our brains, we dare not consider them subconsciously. This article shows such reality and arranges the protagonist, Try to solve it step by step.

A slave, before he has tasted the taste of freedom, will think that his life is a happy life if the master does not beat him to death... And the most valuable things are not necessarily what people already have, but often what they have. Not yet but vaguely aware of something important.

Mr. Pie is very good at writing realistic villains, especially those with complex colors, which are particularly brilliant. However, if this article only stopped at bad guys getting bad news, my evaluation would not be so high.

When I commented on articles before, I always felt that I was very mean, exposing selfish humanity nakedly. However, after reading this article, you will know that people can be more despicable than you imagine, but they can also be more despicable than you imagine.

Kindness. There are always seeds of conscience in our hearts that sprout and grow in impossible circumstances.

Mr. Pie's words are very contagious. The writing style is very mature, and the inner activities of the characters are described very realistically, as if you can feel their heartbeats through the words. The skill of the lines is also extraordinary, which often makes me think about it again and again.

Sentences... In a work, the lines of the characters are very important. As long as there are a few lines that readers can always remember, half the battle is basically done.

Therefore, the character portrayal of the protagonist and some supporting characters is very successful. It can be said to be lifelike. There are so few small characters that made me unforgettable with just a few strokes.

I like novels that keep the original character of the character, but also provide enough foreshadowing for the transformation. A good novel can tell the character’s personality from the character’s words, deeds, and methods of dealing with things, and then let these characters with different personalities drive the plot.

Many people compare Guandao and Yameni. In fact, the two works are not very similar... Being a mouthpiece for the people and putting the people first are common in every official work. It is impossible to compare them with each other.

But both protagonists are reborn. One makes his mother become the richest man in the world, and the other makes his lover become the richest man. In addition to the reason of YY, I think that if you want to go sideways in the officialdom, you basically need you

Being born in a general family, money can help. So these conditions are indispensable.

I saw the interview in the book review area. Among the heroines such as Yan Fei, Miss He, Bai Yang, Liu Qing, Chu Yu, Xiao Yu, Shen Rao, etc., Mr. Pie said that his favorite heroine should be Yan Fei. In fact, I

The heroine I dislike the most is Yan Fei. I have to say that the heroine's face is very pale, and she's still kind of pale.

I would also find this woman's appearance and character to be very beautiful, and it would even make me want to stop and chew on it and sigh. However, if I put it in a novel, it would not make me like it. This woman is very good, very good.

But it couldn't move me, it only stayed at my intellectual level, but it couldn't deeply touch my emotional level.

Of course, as a big woman, Yan Fei's character is the most convenient for the protagonist. She has been well protected since she was a child, and she is the childhood sweetheart of the protagonist. She is innocent and pure, romantic and simple... I don't want to say that she is a

vase, but I do have the feeling that the character's facial makeup is too flat, just like a man's way of shaping his dream lover.

In terms of shaping the eldest wife, I personally feel that the official heroine is a bit similar to the heroine in the government office. Although one is an officer and the other is a fashion designer; one has a cold temperament and the other has a gentle temperament. But they are both innocent and ignorant of the world...

...Perhaps this is the characteristic that the ladies in the novel must possess. But what I want to say is that the portrayal of the official lady is better than Yan Fei in the yamen, and Yan Fei is too superficial.

Became.

In most time-travel novels, the protagonists enjoy the blessings of being together. The more women the better, the more women they collect. Moreover, the women understand each other and work together to make a fortune. The male protagonist wants to do something, and also wants to build a memorial arch.

It's so hypocritical to pretend to be affectionate even though your lower body is clearly in your mind.

The protagonist is just lustful, but he wants to be calm and have no desire, so he really doesn't say anything. The women in it all take the initiative to fall in love with him, and the protagonist is embarrassed for a long time, so he has to reluctantly accept...

Probably because NP is very difficult in reality, three-legged toads are hard to find, two-legged men are jumping all over the street, and cheating is a difficult and technical job. I guess this is the reason why ** literature flourishes. This article is no exception.

.But what I want to say is that I really don’t like this kind of philanthropic articles.

In many time travel novels, it seems that when the protagonist meets a woman, he will definitely cry and scream and rush to be your little wife; if he saves the person, he will be reborn as Kongming, and he will live and die for you for the rest of his life. The name of a woman is a symbol of weakness.

I don't plan to make corrections in the next year. But I always feel that if I am deliberately cheating to cater to the public's taste, I'd better go back and watch Jin Yong.

Having said this, I can’t help but want to complain about the website Qidian..., or the editor..., because many of the articles I originally liked, I started to read after reading them, and then one day I suddenly found that half of the money I paid was spent on reading them.

Flirting. Holy shit, there are a lot of free things like this on the Internet.

Back to the topic, let’s talk about the supporting characters. In this series, my favorite is actually not the protagonist Liu Jun, but Jin Youwei. This man has a bold and unrestrained temperament, and he is wanton and indulgent. He is a very typical yameni. He gets whatever he wants.

To reach out for it, maybe even in the end

Nothing was gained, at least he tried. He knew very well that blindly tolerating would only end up annihilating himself in the vast world. So he could act openly and openly opposite Liu Jun, and the light would not drop at all. This is

What I appreciate most.

Next, I will talk about the parts of the article that I feel regretful about. The protagonist is reborn, and the author’s setting and choosing of the era are naturally intentional. There is no doubt about this, but in my opinion, this intention is not expressed.

I have always believed that authors should not pre-determine the readership before writing, nor should they YY or trivialize the story in order to cater for "potential" readers. This would give up the depth and complexity of the story.

The complexity of the background is not a mistake. The background of this article is officialdom. But the premise is that the author is familiar with the background he wants to show and can present it reasonably. And readers can clarify the complex background through reasonable and feasible descriptions and hints.

clues to follow the author's thinking. However, what about the details and hints that should be provided to the readers? I did not see them.

The protagonist is just an ordinary person. Even though he is reborn and knows what will happen in the future, his grasp of the political fluctuations and internal strife is so accurate that he is almost omniscient like a god. This makes me feel incredible.

Of course, you can say that he is born with political sensitivity and is a genius who plays politics, but geniuses are not gods. Even if he knows the future direction, it has already been different after he joined as a butterfly. How can he be able to do it every step of the way?

How accurate is the calculation?

Although the protagonist can understand the direction of history, he still needs to rely on the power of the situation to complete his plan, which means that he must learn political compromise and concession. After reading too many idiot time travel stories, I simply think that other characters are

I'm a loser, being manipulated by the protagonist to the point of applause.

Wang Xiaobo said in "East Palace and West Palace" that "human life has a theme." I think that Moses existed to make a covenant, and Jesus existed to be crucified. Tolstoy actually asked Anna to commit suicide to save him

Himself. And what is Liu Jun’s mission in rebirth?

I think he is trying to use his personal power to promote social change... He seems to be blessed in some way, and he can always get involved in the torrent and save the day... What I want to point out is that the pie is bigger in every political dispute.

It just creates a beginning and gives a conclusion, but there is no process.

I really like the hidden passages scattered throughout the text, which are concise, rich in rhythm, and have just the right amount of emotion. Because of this smoothness, lightness, and just the right amount of implicitness, I read the entire text very smoothly, but overall, I think this article is too

It is general. It is indeed clear and refined, but there are too many places where it is caused by inertia.

Most of what Mr. Pie succeeds in creating is an instant atmosphere, tone, breath... When everything needs to be put into place accurately, when the feeling should be able to burst out immediately, but often only a few words are spoken hastily.

Because of these reasons, I feel that my reading process is like a kind of floating. After countless scenery, there are only a few images retained in my mind. Of course, I feel that the author himself does not really mean to explore this issue. The author is just based on a given

I create solo dances with different settings. I just hope to be an immersed audience in this theme, looking forward to being moved, even if it is a desperate move.

Compared with its story background, its overall effect is too shallow, it is not rich and deep enough, this is a contradiction that cannot be ignored... It's like I thought I walked into a vortex, but found that it was just a fleeting moment.

The rapids, so I will be disappointed, but from another perspective, this is a very beautiful article, it is written seriously, cleverly, and the writing style is clever.

I think this article exaggerates the atmosphere and has potential, but it is not fully developed. It is more like an outline, an interlude, smooth, pleasing to the eye, and has the ability to make people feel comfortable, but it is difficult to be truly exciting. Maybe it is my understanding of this

The requirements for the formula are too high... Maybe I just want to write a YY officialdom inspirational article...

But I look forward to the author achieving deeper breakthroughs within his favorite style and subject matter. This is a novel that can be written in more depth, and it has the possibility of improvement in every aspect.

Alexandre Dumas once said that history is just the nail on which he hangs his stories. Despite this, Alexandre Dumas's series of "historical novels" still contain detailed descriptions of historical details, such as a certain bar, a certain event, and a specific character.

People's living habits at that time, etc., all make readers feel strongly immersed in the scene, or at least have the psychological suggestion of "it turns out that I am in the XX era".

This comes back to the role of details. In rebirth novels, big clues are definitely important, but equally indispensable are details. For example, setting the Tang Dynasty does not mean that this is the year of Zhenguan and the year of Shenlong.

The appearance of a certain famous figure in history at that time in a certain year of Kaiyuan can convince readers, and a lot of information about the social life at that time is essential.

The above is my article, not from the perspective of fantasy novels. Perhaps urban fantasy novels in general do not intend to have too deep intentions. Overall, this article is popular.

This novel is like pouring water into a pot. The water flow is not urgent and flows steadily down the mouth of the pot. You watch from the side without any unnecessary feeling, because you know that all the water will eventually flow into the pot.

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There is no doubt that plot and structure are important components in novels. If a novel does not have a vivid plot, it will not be attractive and will not win readers. Reading is the most important thing; if there is no vivid plot in the writing, it will not attract readers.

A carefully arranged structure will make the article become a mess. Except for a few special YYs that make people feel that it is not logical, this set of structure is indeed comprehensive and wonderful.

Many authors who write new works are unable to show enough determination and courage like this Ya Nei to drive the material for my own use, but they make themselves trapped in the material itself. But in this Ya Nei, the entire work gives people a broad sense of

I feel... the charm of a work comes from the soul of the work, and the drama of the yamen itself brings great brilliance to the work.

Recall what Rilke said, "Explore the reason why you write and examine whether its roots are deep in your heart." Perhaps only what comes from the deepest part of an author's heart can form the deepest undercurrent of a work.

, naturally integrating all kinds of external objects into a unified whole... Only such works can move people the most, and this kind of brilliance is the real brilliance.

I think the success of this article lies in Mr. Pie's precise grasp of one key point, which is that human suffering stems from the never-elimable contrast between reality and desires. Many people have no direction in life and cannot see the hope of change.

Following the trend, struggling outside the mainstream, overwhelmed by the pressure of life, Liu Jun appeared in such an era, serving as the people's mouthpiece and putting the people first, making readers feel that their dignity as a people has been improved.

possibility.

The recent articles in Yanei remind me of a sentence in Lu Xun's "Passengers": "That won't work! I have to leave. When I go back there, there will be no place without names, no place without landlords, no place without expulsions

And the prison, there is no place without a smile on the face, no place without tears outside the eyes. I hate them, and I will not turn back!"

Rilke's verses are in my ears:

“Whoever does not have a house at this time does not need to build it,

Whoever is lonely now will be lonely forever,

Just stay awake, read, and write long letters,

Back and forth on Lin**

Wandering restlessly in front of the fallen leaves."

In Lu Xun's book, there is only road but no paradise; in Kafka's book, there is only heaven and no road. People long to live in the truth, but at the same time they can't stand the truth. What a paradox!

Sometimes I lament that if this society never takes people seriously, people have to take this society seriously. It is not easy to live like a human being. Those who live like flies and dogs, don't despise them too much. Commit suicide.

It's not easy, and living is even harder. I've been trying hard to rebuild my mental strength, but I can't find it.

When people first came to the world, their innocent hearts only contained naked humanity. Liu Jun’s existence gave readers hope, and this is how the novel became beautiful.

Pie Da's own opinions will permeate into his works, and readers will also be influenced and influenced by the environment at that time. They will use the same or similar thinking lines to gain perceptions and understand the works, and resonance will arise from this.

The last thing I want to say is that whenever I read a good novel, I always feel very happy. I even hope that this novel will never be finished. The excitement of an attractive novel lies in the journey, not the ending. I am very happy.

Thank you Mr. Pie for giving me such a happy feeling.

The above is not a comment, it can only be regarded as a feeling. My writing style is not good, and I am not a mainlander. I guess the usage of many words is not very consistent with my brothers, and I don’t know if I can understand what I want to express... Above

Some opinions and criticisms, if they offend the brothers here, I apologize here. I also hope Mr. Pie doesn’t mind.

Thank you for the above.

Author of this article: Braised Egg