Zhu Bajie turns over Marvel

Everyone else is posting their testimonials, but it doesn’t really matter if I post them or not.

Because there really weren’t many brothers watching, so I just wrote out my speech and it was only those brothers who saw it.

But, I like to chat. Many times, the author has to express some emotion at the end of each chapter. Today, there is no author's emotion at the end of the chapter, so I will move it to the shelf.

It is said that I will be able to have perfect attendance tomorrow. For a perseverant person like me, it is inevitable to continue to have perfect attendance. This book has been updated twice a day since the signing of the contract and has never stopped.

So everyone knows the purpose of my listing. The subscriptions must be very few, so I can only encourage myself by thinking of becoming a god with a million dollars.

Many readers said that my writing style and driving were too connotative, and some readers could not understand them. I agree. I never expected that the readers of Marvel fandoms would be so young. I still blame myself for not understanding the market and readers.

Some readers even said that I copied the original text of Journey to the West in the first paragraph of the book. I asked him to take out the original text, or copy my paragraph on Baidu to see what he could find. After saying this, I regretted it a little, and suddenly I

I feel that although this reader is a little unclear, this is a disguised form of praise for me.

Readers said that I can compete with Wu Cheng'en, and I was so happy that I was so happy. Of course, there is a huge gap between me and the old man.

There are benefits to reading more books. At least you can know which pitfalls you have stepped on and which poisonous points you have exposed. There should be some improvement in the next book.

Through my acceptance speech, I also analyzed the poisonous points of this book.

Of course, the biggest problem is the mismatch between the writing style and the reader market. Now I will only talk about the poisonous points.

First, Zhu Bajie is the protagonist, which is a poisonous point. If modern people traveled through time and became Zhu Bajie and then went to Marvel, the sense of substitution should be better.

Second, Zhu Bajie and Marvel originally had different combat power systems, so at first they said Bajie was Da Luo, which was a big mistake, but I changed it later.

Thirdly, both Marvel Avengers and Spider-Man are well-known positive characters. They were constantly played by Zhu Bajie, which made many readers angry. There is nothing we can do about it. The writing method and plot have been fixed, and the reason why Bajie was sent there

, it’s because of Bajie’s ability.

Fourth, in the early stage, Bajie did not have the excitement of obtaining items and upgrades, which also discouraged the audience. Nowadays, online novels are fast-paced. The first chapter of the system will be introduced, which is both exciting and attractive. There will be one or two chapters later.

Zhang just turned on the attribute panel, and his strength increased by one point, and his IQ increased by two points, which are both cool points.

Our novel is 300,000 words long. Bajie has learned the art of four-wheel driving, and he has subdued a bunch of awesome men, which can be considered rewarding, but compared with the system that always gives you some benefits, low

It doesn't work.

Fifth, the plot is basically completely original by the author, so many friends who read this book originally wanted to follow the plot, but it turns out that they are all stories made up by the author himself, and many of the plots are based on the protagonists of Marvel.

There is novelty and imagination, but for some readers it is a poisonous point.

Sixth, because the plot goes very quickly, some friends who read too quickly will miss a lot of details. In the third chapter, a group of people changed and the map also changed. They were not used to it. In fact, this was also decided by my writing method.

Yes, one or two thousand words is enough to complete a character, so you won’t waste a lot of words.

I accidentally reached the sixth point, so I won’t mention another one.

Seventh, driving is really not white enough, and the main plot was launched relatively late. Bajie’s purpose of coming here was revealed too late, and Bajie still doesn’t know what he wants to do in Marvel. Some

The line is too long, and readers may have forgotten it.

The above are the major issues I have summarized. Of course, there are many smaller issues, so I won’t go into them one by one. This post is almost longer than the main text.

Maybe in my novel, the protagonist is a modern person who transforms into Bajie, then goes to Marvel, and goes to the Marvel Awakening System. This system is made by Sanqing, and then gives Bajie a task, which requires a few widows.

The character of the superhero needs to be destroyed. Then what the protagonist does will be reasonable, and readers will not blame the protagonist for things like Bajie bullying Iron Man, but will feel that the Sanqing system has deep meaning.

Of course, it is reasonable to draw out the subsequent plot in this way, and it is also in line with the reading habits of current readers.

I think it’s good to change it like this, but I’m too lazy. How much content should I change in the first 300,000 words? And in the driving part, you will get a 404 if you are not careful, so this book should be used as a lesson.

I will still try my best to write and keep writing.

Everyone who sees the comments on the shelves is true love, thank you all.

The sky is high, the sea is vast and the road is far, my story will never be boring!