Zongman: Why is your comic full of knives?

As time goes by, the scenery outside the window changes from white to black.

After dinner, the blank document created during the day was already filled with dense words.

However, the main story has not yet begun.

This is not because Nangong Mu is slacking off.

It is the design of the character and background story, as well as the establishment of several key lines.

And the most important thing in the whole story is the 13 light jades that run through all the plots!

Because the background of the script is based on the animation story.

As for why it is not based on the perspective of the game.......Well, the workload is too huge. Just thinking about it, Nangong Mu feels his scalp tingling!

Each line has a very complete plot. As a player, you have to experience more than 100 hours to complete all the achievements!

The length of the experience is so exaggerated. You can imagine that if it is developed as a game, the workload is really ridiculous.

Even if he can copy it, Nangong Mu doesn't want to do it.

After all, he doesn't have a complete work team.

For a small game like"Witch's House", it doesn't take much effort for one person to do it.

And like《CLANNAD》Such a word game is enough to give people a headache!

Back to the topic.

If you start from the game, there will be 14 light jades!

However, one of these 14 light jades will be consumed by Fuuko's wish, triggering the"light jade disappearance event".

When this event is triggered, 7 light jades can open the chapter of afterstory.

If you do not experience"Fuuko's wish", you must use 8 light jades to open the sequel of the story.

The animation takes into account the length of the story, so even if you do not experience"Fuuko's wish", you still only need 7 light jades to open the subsequent chapters.

And the stories involved in these 13 light jades are the key to the entire animation!

Similarly, only by collecting these 13 light jades can you achieve the final true ending.

At the end of the story.

The destruction of the fantasy world is precisely because of the existence of these 13 light jades, which will trigger the time to flow back to the day when Furukawa Nagisa gave birth 5 years ago.

Because the light jade has replaced Furukawa Nagisa, there is no dystocia death during childbirth in this line.

""Huh."

Looking at the text in front of him that he had sorted out after a day, Nangong Mu sighed softly.

"I didn't expect this to be so difficult to write."

It's like a character setting.

This kind of thing is not clearly expressed in words, but only shown in the plot.

Nangong Mu had to recall the plot over and over again, and describe it in words in his own language.

Take the protagonist Okazaki Tomoya as an example.

He lost his mother at a young age, and his father was also hit hard by his mother's death. From then on, he became unmotivated and became indifferent to the protagonist as his son.

This is probably what many people think after watching the novel.《CLANNAD》The idea that came after.

In fact, this summary is very one-sided.

The other party is not indifferent to the protagonist. On the contrary, after the protagonist's mother died, the protagonist became the other party's only belief in survival.

It's just that he raised Okazaki Tomoya alone. After Tomoya has the ability to live independently, he lost his survival goal and became so unbearable.

In"CLANNADafterstory", the story of the other party is explained in detail.

If you define it early because of the previous article, it is easy to deviate.

A lot of comparisons have to be made to complete all the characters!

Even some details that only appear from the side, this part must be independently thought about before it can be written.

Under such conditions, Nangong Mu can still have such a fast speed, which shows his efforts.

As for whether this work can pass the preliminary selection, Nangong Mu has no worries!

After all, this is written as CLANNAD and read as a story of life!

Although this statement is a bit exaggerated, it is enough to be praised by people, which is enough to show the desirability of this work! (To read violent novels, go to Feilu Novel Network!)

"Let's stop here for today."

Although I'm not sleepy yet, it's already past 11 o'clock.

It's a rare holiday, so there's no need to work so hard. Anyway, work can't be finished in one day, so just take your time.

In a blink of an eye, another 10 days have passed.

《The second volume of"Zhan Mei" is also on sale with good reviews.

In the new volume, the protagonist follows Ye Xi to participate in a new mission. Although the process is somewhat dangerous, it is naturally safe in the end.

The protagonist has also grown to a certain extent from the incident.

The only thing that surprised the fans was that the protagonist's partner changed and became Hill.

Could it be that Akame is not the protagonist?

Everyone couldn't help but have such a thought, and then they denied it.

After all, the name of this comic is"Red Eyes", who else could it be if not Akame?

But the new character is pretty good-looking, so let's ignore this little detail.

Naive readers obviously can't imagine that this is Nangong Mu preparing to stab them!

"Ah! Who can read just one volume a month?!"

"The only things Lao Zei is currently working on are"Three Questions on the End of the World" and this one. I advise you to speed up! Don't be ungrateful!!"

""One volume a month, do you think that my friends can't afford it? Update quickly!!"

Looking at the complaints in the dynamic, Nangong Mu couldn't help but smile.

"I hope you can still say the same thing next month."

Although he is ready to give readers a knife, Nangong Mu does not plan to draw the next volume according to the original work.

《The most criticized part of"Kill the Sister" is that it seems like people who kill people just for the sake of killing people.

The sneak attack at the beginning is full of courage, giving people a feeling that these characters must be very powerful.

In the end, the same imperial tool user was killed by a girl from the Imperial Capital Guard who showed up randomly in a two-on-one situation!

How can I describe this plot? The more I think about it, the more outrageous it seems.

Of course.

The main reason why it seems outrageous is that there is not enough foreshadowing.

It's like One Piece.

From the beginning to the later stage, Garp, who has always given people a high level of prestige, was defeated so easily. Anyone with a little brain will feel uncomfortable! Being injured by Shiryu's sneak attack and being defeated by Kuzan, this far-fetched reason is not enough to convince people!

If this scene is replaced by being besieged by the entire Blackbeard team, and being defeated in the end after knocking away several guys, I think no fans will think there is a problem! After all, no matter how powerful Garp is, there is only one person.

Isn't it natural that he would be defeated by Blackbeard, one of the Four Emperors, who was one of the original three admirals, many great pirates, and is besieged by him?

This is the rationality of logic.

Similarly, if more background information is given to Cell, then it would be very reasonable for him to pay a heavy price to kill Ciel in a one-on-two situation!

And for a creator, filling in the background and making a character so powerful to the readers, isn't it normal for this character to be super powerful? This feeling can be said to be a basic operation.

As for why the original author felt that there would be no problem as long as it was explained in this way...This kind of thing is probably only clear to the author himself.