Adventurer of the Elf World

The third volume is finally over, let me summarize it as usual.

I originally expected this volume to have more than 100 chapters, but it still exceeded the limit and I wrote 137 chapters (623-760). Let's first sort out the plot:

Entering Rainbow City-\u003eRainbow University incident-\u003eCompany changes-\u003ePearl incident-\u003ePokmonian civilization ruins-\u003eSuper energy inhibitor.

Here I first introduced Xiu's power in Rainbow City, then introduced the situation of Rainbow University and Rainbow City through Shiori's incident, and finally solved the hidden dangers in his company through the appearance of Saori.

Strive to show the Rainbow City under the three different forces of Rainbow City's senior management, the Alliance, and the Rocket Team, and how he carried out his plan under these forces. (But it seems that I failed and can't write that feeling)

As for the things on the Pearl, it is much simpler. The Rocket Team hijacked the ship, and he went to hijack the Rocket Team.

In the end, he found the stigma technology in the Pokomonian civilization, completed the super energy limiter, solved Casey's problems, and also got a lot of benefits.

There are several hidden lines.

The first is the Rainbow City Slums.

The second is the inexplicable organization.

The third is Saori's true identity.

The fourth is a dozen unicorns.

The fourth is the company after the reform.

The fifth is the [Stigmata] technology.

The sixth is Nanami's job change.

Originally, there was a plot about the slums in Rainbow City that I deleted because it involved the conflict between the lower class and the upper class of Rainbow City.

Because my thoughts are not very mature, I am afraid that this thing will mislead everyone, so I deleted it.

I can tell you about the general clues. Do you remember the brother and sister mentioned in the previous extra?

The elder brother Nobuhiko is a Junsha intern, with a wind speed dog, and the younger sister Rina is blind. The two depend on each other.

Don't forget that their homes are also in the West District.

The same extra involving the slums was also cut.

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After talking about the plot, let's talk about some problems in this volume.

First of all, I am not satisfied with this volume. Many things can't write the feeling I have in my mind.

Several important characters in this volume, such as Shiori, Saori

Kazami, and Kyoko, are not well-shaped, their personalities are not three-dimensional, and their images are not full.

And someone mentioned that everyone's speech is not distinctive, as if the same person is speaking, and the situation of homogeneity occurs.

The plot and foreshadowing are also scattered, which makes me begin to doubt whether I have the ability to write novels.

Another common point is that the plot is dragged out, and there is no excitement, the IQ of the supporting characters is not online, and the plot turns are abrupt.

Some people also said that they want to see the protagonist's outdoor adventure, not the urban business war.

This plot distribution is unbalanced, which leads to the deviation from the theme. It is indeed my problem.

I tried to simplify it, but I was afraid that deleting those things would make you unable to understand it. Some introductions to geographical locations and the ecological research of elves cannot be deleted. As for the dialogue, I have also considered every sentence, and I really can't do it if I delete more.

So in the end, I thought about it for a long time and decided to delete the plot. For example, the plot about the company in this volume may be much better, and there are some unnecessary explanations and environmental descriptions.

My style is watery, smelly and long, which is a human problem. Next, I will find some books from great masters to learn from. You can recommend a few here.

Finally, let me talk about the subscription situation.

As for the interaction, it’s those brothers. I remember your IDs clearly.

If possible, I definitely want more subscriptions. After all, it’s money, and it’s also a reward for my labor.

Finally, thank you all for your support. I will definitely continue to write. After all, it’s also an explanation to myself.