After rebirth, I became a great writer

Chapter 174 The Battle between Two Heavens (Three)

When Wen Congwu logged into the literature forum, he found that there were three posts on the homepage of the forum that were grouped by martial arts, which made him suddenly become more energetic.

Because the popularity of martial arts novels has not been on the homepage of the forum for a long time, this is not to say that martial arts novels have declined, but because there is no good martial arts novel that can cause great popularity. After all, Zhao Shousheng has already won the pen, and the four great masters of martial arts may not have opened a new book for a long time.

But today is different. Not only Sima Beijie, one of the four gods, opened a new book, but Hongwen, who is the most popular in the literary circle, has also opened a martial arts novel.

Just based on the traffic of these two people, the popularity post on the home page of the forum was something that was hand-held. Especially the latter, some time ago, he used his own strength to group poetry and fairy tales to group the home page of the forum.

Therefore, the posts that can be ranked among the top in martial arts group are all about "Tiansha Lonely Star" and "Tianlong Bazi".

After browsing for a while, Wen Congwu discovered something very interesting. Most book friends have a high evaluation of "Tiansha Lonely Star", but their popularity is not as popular as "Tianlong Bazi".

The evaluation of "Tiansha Lonely Star" is basically good, very good, worthy of being the Sima of the North. Then I talked about the subsequent development of the plot, and then it disappeared.

However, there were endless arguments about "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", with praise and criticism, from the title of the book to the title of the chapter, followed by the plot, the protagonist, and the supporting characters. Even some of the dialogues inside were revealed and quarreled.

However, it was these debates that I read were full of interest in literature and martial arts. In fact, he had come to the forum to watch the excitement, which was also the nature of the Chinese people.

As for book friends quarreling, there is actually no comment from a big shot that can satisfy everyone overall.

For some reason, almost all readers commented on these two martial arts novels, but no writer came out to make comments. Even Bai Yu and Feng Zijie, who have always been keen on comments online, did not post.

In fact, it’s not that the writers are not paying attention to this matter, but everyone is paying attention to it. It’s just that the authors of both works are celebrities, and who doesn’t want to be a pioneer?

If the comments are not good, not only will he lose face, but he will also offend these two people. Sima Beijie is a well-known bad temper in the industry. Although Hongwen has a good personality, he is a professional slap in the face. Besides, there are only a few chapters that can't tell much.

As time goes by, a comment finally became the most popular one. The main reason is that the name of this post is very attractive and the content in the post is barely acceptable to everyone.

[The battle between the two heavens is whether the old man avenged his previous shame or the young man killed the god again?]

Just by seeing the name of this post, you will know that this is Sima Beijie and Hongwen. "The Battle between the Two Heavens" naturally refers to the new book of the two, because the first characters of the book name are all "Tian".

As for the later avenge of shame and the killing of the gods, we have to start from a long time ago.

[Half-Martial Arts Novelist]: I have a dream to be the first popular post in my lifetime. I hope that the book friends who click in will help me post more posts.

Let me first introduce myself. I have been an old bookworm for more than ten years and I love martial arts only. Influenced by Mr. Zhao's "Kunlun", I also excitedly wrote martial arts novels, but I insisted on writing tens of thousands of words and gave up.

If it is not this material, then be a honest reader.

Today, our martial arts grouping is very lively and chaotic. I saw that everyone had been arguing for a whole morning, but they didn’t make any noise, so I couldn’t help but post a post. I have read martial arts novels for more than ten years, and I think I can still say a few words.

Many book friends clicked in this post, most of which were attracted by the title! You can call me the title dog, but I won’t talk about the grudges and jokes between Sima Beijie and Hongwen. I will mainly talk about their new books.

Let’s talk about Sima Beijie’s new book “Tiansha Lonely Star” first. After buying the martial arts magazine, I read this one first. I think everyone’s choice should be the same as mine!

I feel about "Tiansha Lonely Star" after watching it, just one word, OK!

The beginning is a battle between the sects of the world, a battle between good and evil. The lines are filled with terrifying and bloody, and the imagination is very impressive. Various conspiracies and plots are written in a superb way, which is really satisfying.

I have to say that when writing about the plot, Sima Beijie is the first.

The portrayal of the protagonist also continues his previous style, both good and evil. I can be a decent person or a devil. I boldly predict that the protagonist in the book will definitely be a hero in the future.

I can’t predict the specific follow-up plot. After all, I can’t think of the calculations written by Sima Beijie, so I can only wait for the next issue to be serialized. Anyway, I feel so much anticipation at this moment!

I won't elaborate on the other things in detail. A good word means everything. It's just that the good thing is good and the routine is a bit old, so I still want to see something new.

Next, let’s talk about "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". To be honest, I was really looking forward to this book. I hope Hongwen can write a new style of martial arts novel, just like he wrote a new style for youth novels.

But after reading the two chapters of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", I was a little disappointed. Disappointment does not mean that this book is very bad, but that I was looking forward to it too much.

Just to discuss things, although the beginning of the two chapters of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" are dull, they still have some highlights, and the quality is absolutely superior.

Many book friends may be dissatisfied with me when I say this. Don’t worry, I will explain the points that everyone is arguing.

Point 1 of the argument: [What does the title of the book mean?]

I am very familiar with the book friend who asked the title of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" and I would like to share my personal understanding.

When I saw the title of the book for the first time, I thought it was the name of the peerless martial arts in the book, but after reading the main text, I gave up this idea.

The title of the book is definitely not a peerless martial art, because the name is a bit low compared to the skills that appear in the current book. Think about the "Bei Ming Divine Art" and "Lingbo Weibu" in Chapter 2 are not better than this name?

Later, I specifically checked the information and found that this term comes from Buddhist scriptures. Many Mahayana Buddhist scriptures describe the Buddha's teachings to Bodhisattvas, monks, etc., and the eight heavenly and dragons often participated in listening to the Dharma.

From the perspective of Buddhist doctrine, all the eight divisions are not human. Although they are not human-looking, they are still one of the sentient beings. They have different temperaments, different abilities, and both gods and demons.

Buddhism defines the eight sufferings of people. These eight sufferings basically cover the beginning of all grievances and grievances in the world. After all, people are not Buddhas and cannot let go of everything. They naturally suffer from all kinds of sufferings and then do a series of things. When these things are intertwined, the clear and turbid will merge and the disputes will continue.

Hongwen has a study of Buddhism, which can be seen from the Zen reciprocity in "The Legend of Wukong". I think he used this as the title of the book to reflect the world in the book. After all, the children of the world also have different personalities and abilities, both good and evil, so they naturally have grudges and grievances, thus interpreting the touching story of the world.

So, I think everyone should not worry about this title. Don’t you think it’s very interesting?

Dispute 2: [The chapter name does not match the content]

What I read about this argument is mainly about Chapter 1 [Blue Shirts and Risky Walking]. I personally understand that the chapter name and chapter content can match it.

"Blue shirt" refers to the protagonist's clothes, and no one has any objection.

"Open and honest" I think the protagonist Duan Yu should be mentioned. Although his appearance is a bit stupid, he is still full of justice and his style of acting is also open and honest.

Many book friends understand "The Strange Peak" according to the second chapter of Duan Yu falling off the cliff, and think it should be placed in the second chapter.

I think it is wrong. The plot of the first chapter is that Duan Yu wants to go to Wanchou Valley to report the news. If someone else goes to Wanchou Valley to report the news, it is not dangerous at all, but the protagonist Duan Yu will go, it will be very dangerous. Because his surname is Duan, it is very suitable for him to call it "Xianfengxing"!

Don’t you think the chapter title is very touching to read? The two chapters are read together: the green shirt is open and the dangerous peaks are walking, the jade wall is bright and the moon is bright, which is a bit like a broken word.

You should know that Hongwen is very good at writing poetry, and is also a member of the Poetry Association. If he writes the title of the chapter as a poem and then matches the plot content, then I really want to give him a thumbs up.

As for whether it is true, then we have to wait for the subsequent chapters, I am still looking forward to it.

Dispute point 3: [The opening plot is too dull]

To say that the plot of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is dull, it is actually just a matter of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". The plot of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" at the beginning, the battle of destroying the clans, the fighting moves of the characters, etc. is much inferior, and the attraction is not that great.

However, I think this opening is dull, but it is much stronger than the opening of "The Swordsman in the Snow". In other words, Hongwen's writing skills have been enhanced again, which can be said to have transcended the level of online writers.

Let me give you two brief examples. The first one is the "Wuliang Sword" in the beginning of the East Sect. The moves and fighting are dull, but the details are described very well, and the writing style is also very interesting.

The two competed with swords and fought with all their might, but did not immediately write down the winner. Instead, they turned their pen to describe the expressions of the people in the hall. Especially through the dialogue between the two sect leaders of the East and West Sects, everyone understood that the winner had been decided. This way of writing was not surprising, but it was just a slight indirect way!

But then I turned back and continued to describe the two of them’s sword competition, and decided to win and lose. The originally ordinary sword competition, but there were several twists and turns!

When everyone wonders the significance of this battle, they will explain the origin and rules of the battle through dialogues between others.

Such descriptions are actually adding a sense of mystery. Think about it, if you directly explain the rules of sword-bird at the beginning and then describe the sword-bird in plain terms, is it boring to read? But in this way, the order is reversed, and the turning point is turning, is it much more interesting to read?

Moreover, although martial arts fighting is not very strange, the dialogue is staggered and unstable. A few simple sentences seem to really make us feel that there are dozens of martial arts people watching the battle, and the fields are flowing and smooth, and it is very smooth to read.

The second is the adventure of the protagonist falling off a cliff. Martial arts novels actually have golden fingers. Adventures are also an old routine, and there is nothing strange about the plot. However, Hongwen has set up other winding paths, not focusing on the description of the adventure, but still focusing on details.

Originally, it was very dangerous for the protagonist to fall off a cliff, but the author wrote about the scenery and people, not the danger. The scenery was described very seriously. When reading the novel, the characters were described very vividly, and the movements were picturesque. When you enter it, you not only did not feel nervous, but you were in a very relaxed and happy mood.

When writing about scenery, you should also write about people, and when writing about people, you should also write about scenery. The transformations in this are smart and powerful.

With this writing style, it can really crush many writers, and I think that just talking about detailed descriptions, "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is much better than "The Lonely Star of the World".

Of course, even this cannot make up for the dull plot of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". However, the future is promising, after all, Hongwen is still young.

Dispute 4: [The protagonist Duan Yu is too stupid]

The protagonist Duan Yu is quite stupid. At the beginning, the person fights, and he pretends to fall, but he doesn't understand, but he still wants to laugh. This is simply a "big idiot" in the world who is not in the world.

If this is the case with other martial arts novels, I can directly persuade me to get rid of it, it is thanks to him that it is Hongwen. After seeing it, I realized that Duan Yu's laughter is not a ridicule, but just a true thought in his heart, without any contempt.

Next, Duan Yu ran overestimated his ability to mediate the conflict between Wuliang Sword Sect and Shennong Gang. He was a good person, but he was too stupid. This is a world of martial arts. It’s useless to talk about etiquette and morality with others.

People in the world, big fists are the king, and only those who have the strength can sit down and reason. Fortunately, he has the halo of the protagonist, otherwise he would have been burping a long time ago.

Then, when he arrived at Wanchou Valley, Zhong Ling clearly explained that he could not mention his original surname. As soon as he met, he said that his surname was Duan and told the valley master Zhong Wanchou that his true identity was revealed. If Gan Baobao had something to do with his father, go eat the boxed lunch!

These two chapters were really painful by Duan Yuqi's liver. I have seen stupid people, but I have never seen such stupid people.

However, after calming down, I watched it several times before I realized the reason for the protagonist's personality.

Duan Yu is the prince of the Nanwang of Dali Kingdom, with a royal bloodline. He has loved reading since he was a child and does not like martial arts.

Therefore, he regards what the martial artists in the martial arts world care about as usual. Even if he gets two peerless martial arts, he doesn't show much joy. He is even less attractive than the statue of the fairy sister.

Because Duan Yu has a respectable status in Dali Kingdom and is also a scholar, he is peaceful and rarely interacts with secular martial artists. He can understand that he does not understand the worldly ways.

I think the author Hongwen's setting of the protagonist Duan Yu should be the cultivation of a man's growth and the sense of responsibility.

This is also a common plot in martial arts novels. A wealthy young man has gone through the world, experienced many hardships, and eventually grew into a hero. During this period, he talked about love with some women. It is estimated that this is the direction of the subsequent plot.

There is nothing big of a problem with this setting, but it is definitely worse than "Tiansha Lonely Star".

I can only hope that Hongwen can write something different from clichéd stories! After all, his "Swordsman in the Snow" is also dull in the early stage, peak in the midst, and magnificent in the late stage.

I think it's better not to draw conclusions easily first, and then read a few more issues before talking about them.

But as far as the protagonist is concerned, Duan Yu is not as good as Sikongxing (the protagonist of Tiansha Lone Star).

I won’t talk about other arguments anymore, I can only see so much. Finally, I will say that since I wrote it as a “Two Dragons Battle”, I will naturally have to score.

Now I start commenting and rating. I plan to start from 6 aspects, with a full score of 10 points in each aspect, totaling 60 points. There is also an additional score of 1 point (Isn’t the Writers Association paying attention to the morality of writers recently!)

"Tiansha Lonely Star"

Writing style: 9 points (Sima Beijie's writing style is still worse than his ability to write stories.)

Story: 10 points (expectation is overwhelming, full marks)

Character portrayal: 10 points (the characters are vivid, especially the character of the protagonist Sikongxing)

Martial arts description: 9 points (the martial arts moves are very mysterious, and the fight scenes are also domineering, but the unique martial arts skills have not changed much from before)

Martial Arts Concept: 8 points (From the beginning, it is still a traditional martial arts routine, nothing more than revenge, grudges in the world, and disputes between good and evil.)

Influence: 10 points (Sima Beijie's influence in martial arts must be full marks)

Morality (additional points): 0 points (not explained)

"Tiansha Lonely Star" total score is 9+10+10+9+8+10=56 points

"The Legend of the Condor Heroes"

Writing: 10 points (reasonable, only the essay text at the beginning, "The Legend of the Dragon and the Eight Parts" is much better than "The Lonely Star of the Tiansha")

Stories: 7 points (I was just looking forward to it. I originally wanted to give 6 points to pass, but the chapter chapter title was very artistic, add 1 point)

Character portrayal: 10 points (although the protagonist is stupid, in terms of character portrayal, he deserves full marks)

Martial arts description: 7 points (the moves of the match are dull, but the name of the unique martial arts is very good. Let’s summarize 7 points)

Martial Arts Concept: 8 points (From the beginning, it is still a traditional martial arts routine, nothing more than adventures, battles between sects in the martial arts world, and fighting between good and evil.)

Influence: 8 points (Hongwen's influence in martial arts is slightly weaker, but this is just "The Swordsman in the Snow" with some impression points)

Morality (additional points): 1 point (this must be full marks, and the Emperor will also be given full marks when he comes)

The total score of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is 10+7+10+7+8+8+1=51 points

The scores of the last two works are 56 points to 51 points, and the gap between 5 points is a bit big. But I think it is still objective and fair. This is just the beginning. I will watch the plot progress in the future and update it in real time.

I'm very worried about replying to posts and helping to reduce the popularity.

[Nine Dreams Tianxing]: First in the front row, I will warm you up with a post. After reading it, I’m just talking about it. The poster is still very attentive. From the beginning, I look forward to the follow-up story of "Tiansha Lonely Star", so your score is fair.

It’s your last moral additional point, which really makes me laugh. You are just Sima Beijie with a pure connotation. Haha!

[Bronze Mirror Reflects the Beauty]: There is no problem with morality scores that are not explained. The sentence "My son Wang Teng has the resources of a great god" is not a loss. But no matter how much you say it, no matter how much you make, "Tiansha Lonely Star" is written very well. There is no problem with giving morality scores to Hongwen. Just helping the elder brother find his son, it is not an exaggeration to give him one more point.

[Summer Day Tonight]: I looked carefully and found that this post must be the best. The poster's analysis was very well-established, especially the title and chapter artistic conception. I really learned it. Originally, I had a poor sense of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", but I was suddenly looking forward to it by your comments.

[Runlai.com Speed]: I don’t know what you are arguing about? Do you don’t understand Hongwen! What does the dull beginning mean?

"The Legend of the Immortals" started very dull, but it was not written in the middle?

I originally wanted to criticize the poster, who asked you to give "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" such a low score, but for the sake of moral bonus points, let's forget it first.

[Cao Ruosi]: Upstairs, I know you are a fan of Hongwen, but we are not arguing, we just talk about the matter. "Tiansha Lonely Star" is better than "Tianlong Bazi".

You touched your conscience and said, after reading the beginning, which book do you want to read more?

In my opinion, the poster's score is enough to save face for Hongwen. The moral surcharge is obviously because he is afraid that the score of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is too low, so he deliberately added it.

[Doudou is a good baby]: The big man upstairs shut up, what does it mean to save face?

You big men know how to fight, kill, revenge and destroy the family.

In my opinion, the plot of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is so good, even if you fight, it is easy to watch. Two young men and women talk about love in the world, how quiet and beautiful. This is the martial arts I yearn for! I support Hongwen, and the main score of the post is low, so it must be changed.

[Unknown Qingshan Lao]: Doudou is a girl, Jianghu is not what you think. I am not a fan of Hongwen, nor a fan of Sima Beijie. So to be fair, "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is indeed a bit worse than "The Lonely Star of the World". There is no problem with the score of the poster.

[Flying Clouds Looking at the Moon]: Although I like Hongwen, the poster's score is quite conscientious.

[Writing Yu Xinfeng]: It is very fair to support the poster’s scoring!

When he was arguing about which one is higher and which one is lower in the literary forum, Chen Tianhong was also worried at home. Of course, what he was worried about was not the lower score of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", and he didn't care about this at all.

In terms of the martial arts novel model in this world, Chen Tianhong can directly become a god with "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". This god is about being a god with Bai Yu Feng Zijie and the others.

And to be honest, even the martial arts novels they wrote are not as good as "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", except for "Kunlun".

Because of the different structures of the book, "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is one of the pinnacle works of Jin Yong, a master of martial arts in his previous life, and one of the representative works of new martial arts. The character Qiao Feng in the book has the national righteousness and the hero. This kind of martial arts concept does not exist in this world, and it can definitely cause storms in the martial arts circle.

As for the readers' dissatisfaction now, or whether Sima Beijie will criticize him, Chen Tianhong is not worried at all. Readers will definitely be satisfied as long as they continue to read it. If Sima Beijie dares to provoke him, Chen Tianhong will have to beat his son and then beat me.

Chen Tianhong was worried about other things. The boss Miao Mingjie called and sent an invitation to invite Chen Tianhong to attend his and Xiner’s wedding.

Chen Tianhong had already agreed to the big boss Miao Mingjie for this matter, but it was nothing to go there, but the date made him a little sad because he originally planned to go back to his hometown with his parents that day.

"Oh, the matter of going back to my hometown can only be postponed later. If you promise someone, you must do it."

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(End of this chapter)