After rebirth, I became a great writer

Chapter 175: Leopard Head and Phoenix Tails, the big meal is behind

There are thousands of buildings, only six feet of sleep at night, and a wealthy family is rich, and a solar eclipse is only three meals. No matter how noble the ideal or the exciting life is, it will eventually return to ordinary people. No matter how high the status and status are, they will still be infected with the fireworks of the world.

As the saying goes, the fireworks of the world are the most touching of the hearts of ordinary people. When the family sits idle, the lights are so close.

For Chinese people, eating with their families is always the warmest moment.

On the small wooden dining table, there are two plates of dishes and a medium-sized soup bowl.

The two plates of dishes were very light, one was fried with four fungus yam, the other was fried with eggs and tofu, the soup bowl was mung bean porridge, and the main food was two small bowls of rice.

Two elderly people were sitting at the dining table, eating this simple lunch.

The summer is hot, and it is very appropriate for the elderly to eat some light meals, and they cannot eat too much big fish and meat, so they cannot digest well.

"Old man, can you read your magazine after dinner? You don't know that reading books during meals is bad for your stomach?"

Seeing Feng Zijie staring at the magazine while eating, his wife said dissatisfiedly.

When eating and reading, it affects the digestion and absorption of the stomach. Older people have poor digestive system and should pay attention to it.

"It's okay. It's okay. I only drink porridge! Your mung bean porridge today is cooked well, it's sweet and dehumidifying."

Feng Zijie took a sip of porridge first, then pretended to be surprised and said, his eyes were still staring at the martial arts magazine in his hand.

The name of the martial arts magazine is "Legend of the Ancient and Modern Times - Martial Arts Edition", so he is naturally reading Chen Tianhong's new book "The Legend of the Condor Heroes".

When Feng Zijie learned that Chen Tianhong was going to write martial arts news, he was always happy. He even called Cao Xingkui to show off his disgusting and felt that everyone wanted to steal his apprentice.

Cao Xingkui even gave Chen Tianhong a mission because of this, so that Chen Tianhong would go to college to study physics knowledge well and must rewrite science fiction novels. This is his right way.

Since Feng Zijie finished reading the book "The Swordsman in the Snow", he has high expectations for Chen Tianhong.

Although this online novel is still apart from martial arts novels, it is still a bit of a touch. Besides, trying to write martial arts will be helpful to Chen Tianhong's future writing journey.

Therefore, Feng Zijie was very concerned about Chen Tianhong's martial arts novels. During this period, he also called several times to explain the model of martial arts novels to Chen Tianhong and teach his writing experience. It was very troublesome.

Today, Feng Zijie also went to a nearby bookstore to buy a martial arts magazine, but he only bought one, and did not buy Sima Beijie's "Tiansha Lonely Star".

Because he doesn't need to read Sima Beijie's new book, he is always in love, and he knows the style and setting of each of them clearly.

As for whether Sima Beijie would have a conflict with Chen Tianhong, Feng Zijie was not too worried. In his opinion, Sima Beijie could not hold back his face, and that would be too disrespectful to the old man.

If Sima Beijie dares to be shameless, then Feng Zijie will roll up his sleeves and end up. Now Chen Tianhong is half an apprentice to him.

On the other hand, it doesn’t matter whether Chen Tianhong really deliberately challenged Sima Beijie on purpose, but this is a typical mentality of protecting a child.

He has finished reading the two chapters of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" for more than 40,000 words. The reason why he has to read it again at lunch time is because Feng Zijie always feels something is wrong.

From his perspective, those readers are naturally different from those in literature. What readers are watching is the excitement of the plot, and Feng Zijie is more about the setting.

The beginning of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is extremely ordinary, and there is nothing to say about this, but in addition to the plot, Feng Zijie saw the general framework of a martial arts world through the story background revealed by the characters in the book, Dali Kingdom, various sects, etc.

Through this framework of the world, we can see that the following story chapter is definitely not small. After all, the article says that Dali Country is just a small country located in the southwest, which means there are other countries.

The world where several countries coexist is definitely very large, and it may involve the struggle for the power of the temple.

Traditional martial arts novels will also be mixed with some settings, but they are very shallow, and they are nothing more than a battle between heroes and corrupt officials. There is no such thing as rising to the national level, conflicts between ethnic groups, and then sublimating to war, because they are martial arts novelists, not historical novelists.

Feng Zijie always feels that Chen Tianhong has this idea. There is such a setting in the later stage of "The Snow Swordsman", which is one of the reasons why he values ​​Chen Tianhong so much, because if he really adds these, it may write a new path for martial arts novels.

It’s just that such a setting is difficult to write. After all, grudges and disputes in the world are completely different. It’s okay to write one aspect alone, but it’s extremely difficult to mix them together. Without the literary foundation of the Taoist, don’t even think about it.

The foundation of "The Swordsman in the Snow" is still far from it. Of course, Feng Zijie only has this guess.

"Is it delicious? If you drink two more bowls of it, you can drink it."

My wife picked up the spoon and added some to Feng Zijie. She drank two more bowls of mung bean porridge in summer, which would not be enough.

"Haha, no problem."

Feng Zijie put down the magazine in his hand. He stopped guessing. He called Chen Tianhong later to ask about the settings below. Besides, with that kid's hand speed, I think there are a lot of manuscripts to save. I will come and take a look at it.

This is Feng Zijie’s thought at the moment.

He didn't plan to comment on the literature forum, because there was no need to comment. Sima Beijie's new book must be the same as before. It's exciting, but it's still the same old trick, so what's the best to comment on.

As for Chen Tianhong's "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", there is nothing big problem. The plot is dull?

No, it is better to say that it is plain than to say that the plot is beautiful.

What are the comments on two chapters? Why are you doing nothing?

Meanwhile, another family.

There are also several dishes on the dining table made of big stone, and the dishes are much richer than Feng Zijie and others, including meat and vegetable, and even the necessary fruits and watermelons in summer.

There were also two people at the dining table, but they were only one old and one young.

The old man has a very distinctive appearance, with a nose facing upward, giving people the feeling that he likes to see things with his nose. The person who can have such a look is naturally Mr. Sima Beijie, and the other one is his son, Junlin.

What’s interesting is that neither the father nor son moved his chopsticks. They each held a martial arts magazine in their hands and were watching them seriously.

When the magazine was going out to buy watermelons, he went to the bookstore to buy it. There were many people buying martial arts magazines at that time, so he was burned in the sun for more than an hour. When he came back, it was already noon, and his father Sima Beijie had prepared all the lunch.

Now the father and son are not interested in food, but all of them are Chen Tianhong's new book "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", so the scene just now comes.

In terms of reading speed, it must be that young people are faster. Junlin was the first to read it. After reading it, he looked up at his father, pursed his lips and wanted to say something, but he held it back.

After reading it, Junlin not only did not relax, but became even more worried.

He is also a writer. Although he is only writing online literature, he has been studying various martial arts novels during this period and is also trying to write, and has his own understanding of martial arts novels.

As for the first two chapters, putting aside the plot, the writing style is really good, the paragraph structure is clear, it looks ordinary at first, as light as water, but it feels very interesting when you read it carefully. After turning, the foreshadowing is buried behind the seemingly simple and unpretentious lines.

Even though the newly appeared character Duan Yu looks stupid, the shape is full and vivid, the structure is appropriate, and the sense of substitution is very strong.

Compared with the martial arts novels he wrote recently, Junlin is slightly better than "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", but speaking of the writing style and character creation, they are far inferior to "The Legend of the Condor Heroes".

"I am improving, and he is also improving! And the progress is getting bigger and bigger, but these two chapters make me feel frustrated. Sometimes I can't accept it."

Junlin sighed in his heart a little unwillingly.

Even though he has been writing novels under the guidance of his father recently, he is still studying hard and his writing ability is much better than before, in this world, there will always be people who go further than you, and the distance will be further and further.

Sima Beijie didn't know his son's inner thoughts. He reads articles slowly, and of course he writes more slowly. For the elderly, please understand.

He just saw the second chapter. Unlike his son's feelings, Sima Beijie was quite relaxed. As for the chapter just now, it had no characteristics, and his writing style was OK.

"My son is afraid of snake bites, and for ten years he has been afraid of ropes! Should I agree to Xiao Li and cooperate with the beat of the boy, vent my anger on his son, and vent my anger on his own."

Sima Beijie was thinking in his heart while watching the second chapter.

Just as the Tianping slowly shifted toward his focused side, a description of [Bei Ming Divine Art] in the book made Sima Beijie's vision pause.

[Bei Ming Divine Art]: Zhuangzi's "Xiaoyaoyou" says: The one with the dark sea in the north of Qianfa is the Tianchi Lake. There are fish, which is thousands of miles wide, but no one knows how to cultivate it.

It is also said: Moreover, if the water is not thick, it will be weak to carry a large boat. If you cover the cup of water on the col hall, you will be mustard. If you put it in the cup, you will be glued, and the water will be shallow and the boat will be large.

"Who is Zhuangzi? What is "Xiaoyaoyou"? Could it be that the kid compiled it himself? Not to mention, it's really good, it has a very ancient style!"

Sima Beijie couldn't help but exclaim that although he has a rather irritable personality, he usually likes to read books, especially some historical books.

Sima Beijie loved ancient Chinese very much, and it can be seen from the chapter chapters of "Tiansha Lonely Star". Therefore, he liked the classical Chinese sentences written by Hongwen very much.

"So, the first priority is to accumulate internal strength. Since the internal strength is strong, all martial arts in the world are used by me, just like the North, where all the big boats and small boats are carried, and all the big fish and small fish are tolerated. Therefore, internal strength is the foundation, and tricks are the end."

This sentence is the real explanation of [Bei Ming Divine Art], but in Sima Beijie's opinion, it is far worse than the first two sentences, but when combined, the artistic conception is very profound.

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"I said, how do you think the beginning of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is written?"

"It's pretty good, yes. No."

Sima Beijie did not react after his son's sudden inquiry, and subconsciously expressed his true thoughts. After he reacted, he felt embarrassed and started to deny it again. But he didn't know how to explain.

Just as the awkward atmosphere began to spread on the dining table, the ringtone of the mobile phone rang, which was Sima Beijie's, just rightly breaking the awkward atmosphere.

The phone number was called by Li Xuekai.

"Hey, Xiao Li! Is there anything wrong?"

"Old Mr. Duan, is the thing I told you two days ago OK? If you agree, we will inform the reporter."

"Wait a little longer!"

This sentence and wait made Li Xuekai on the other side of the phone silent for a long time.

"Old Duan, I have read Hongwen's "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" and it is very poorly written."

"I said wait a little longer."

Sima Beijie's tone became higher, and then he felt a little stiff. After all, he had a contract with Jincheng, so he said something again.

"Okay, Xiao Li will do this first, I'm having a meal!"

The phone hangs up.

"Son, let's have a meal! If you don't eat food, it will be cold."

Sima Beijie didn't mention the topic just now, and even thoughtfully picked up a piece of braised chicken nugget for his son.

"Yeah, you eat too."

Junlin was so smart that he didn't continue to ask questions.

In fact, after so long, the dishes have been cold, but is this important? It doesn’t matter at all.

Junlin had already got the answer he wanted from his father. After watching "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", what he was most worried about was that his father would do irrational things and continue to target Hongwen. But now it seems that his father should not be able to do anything unless Hongwen takes the initiative to provoke.

Sima Beijie's idea was to be true, and what Li Xuekai said was also true. He also wanted to see the subsequent plot. If Hongwen didn't write well later, and if the plan was good, Sima Beijie would always be as stable as an old dog and would never speak out again in his life.

Listening to the busy tone on the phone, Sima Beijie's words were echoed in his ears, Li Xuekai looked confused. He didn't understand, and he didn't understand why Sima Beijie, who was irritated, could still say "wait a little longer" in the face of provocation.

I would say that I was worried about Hongwen’s new book before, but now the new book has come out, so he bought it as soon as possible.

What's the thing I wrote? It's so dull that Li Xuekai's heart has no ups and downs. It can be compared with "Tiansha Lonely Star", it's just a few streets.

He wanted to call the phone as soon as he finished reading it. Later, when he thought of Ding Senlei's words, Li Xuekai thought about it again, carefully read his mind, and confirmed that his plan was foolproof, then he picked up the phone.

But Li Xuekai never expected that Sima Beijie would refuse again.

"What are the old man worried about? What are he afraid of? He really has the older he is, the less courageous he is."

Li Xuekai complained, but he was helpless. This plan must be participated by Sima Beijie himself. If he doesn't come forward, this thing will not be done.

"Is it possible that this book has highlights that I haven't discovered!"

Li Xuekai's eyes fell on his desk again, with the martial arts magazine of Qingcheng Publishing House on it.

"No, I'll read it again."

Qingcheng Publishing House, Office.

Li Man slid his mouse and was browsing posts from the literary forum. Chen Tianhong didn't care about readers' reactions to "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" because he had a clear mind, and Li Man was not like him.

"As a matter of fact, the evaluation of "Tiansha Lonely Star" is better. Alas. The sales of "Tiansha Lonely Star" may be affected by some later."

Li Man said to herself, it wasn't that she only cared about the sales volume of martial arts magazines, it was purely a businessman's habit.

In fact, what Li Man cares most about is not sales, but the quality of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". If everyone evaluates that Chen Tianhong's new book is better than Sima Beijie's, even if the sales volume is lower than expected, Li Man will still be happy.

"Or else call Tianhong to comfort me."

Li Man thought to herself that she was worried that Chen Tianhong's evaluation on the forum would affect his mentality.

After hesitating for a while, Li Man picked up the phone. However, the number he dialed out prompted that he was in the call.

Jinling Community

In the bedroom, Chen Tianhong was talking on the phone. It was Feng Zijie on the other side of the phone.

The content of their call is about the subsequent plot setting of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". If it is changed to online novels, it is called the outline.

"Tianhong, my suggestion is to try to enrich the plot, write more stories about the grievances of the world, and also focus on describing the scenes of the fight."

"Yeah...Yeah..."

Chen Tianhong nodded, and there was nothing else in his mouth, just um, um.

He did not tell Feng Zijie about the subsequent settings, but simply explained the plot of the next dozen chapters, but did not say the final settings.

Because the most hero is to serve the country and the people, can this be said?

People are teaching experience, and they will be embarrassed to directly throw out the idea that is one step ahead of this world.

"Tianhong, do you have any subsequent manuscripts? I'll help you read it."

Feng Zijie expressed his final thoughts, and he wanted to see the follow-up.

"Yes, some, I'll send you a mail."

Chen Tianhong did not refuse, and there would be no problem with sending the manuscript to Feng Zijie. With his character, it would be impossible to leak it to the Internet.

"By the way, Tianhong, did you deliberately choose to post a book on the same day as Lao Duan?"

"No! It's really a coincidence."

Chen Tianhong said truthfully that he knew that Lao Duan was Junlin's father, or "Wang Teng"'s father.

"That's right."

Feng Zijie stretched his tone.

"Tianhong, don't worry, if I'm here, you're fine if you do it on purpose. Young man! I understand! Haha, just like that. Please send me the manuscript quickly!"

The phone hangs up.

"This old man."

Chen Tianhong was so amused and laughed. Although he knew that Feng Zijie's last words were joking, he was quite moved. He could hear Feng Zijie's intention to protect him.

At the same time, I felt a little embarrassed. Mr. Feng cared about him so much, so he would take the blame.

"It should be fine! Taking the blame may not be the blame."

Chen Tianhong said to himself that he turned on the computer and found the saved manuscripts of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". He did not send all the manuscripts to Feng Zijie, but only sent the chapters of the next issue.

After posting the manuscript, Chen Tianhong did not turn off the computer, and turned on the computer. By the way, go online to check the news!

More than ten minutes later, Chen Tianhong closed the computer, and there was no special news. As for the dull questions about the beginning of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" that readers mentioned, Chen Tianhong was too lazy to respond.

This is the style of Jin Yong's martial arts novels. The leopard head and phoenix tail are like cooking, and they are gradually becoming tasty. You feel that the beginning is dull and boring, but in fact the big meal is at the back.

Thinking of the big meal, Chen Tianhong felt hungry, and a strong fragrance wafted over and sniffed it. It was the smell of pig elbows, and it was the stewed pork elbows.

Then a sound like a sound of nature came, it was my mother's voice.

"Tianhong, come out to wash your hands and have a meal."

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