Crusader Kings: Prisoners of War

I have finished the stumbling work. First of all, I have to praise myself for doing a good job. At least I have finished writing a book in its entirety. This is very rare. After all, it took several months. Not only did I write every day, but I wrote almost every day. difficult.

I'm awesome, give yourself a pat on the back.

Then I will summarize the problem and say a few words to you.

First of all, it deserves praise. At least the entire structure of this book has not collapsed. This is indeed an improvement for me, but other than that, there are really many problems.

It is impossible for me to have no problems as soon as I write, or to correct them immediately if I have problems, but I have to realize that I have some problems, and try to correct them if I can. If I can't, I can just hide them and write less. The following is the feedback I think or I have received. If you have any questions, you can reply. I will try my best to consider them after seeing them.

Ranking of problem size, the size of the problem in your opinion, it’s normal if you think it’s wrong, it’s best to say it and let me hear your thoughts.

I will try my best to correct these things in the next book. Whether it can be corrected is hard to say (it is not a problem if it is easy to change). I can only say that I know this problem and want to change it.

First: There is a problem with the design of the combat power structure. In fact, the author originally wanted to write a more fantasy story at the beginning, but when he first started writing, he realized that he might not be able to design the combat structure, so he chose a more historical theme to write, but the design of this theme was still too... It's rough (or rather, it's basically not involved).

Second: There is a problem with the protagonist’s personality. I found that the identity of the protagonist is a bit subtle and is not fully integrated into the world view. This leads to many derived problems, such as the protagonist desires too little, the protagonist is sometimes too holy, the protagonist has too little interaction with the world, etc. To a certain extent, the writing is too formal.

Third: There are too few ups and downs in the plot. On the one hand, this is because my personal writing ability is not enough and my thinking is not right. On the other hand, there is actually no need for the protagonist to think about so many things. When writing, the author always thinks that "the protagonist can think of this thing, so there will be no accidents." Then the plot performance is too bland and smooth, with no ups and downs. fluctuation.

Fourth: The emotional scene is not quite right. According to the author's personal opinion, it is actually quite tacky. To be honest, the author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes. This is just to force myself to practice writing. It's to be expected that the writing is not good, but I have to know what's wrong and what's not good. Now the author understands a little bit.

PS. But I still didn’t expect that I could write so shamelessly. The author gives himself a 7-point score.

Fifth: The entire worldview has not been developed. The problems caused by the extension are abstract character creation and unclear worldview setting. This is caused by the author's inexperience and insufficient conception.

In fact, if it had been written according to the author's original plan, this book would have cost about 1.4 million before it was considered complete. However, as I wrote and wrote, I found a lot of problems. After thinking about it, I decided to finish it quickly and start a new book. This book is There are indeed many problems.

In fact, if I continue writing, it won’t be very interesting for readers. I also doubt myself as I write, so I might as well end it as quickly as possible. Please understand.

It was also expected. It can only be said that there is indeed some progress, but there is still a lot of room for improvement.

This book may actually be one of my reading notes, so I think it is somewhat rewarding. The author used to be the kind of person who only read the history of certain countries. He didn’t know much about Western history, and even the Big Three didn’t know about it. No one knows after Augustus.

After writing this book, the author at least settled down and read a lot of books. Basically, the content in the book was slowly understood while I was writing the book. It was also beneficial for me to open the book. I hope it can be useful to you. Bring some benefit.

The author has already thought about what to write for the next book. He has read some books one after another in the past few months and used his brain to come up with some plots, but he has not yet started writing. I am afraid that I will be tired of the old and open a new book and do not want to write an old book. At that time It's abstract.

But the author has basically figured out the general world view, the entire main plot, the plots of the first three volumes, and the bibliography. I feel that the preparation work is much more complete than this book.

Therefore, the author uses the hook here to ensure that the next book will be better than this one, and sometimes it needs to be a little bold.

As for the subject matter of the story, it is a little different from this book. It is more fantasy. It can probably be regarded as a fantasy history in the true sense. It involves more legends and myths than normal fantasy, and the protagonist is a little more interesting, and the content is more relaxed and abstract.

I think I can give you the results in about ten days. I will spend a few days reading the book to check for omissions and fill in the gaps, and then I will spend five days to get a good start.

No more than fifteen days at the latest, so I’ll leave it here for now.

If you are interested, you can join the discussion group. I will ask some questions in the group. Then I may send the opening, book title, introduction, and cover to the readers in the group for feedback.

Finally, thank you for reading my work. I am very aware that it has many shortcomings, but after all, it is my own effort. I am very happy that someone can read it. Thank you for reading.