Doom: I have a fortress and a puppet army!

Let's talk about the final remarks.

The poor performance of this book is actually expected. After all, I haven't really written a new novel for three to five years. Sometimes, the scenes I want to create are like wild horses that can't be controlled at all.

Before the release, when the story was killed through the Jiangcheng map, the plot had already collapsed. It couldn't be controlled at all. There was no sense of scene, despair, growth of the protagonist, the sense of satisfaction of the guards, and the uniqueness of the protagonist.

Basically, the protagonist led the guards to run around, hunt crystal cores for upgrades, and there was no interaction with human survivors. He showed off the superiority of the powerful upgrade of the gold finger with the extraordinary evolutionists...

The chapters before the release were upgraded so fast that they took off. This was something I didn't expect. I couldn't control it while writing.

Let's talk about what the normal content of this book is. It's that the protagonist walks in the doomsday, there are dangers everywhere, there are monsters, and people are sinister. The expectation of adventure upgrades and building a safe base that should have been there is completely gone.

Blame me.

The writing is broken.

The plot is broken, and updating every day is like squeezing toothpaste, and nothing can be written at all.

At that time, even the fortress's role has rarely appeared. In the later period, I was too lazy to design even the guard upgrade. I just upgraded directly with the amount of energy. If I were a reader, I would definitely abandon this book.

It is right that the results are not good.

I am really sorry to see the readers now. I didn't write a book that meets the expectations of the title (fortress + legion). This should be a very bad reading experience.

I won't say much, I will give you a kowtow first.

Bang bang bang!

This book insisted on squeezing toothpaste for three months, and finally got the Yuewen creation support (full attendance). Sorry, I really need a manuscript fee, and insist on continuing to write.

I am not afraid of being laughed at by everyone. I have really regressed. I submitted more than 20 beginnings, more than 100,000 words. After get off work, I wrote intermittently for several months before the beginning of this book was passed. It was because the editor was willing to give me a chance.

I have made a good summary of the three months of writing this book. The next book will also be about the end of the world. This time I should be able to write a doomsday article that is worth reading. (End of this chapter)