Fox in the Penalty Area

This is the result of my original deletion and rewriting, please review it.

The original content did not have so much foreshadowing before and during the game, and there was no character development. It started directly from chapter 414 on the game against the Blue and White Munich, scoring goals and breaking records. I think it was written like this because of the lack of foreshadowing. It was actually not refreshing, nor did it create any impressive characters. It was a complete waste of such an important game as the semi-finals.

At that time, it was because I wanted to finish the book and the plot would advance faster.

As a result, things went wrong faster and faster, and they fell into the gutter.

The game was painfully written and devoid of passion or feeling.

After writing forcibly for half the game, I felt that I couldn’t continue writing like this. After calming down and thinking carefully, you still have to return to your "original intention":

This book is not about how the protagonist Hu Lai pretends to be cool, but about a world.

In this case, what is shaping a world without other characters with distinct personalities, thoughts of their own, and different stories?

So delete and rewrite, slow down your thoughts, and repeatedly describe and shape different characters from multiple dimensions.

For example, Hantcek is a head coach with a personality who is willing to leave his old club for the sake of his own future, and is willing to play the bad guy in front of the fans of his old club in order to win. Another example is adding the description of Becker's desire to win the Ballon d'Or... and so on.

Write the two rounds of the semi-finals as a game, and also as a complete story to conceive and describe it, with a beginning, a transition, a foreshadowing, a climax, an ending... everything is included.

These are actually what some readers call "water", and they are also the charm of the novel.

Everyone knew that Hu Lai was going to break the record, and some even guessed how to break the record. But that's just the skeleton of the story.

This alone is not enough.

From Chapter 415 to Chapter 443, the thoughts, characters, and details of the characters in this nearly 100,000 words are the meat and potatoes.

Without these meats to fill the skeleton, what's the beauty of just showing you a skeleton?

In this way, when everyone watches this plot, they will really feel happy when Hu Lai breaks the record, because the people and emotions in it are real and can give everyone a sense of empathy.

Instead of dryly writing that Hu Lai scored a goal, I wrote that Hu Lai broke the record. It's all about what I tell you, not what you feel when you read it.

Judging from the final result, I succeeded. Whether it’s subscriptions, monthly passes or chapter activity, this is proven.

So even though some people scolded me when I was laying the groundwork before the game, I will still insist on writing like this.

And in order not to affect everyone’s reading experience,

I will delete all the comments that say shit. If the fans are only trainees, apprentices, and disciples and call me shit, then I will not only delete the post but also ban it - this is what I have emphasized before.

If you see that your comment about water is gone, don’t come and ask why you deleted the comment, because you are talking nonsense. If I don’t delete it, will you still have offspring?

This is not water, this is a novel, a world.

Seventy percent of the human body is made up of water, and seventy percent of the earth's covered area is also water. People cannot live without drinking water, and life cannot be born in the world without water.

Therefore, my novels will definitely be "watery". This is my characteristic and advantage. I am proud of it and have no intention of changing it.

If you like it, watch it if you can accept it.

If you don't like it or can't accept it, don't watch it.

Everyone chooses both ways and is well on his own.

I believe that those who can read this are readers who have agreed and accepted it. Thank you for your support and understanding. It is the world we have shaped together.

This novel will be finished with almost over one million words. According to my speed, maybe it will be finished by the end of this year or the beginning of next year.

Even in the final stage, I will always adhere to my original intention and have the same attitude as when I first started writing this book. As long as there are parts that I am not satisfied with, I will delete and rewrite them and take every plot seriously.

When the day comes when the book is finished, I hope that we can all look back on the journey over the past two years and recall many scenes that made people smile and feel numb, and feel reluctance and melancholy from the bottom of our hearts.

Thanks!