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Chapter 247 246. Are you crazy?

After the movie screening at the premiere ended, the lights in the theater were turned back on, and everyone began to talk and exchange their thoughts on "To Youth":

"What do you think of this movie?"

"It's okay. The first half is full of laughs, but the second half is a bit scattered and a bit rushed."

"Liu Ye did a good job, and the actresses are all beautiful! Especially Zheng Wei is so beautiful!"

"There were laughter and tears. The protagonist was basically flesh and blood. Yang Mi did a good job!"

"The acting is good. To be honest, I didn't notice much about it, but she looks pretty good! Especially her figure, it's simply amazing!"

"Well, the most impressive scene in the whole film is when the heroine confesses her love to the hero, and then the hero says: Are you crazy?"

"Hahahaha, I am also deeply impressed by this part, Chen Xiaozheng is so awesome!"

"Worst than "Those Years", but still watchable."

"Don't be too harsh! I heard that the director of Bad Monkey 72 has never made a movie before. The first part is already pretty good!"

"Well, it's really good for a debut novel. After all, not everyone is as talented as Wei Wu!"

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After the movie screening ended, Yang Mi pricked up her ears to listen to the discussions of the people around her, then turned to look at Wei Wu with some anxiety:

"what do you think?"

Wei Wu thought for a moment and said, "It's not bad. On a scale of 10, it's at least a 7.5 film! Your performance is not bad, at least you're not falling behind!"

Hearing what Wei Wu said, Yang Mi suddenly felt much more at ease.

But before she could say anything, the host suddenly called the creative team on stage to thank her.

Wei Wu, as the screenwriter of this film, was of course also invited.

"Then let's go up?"

"good."

So Wei Wu and Yang Mi went on stage one after another to interact with the audience!

In fact, Wei Wu had already seen the finished film.

However, reviewing a film alone and watching it with everyone in the cinema are indeed two completely different experiences.

Even if it is the same movie, the viewing experience of the latter is much better.

Wei Wu just said that this movie can be rated 7.5, and it does not contain much personal feelings. In fact, it is relatively objective.

The Douban rating of this movie in my previous life has remained stable at 7.3 for many years.

It wasn't until 2021 that Xiao Yanzi was deemed a bad artist and banned, and the film's Douban rating suddenly dropped to 6.5.

And Xue Xiaolu's version is definitely better than Little Swallow. A slightly higher rating is normal.

But no matter how high it is, there is no point, because this movie still has some problems:

1. The plot line is spread out too much, and everything is clicked; 2. The characters are flat and face-like; 3. The paragraphs are spliced ​​stiffly and there are various jump cuts.

Compared with "Those Years", the biggest difficulty of this movie is that there are too many characters!

There are four people in the girls' dormitory: Zheng Wei, Ruan Guan, Zhu Xiaobei, and Li Weijuan, and three people in the boys' dormitory are Chen Xiaozheng, Xu Kaiyang, and Zhang Kai.

In addition, there are also the principal's daughter Zeng Yu who has a crush on the male protagonist, the second female lead Ruan Wan's scumbag boyfriend Zhao Shiyong, and the neighbor's brother Lin Jing who has a crush on the female protagonist.

There are already 10 people, and everyone has a line and a story.

Then the male protagonist has two suitors: Zheng Wei and Zeng Yu; the female protagonist also has two suitors: Chen Xiaozheng and Lin Jing.

The second male lead, Lin Jing, likes Zheng Wei, but Shi Jie likes him again; the second lead female lead, Ruan Wan, has a boyfriend, Zhao Shiyong, but later marries Wu Jiang.

Count, how many emotional lines are there?

Originally there was a love line about Zhang Kai's secret love for Ruan Wan, but Wei Wu deleted it directly!

In fact, this script is most suitable for adaptation into a TV series. If a youth drama with twenty or thirty episodes could be made, it might be much better.

But if you compress the content of 20 or 30 episodes of a TV series to 130 minutes, it will naturally and inevitably appear:

The plot is popularized and the characters are familiar.

In fact, when Wei Wu wrote the script, he also thought about whether to cut a few lines or delete a few characters. But the problem is that this movie itself is close to a group drama.

If we cut off a few characters or a few emotional lines, it might actually be worse and become nondescript!

It’s not about harem novels. You can cut off one or two heroines and turn them into single-woman novels. After all, the core attractions and audiences of these two themes are different.

In the interactive session after the screening, Wei Wu actively conducted business, but tried not to overwhelm the director and starring actors.

After the interactive session is over, the premiere will be completed successfully. Then everyone had dinner together, and then Wei Wu followed Yang Mi back home.

Yang Mi was probably very happy today. After all, she had been very proud of herself these past two days. The TV series she starred in was extremely popular in Taiwan and she was unbeatable.

The movie she starred in was finally released and received a good response. From now on, she can be regarded as an actor who lives in both film and television!

So I accidentally drank a few too many drinks during dinner, and now my face was red and I couldn't even walk steadily!

The drunk Yang Mi was like a lazy cat, leaning softly on Wei Wu's shoulder, her eyes blurred, and she hugged Wei Wu's waist and kept chanting:

"Wei Wu, I'm so happy! Are you happy?"

Wei Wu wanted to roll her eyes because she had asked this question no less than 8 times tonight!

No matter what she says now, you just need to follow her "Ah, yes, yes, yes".

So Wei Wu weakly said: "Happy, happy!"

"My movie is finally released! I'm so happy! Aren't you happy for me?"

Wei Wu helped her walk to the bathroom, and said casually:

"I'm happy."

"Do you think I'm beautiful?"

"Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!"

"I want to eat Peking duck!"

"No problem."

"I also want to eat candied haws!"

"Okay, I'll buy it for you later. Let's take a bath first, okay?"

Luckily she didn't vomit, but the smell of alcohol from her whole body was pungent!

Wei Wu helped her into the bathroom, took off her clothes and put her in the bathtub, and then helped her take a bath.

A drunk woman is like a rose about to bloom. Her fragrance becomes more and more intense under the stimulation of alcohol, making people irresistible.

She is beautiful, but the drunken Yang Mi is not honest even when taking a bath. She deliberately opens and closes her mouth, splashing the water in the bathtub on Wei Wu.

"Stop messing around, wash well!"

"I won't!"

Her eyes looked hazy and blurred, like a twinkling star, intoxicating.

Originally, Wei Wu saw that she was drunk and didn't argue with her, but she got more and more excited!

Not only did she deliberately spill the bath water on Wei Wu, she also scooped up the bath water with her hands and prepared to feed it to him.

Unable to bear it any longer, Wei Wu was so angry that he asked her to grab the non-slip handrail on the bathroom wall and picked up a big stick to teach her a lesson.

Yang Mi was sweating all over, and when she was put back into the bathtub and stimulated by the water, she was only about 70% drunk and her eyes were no longer blurred!

Yang Mi felt that her whole body was about to fall apart, especially her legs were sore.

If she wasn't lying on her back in the bathtub now, she would probably have collapsed on the ground like mud.

Just when she was about to speak, she felt like her throat was smoking, thinking of how she had just cried and begged for mercy, but the other party still refused to give in.

Yang Mi was so angry that she threw the bath towel in her hand and cursed:

"Get out! You bastard who took advantage of others!"

The first thing she did after she woke up was to drive Wei Wu out.

After all, if he continued to stay in the bathroom, who knew when she would finish taking a bath today?

But Wei Wu didn't listen to her this time. Instead, he came forward and gently helped her wash, patiently explaining:

"You are still drunk, and you are tired and sleepy. I am afraid that you will fall asleep while bathing, and it will be bad if you catch a cold."

Yang Mi felt warm in her heart, but she didn't forget to glare at him:

"It's nice to say, but don't you think about who made me so tired."

Wei Wu grinned, then helped her wash and dry her body, put on pajamas, and finally hugged her and put her on the bed sideways, carefully tucking the corners of the quilt for her.

Then he kissed her on the forehead: "Go to sleep, good night."

"Yeah, good night."

After Wei Wu went to take a shower, Yang Mi felt that she couldn't just let it go, so she planned to talk to him after he came out.

As a result, due to drunkenness and excessive fatigue, sleepiness came like a tide, and she fell asleep in less than a minute...