I really want to hit the street

Chapter 90 The painstaking finished product (×) draft (√)

Pu Jie doesn't care much about how his works are adapted.

After all, he doesn't think his work is very good and there are many NTR poisonous plots. If the screenwriter can adapt it in a non-toxic way, it will be good for people to watch.

Of course, the kind that has to pass the trial.

Otherwise he will be very excited!

"Ahem! What are you thinking about? Neiku Film and Television is a serious website, not domestic brands like Jingdong, Tianmei, and Jelly."

On the other side, Fu Weng went to draft the contract after Pu Jie agreed.

It was written in the contract that if the quality of the scripts for the first three episodes passed the standard, half of the deposit would be paid in advance.

Later, when I shoot with the team, there is still 100,000 yuan in labor fees.

Producer Yang Chao gave him 500,000 yuan to adapt the script, but he only quoted Pu Jie 400,000 yuan.

Originally, Fu Weng wanted to save the 100,000 yuan. After all, this was the operation of the old TV station employees, but when he thought of Editor Pu's profound understanding of justice and the reduction of salary to join the team, he gave himself two more slaps and put this down. The money was given to Pu Bian in the form of group labor fees.

Suddenly, he felt that he was much nobler.

"But it's still far from the level of Pu Bian."

Pu Jie didn't know that Fu Weng was so worried. Now he just thought about how to earn the 400,000 yuan.

It's definitely not okay to write a random meal.

They are not stupid either.

When the script for the first three episodes fails, he will become a clown.

In fact, the main reason why Pu Jie accepted this script is that it is summer vacation, there are no classes in school, and all his roommates have left, so he has plenty of time, so it would be good to write a script in addition to writing the book.

"Give it a try. According to my level, I can adapt it to whatever level I can."

The biggest difference between a script and a novel is that the script is an audio-visual language, and the content must be expressed in scenes, actions, and dialogues, while the novel is a written language, which can be expressed in inner drama, emotional fluctuations, and some metaphors, but these cannot be placed in the In TV dramas, otherwise the protagonist would always rely on his inner monologue to drive the plot, which would be embarrassing!

If you want to change the novel into a script, you must cut off the inner activities and emotions that the online novel author is best at, and abandon the long-winded writing and convert it into concise camera language to be considered qualified.

Of course, the truth behind this can't be explained in a sentence or two. Fortunately, Pu Jie learned well in his professional courses, and Wang Xiang occasionally gave him individual guidance, so the principles and applications were acceptable.

As for the novel "The Rogue Doctor", it contains a lot of rural language and dialogue, which is very down-to-earth and suitable for this 40-episode long TV series. It does not need to be modified much. Pu Jie mainly changed the way the plots in the novel are advanced. into lens language.

It's a bit difficult, but you can give it a try.

Pu Jie's biggest advantage is that he still remembers the pictures of constructing these stories in his mind, and he knows which point of each story is the most interesting.

Just when Pu Jie was about to freeze his hands, Fu Weng took a picture of the draft contract and asked him to see if there was anything that could be changed.

Pu Jie glanced at it casually, but there was nothing wrong with it. Then he saw the title of the drama written on it.

"Wait a minute. What's the name of this show?"

""Country Love", oh! The producer changed it because he was afraid that the original title would not pass the review. Is there any problem?"

"Oh no, no."

Big problem!

Pu Jie thought of the very famous TV series of the same name in his previous life, which was really popular all over the country!

Breathe the wind of rural life in Northeast China to the whole country!

Every year there is a film released during the Lunar New Year, and it dominates the charts as soon as it comes out, and its popularity remains high.

Pu Jie used to feel that this kind of drama was not interesting to watch. It was too boring and only the elderly would watch it.

Then, one day when he was eating, he really didn’t know what to look at, so he casually clicked in and took a look.

Fallen!

This is so pretty!

Simply can not stop!

Since then, this drama has become his go-to meal, a must-see for him, and he has watched the 13 episodes several times.

"Good boy. How come I see this name in this world?"

Suddenly, Pu Jie's eyes lit up.

He seems to know how to change it!

Pu Jie wrote diligently for a week.

Fu Weng got the first three episode scripts in his hand, washed his hands, and started reading.

The script of the first three episodes is to tell the first story: The Immortal Jumps to Send His Son to Guanyin.

The first story was told in the form of a script.

Liu Ergou is the protagonist, but other Taohua Village villagers also appear.

The script retains the novelty of the story, and the completion is very good. It is not as dark as the original work. Instead, it is like a farce caused by the desperate Huzi himself, and then leads to the plot of Huzi’s mother’s cancer, and the plot of Peach Blossom Village. The village chief, Widow Wang and others seemed to have unveiled a mysterious corner of Taohua Village, and they were full of expectations.

Overall, it was like reading the novel again.

After Fu Weng read it several times, he clapped his hands and applauded!

"Okay! Okay! This is the embodiment of the ultimate level of screenwriting ability. There is no trick to win. The original story is good enough. Extraneous changes will only destroy the story. It can be expressed in the language of the camera. That is The best answer Pu Bian gave me!”

"He used this script to tell me what it means to rule by doing nothing! This is confidence in one's own work!"

“In our industry now, many screenwriters look down on novel authors. They often adapt other people’s works and add a few Internet-breaking jokes, thinking that they will gain applause. In fact, they destroy the overall environment created by the author and lose their soul! Sure enough, only the original author knows his own work best!”

"This 500,000 yuan was not spent in vain!"

But he took a closer look and found that it was a bit rough, and some scenes were not fully completed.

After thinking for a moment, Fu Weng slapped his thigh!

understood!

This is a semi-finished product. I just let him take a look at the first draft, and if he is satisfied, he will complete other small parts.

I cautiously called Pu Bian and explained my questions.

Pu Jie was silent for a moment and replied: "Yes, that's right."

"I knew it! There must be no problem with the content. Editor Pu will improve the script and we can formally sign the contract."

Pu Jie hung up the phone.

What a fart!

This is already the finished product that he wrote with all his heart and soul!

He read it several times, but he couldn't see where the completion of his script was not high enough.

"It's broken, it's broken. We've reached a level bottleneck. What can we do? Even after signing, we still have to conflict with the team and time in the later stage. It would be great if someone could help me."

Um?

Pu Jie suddenly thought of two people.

"professional team!"

Immediately, he dialed Zhang Wei's phone: "Screenwriter Zhang, have you and Screenwriter Wang done any work recently?"

Zhang Wei: "Oh, we are working on our own original script!"

"Are you interested in helping me with the script?"

Zhang Wei sighed: "Editor Pu, we two brothers have made enough guns over the years, and now we are not too young. It is time to start our own business. We are very confident that we can sell this script. It is really good." Excuse me."

Pu Jie: "100,000 per person, plus signature rights."

Wang Jin grabbed the phone: "Go to Beiyi University tomorrow and ask the guest house to prepare instant noodles. I love Laotan pickled cabbage!"

Then, Pu Jie heard the sound of packing things over there.

It seems that he is about to leave.

Pu Jie sighed: "Money is such a good thing."

the next day.

Pu Jie handed the three-episode script to the two people who came from the company and asked them to perfect it before leaving.

The two took the script and read it over.

Looking at each other.

"The story is okay, but the script is a bit rough."

"The scene construction and transitions are still a bit immature."

"Is this the level of Pubian?"

"I don't see it."

The two of them pondered for a moment, then patted their foreheads and understood!

"This is Pu's draft! It was written as an essay. The main content is already there, but the rest of the improvement work is too low-end and he is too lazy to do it."

"That's for sure! Otherwise, with Pu Bian's level, we wouldn't be needed."

"Does such a simple job have the right to authorize? This is the realm of Pu editors!"

Wang Jin and Zhang Wei's eyes were filled with tears. This was the first time for the two brothers to take the initiative to give them the right of signature in so many years of work.

"We must take things seriously and give Pu Bian an explanation!"

Now, Pu Jie is happy!

As long as the scripts of the first three episodes have been revised, the two of them will be given the follow-up ideas and asked to follow the "Country Love" model for the remaining 37 episodes.

He was directly out of the sea of suffering!

Earn 300,000 from blood!

"I also became a script dumper once?"

But he has no psychological burden, because this is for the good of the crew!

After that, there is no problem if two people join the group.

The question is that I am busy with official duties, and I have to control the overall situation. It is enough for my younger brother to come.

"Writing a script is too difficult, but it's more fun to write a novel."

As expected, Pu Jie's book was released on August 1st and received 50 first orders!

It made Xiaoxing’s nose crooked with anger!

He feels like his career has been challenged!

Then we urgently pushed the book to new media and WeChat reading channels.

The person in charge looked at it and shook his head.