I'm in DanMachi: Start A Simulator!
Chapter 271 Xia Laofat Who Has Benefited A Lot (Thanks To The Monthly Ticket Of 0 Breaking Dawn 0)
"Good day, sir, if I excuse you."
"Do you like this light novel very much?"
The sudden sound interrupted Li Yiming's thoughts.
He turned his head subconsciously, and saw a pair of well-proportioned legs covered in black silk imprinted in front of his eyes, which made people feel that his eyes were extraordinarily bright.
Looking up along the legs, Li Yiming suddenly froze in place.
Xiazhiqiu Shiyu?
Did he really see it right?
Li Yiming's head was so dizzy that his expression was slightly out of control.
Isn't this the world of "One Punch Man"?
Why do people appear in the everyday world!
The traversal simulation system seems to have never told him that this is a fusion world, right?
It was also for this reason that the doubts deep in Li Yiming's heart could not be hidden, almost showing on his face.
This situation obviously also appeared in Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's body.
As early as the moment Li Yiming turned around, the girl was already stunned.
That extremely handsome cheek seemed to be imprinted directly in her mind, no matter what she did, there was no way to erase it.
How could there be such a handsome person in this world!
Not only that, but even the temperament is so unique, no matter whether it is the teachers in the school or the peers, there is no way to compare with it.
Is it really a star?
Countless thoughts gathered in Kasumigaoka Shiyu's mind.
The two just looked at each other without saying a word, and the air seemed to be completely frozen at this moment.
In the end, Li Yiming was the first to suppress the surprise in his heart.
"Excuse me, what did you just say?"
"Ah, oh..."
The magnetic voice also pulled Kasumigaoka Shiwa back.
Thinking of his behavior just now, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu suddenly felt shy.
"Excuse me, this gentleman took the liberty to disturb you "Ye."
"I saw that you stayed in front of the counter for so long, flipping through this light novel. I happen to be a fan of this light novel as well."
"So I want to share my experience with you."
Kasumigaoka Shiu did not reveal her identity as a light novel writer.
Before the situation is fully determined, it will definitely appear very abrupt to say such a thing directly, so it is better to change the direction.
However, the strong expectation on her face betrayed her true thoughts at this moment.
Hearing the girl's question, Li Yiming subconsciously looked at the light novel in his hand.
He just flipped through a book at random, and didn't pay too much attention to the content at all, but Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's current behavior is obviously not particularly normal.
Flip the book over and glance at the cover.
The five characters of "Love Metronome" are already printed in front of my eyes.
'So that's the case, no wonder you suddenly came to me and asked this kind of question.
"It seems to be the first volume, so is it not long before Kasumigaoka Shiwa became a light novel writer?"
"Are you afraid that your works will not be recognized by people, so you go to the bookstore to see the sales situation?"
'It really fits the behavior style of boys and girls!'
Knowing roughly what is going on now, Li Yiming chuckled inwardly.
Although he still hasn't figured out why Kasumigaoka Shiwa appears in the world of 'One Punch Man', its existence is reasonable.
This may also be one of the reasons why this world cannot perform traversal simulations!
In some respects.
The current "One Punch Man" world is more interesting than imagined!
"gentlemen?"
Seeing Li Yiming like this, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu suddenly became a little nervous.
The mood can only be described as ups and downs.
Fortunately, Li Yiming didn't make her suffer for too long.
After thinking about the specific situation, he quickly restrained his thoughts, and a faint smile appeared on his face.
"Sorry, I was thinking about something just now, and I was a little distracted."
"You want to ask me for advice on this light novel [isn't it?"
"Um!!!"
Xiazhiqiu Shiyu nodded quickly.
"Actually, the content is not bad, but the technique is a bit green. It seems that it should be a newcomer's work. From this aspect, it is already quite excellent."
"However, there are still some flaws in the details."
"From the current content, it can be seen that the author should have never been in a relationship, so the descriptions are probably all the content of his own imagination.
"That's where the flaws are!"
"Some content can only be understood after personal experience, and then describe it as it is, but in general, it is quite good."
Li Yiming is not stingy with his evaluation.
At the same time, he did not give too much appreciation.
He doesn't particularly like this kind of pure and sweet light novels, which are probably very suitable for girls and some men to read, but he is definitely not included in them.
But Li Yiming had a wealth of reading experience in his previous life, so he can naturally see the advantages and disadvantages.
is that so?"
Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was stunned, and his heart had already set off a stormy sea.
As the person involved, she knows very well that what Li Yiming said just now is all right!
She has never been in love, and she has never had any strange emotions towards any opposite sex.
However, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu still yearns for that kind of sweet love in his heart, which is why the "Love Metronome" appeared.
In fact, most girls yearn for this kind of thing.
Therefore, campus romance light novels have a market in the industry, but they are not particularly mainstream.
Xiazhiqiu Shiyuda is also considered lucky, Wang Hao)'s excellent level of writing and description, coupled with suitable content, will be favored by the editors of the Immortal River Library.
But if you want to sell well, it is not particularly easy.
Li Yiming's advice today has inspired her a lot.
But it is not an easy task to solve these problems.
After all, in order to enrich the content of the work, it is impossible for Xiazhiqiu Shiyu to find a random partner of the opposite sex to increase the material, right?
This is the most annoying part!
But in general, she also got what she wanted.
"Thank you very much, sir."
"Actually, I am a good friend of the author of this work. I will tell her exactly what you have to say about your opinion!"
Xiazhiqiu Shiyu expressed his thanks very solemnly.
Hearing this, Li Yiming just shook his head with a smile, and didn't say much.
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