Lord of the Mysteries

I haven’t been out this month, I have been honestly staying at home, and I’ve been careful with the code, but I’ve encountered some things.

Last week, my eyes were a little inflamed, causing the vitreous opacity to become a bit serious. After dropping a little ordinary eye drops, I still hung up the number to see a doctor. Before leaving, my wife, an ophthalmologist, said It’s not a problem, as long as it’s not a fundus lesion, nothing, I ask what the fundus lesions contain, she said the macula, and then the other forget,

When I arrived at the hospital, the doctor checked that the vitreous was turbid, but the shadow was small, it could move, there was no flash, and the problem was not big. It was that your macula did not seem to be very good. At that time, I was scared of urine and immediately made an appointment for the follow-up examination. The mood at home was low for two days, but fortunately, after the final check, there was no problem, and I would like to check it regularly.

Zhu Jun, if you have high myopia, please remember to love your eyes and use your eyes scientifically!

Well, this month finally pushed the plot to the beginning of the war, and connected a lot of foreshadowings, paving the way for a tense atmosphere. It should be finished in November, at the beginning of December.

Because considering that war is a continuous process, it is impossible to reach a climax like Beckland's smog. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and there are many tragedies, so I didn't use the second part of the writing, just a little rendering. The atmosphere of war and the reaction of different people.

This also leads to the "self-question" chapter that does not have enough pre-emotional foreshadowing. Of course, I did not write the chapter as a climax. For me, it is only a point in the plot structure, it is important. It is not in the sensation, not in the heart, but in the fifth stage. From the beginning to the present, Kline has no big purpose, no strong appeal, and stretches the tension of the later story.

Therefore, what I need is clear, has a certain explosive power, and is nailed into the plot like a nail, tightening the story behind.

In view of this purpose, I finally adopted the repeated questioning method that I did not intend to use in this book, because if you use the side, or the white, implicit method to express, the whole point that needs to be convex can not be used. Clear, this will lead to far less sentiment in the later stories. If there is such a chapter before, the hidden emotions and emotions in the dialogue with Bernardin can not be presented in an understatement. As for others. The way other things talked, I started to write a version, very embarrassing, many times more than asking myself.

Of course, because it is a temporary measure of temporary change, it leads to a lot of narration in that part. It was because I wanted to let the emotions slowly spread out and then tightened. Well, now it seems that it’s too late, sometimes I have to repeat Remind yourself to "restrain" these two words.

For the war, because of the whole style of the previous style, Xiaoke is unlikely to go directly to the battlefield. I will not be able to describe the specific wars in a positive way. At most, two or three battles will be highlighted to achieve the purpose of sketching the situation. Next, Xiaoke, Bernard's efforts and the story of the giant Wang Ting will be intertwined, hoping to write well.

The above is the summary of October, the first chapter has been updated today, seeking the end of the monthly ticket! Cast me to vote for me!

Also, October is the first monthly ticket. Thank you, this should be the first three consecutive years. Well, add more to the middle and late, the key moment of the plot, and then ask for the monthly ticket~